So this is my first posted fic and ciritisizme is welcome. Please review when your done reading. Since this is the first I POSTED I will post more if I can get at least 5 reviews that seems fair. Please tell me what you think and tell me how you think I can improve it if you have any advice.

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If only we could see the stars

If only we could go there

Take a look and fly away

Find the river and sing the song

Pick a rose and give it to your lover

Live forever on the river singing the song

Taking the twists and turns in our blue, blue boat

Flying away down the stream the boat the rose and the river

Once upon a time in a dream we could Love each other

While we rode the river

Stealing kisses under the moon light

Singing the song of life and love

Once upon a dream we could be together

As we rode down the river with a rose

In the blue, blue boat

Once upon a time we could see each other

As we rode down the river

But now we are apart

On different rides

Living a life that wasn't ours

To never see each other

We stole kisses under the moonlight

In our blue, blue boat

Once upon a dream we could be together

Once upon a dream

Tardis Blue Love Song by: TheDoctorsBiggestFanStarrojas


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