So this is my first posted fic and ciritisizme is welcome. Please review when your done reading. Since this is the first I POSTED I will post more if I can get at least 5 reviews that seems fair. Please tell me what you think and tell me how you think I can improve it if you have any advice.
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If only we could see the stars
If only we could go there
Take a look and fly away
Find the river and sing the song
Pick a rose and give it to your lover
Live forever on the river singing the song
Taking the twists and turns in our blue, blue boat
Flying away down the stream the boat the rose and the river
Once upon a time in a dream we could Love each other
While we rode the river
Stealing kisses under the moon light
Singing the song of life and love
Once upon a dream we could be together
As we rode down the river with a rose
In the blue, blue boat
Once upon a time we could see each other
As we rode down the river
But now we are apart
On different rides
Living a life that wasn't ours
To never see each other
We stole kisses under the moonlight
In our blue, blue boat
Once upon a dream we could be together
Once upon a dream
Tardis Blue Love Song by: TheDoctorsBiggestFanStarrojas
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