Okay... I am sitting here thinking (I got 1 review and that was to tell me my sentcing the way I type my sentecessucked. what does that tell me I ask myself? That ethier 1. my idea is stupid. 2. No one likes bad spelling. God am Istupid or what?or 3. I need to revise it.) so I decided to revise it.
Disclamer: Don't own trigun.
"Wh..at" Nick said as he opened his eyes. As everything became focased he relised he was in a bed. A small, pink bed. Suddenly, he heard a crash. He stood up. Then he heard someone speak.
"Nicky, our guest is up. Bring him in for lunch." Said a voice from downstairs that wolfwood did not reconise. It sounded fimilar but, he couldn't place his finger on where he had heard it from.
"Okay" Nick heared Nicky say in a cheerful, upptiy, chripy voice. He heared footsteps coming towrds the door he reached for his cross punisher only to find out that it was leaning aginst the wall by...A COMPLETE REPLICA! His jaw droped at this sight, then suddenly the door opened.
Slowly the door opens to reveil a child like, female virson of him only with blue eyes, smile as big as her heart, and somehow, no matter how he looked at her, she reminded him of Millie. His jaw is now through the floor.
"Mr. its time to go downstairs and eat lunch" Said the young girl who appered to be no more older than 15, through the white wooden door..
"Huh? Where am I?" Nick asked standing up, as he relised he had never seen these people or in this part of Kansas city before.
(Yg:I can't rember any city names besides december and july and well... you know.)
"Standing by my bed." Nicky stated as she stood in the doorway of her room, waiting pationtly for Wolfwood to hurry up.
"What?" Wolfwood asked confused, on how he got there in the frist place, the last thing he remebered was following Vash the Stampede.
"Standing by my bed." Nicky stated as she stood in the doorway of her room, waiting pationtly for Wolfwood to hurry up.
"NICKY!" shouted that fimilar voice from downstairs.
"Come on. Hurry up now, lets not keep Ash waiting" Nicky said as she walked out of the room.
So Wolfwood followed Nicky into the kicten. This house was farily sized house it was a two storie house. The upstairs had three bedrooms, a storage closet, and a bathroom. There was another room but, he couldn't figer out what it was. Downstairs it had four large rooms, and a small bathroom. There was the kichen, the dinning room, the living room, and the family room. As they headed to the kichen he thouht he saw Vash. But, he blew off that thought. Suddenly...
(("Owch")) He had collide with the wall.
"Mister, are you okay" Nicky asked after seeing him run into the wall, simply proving that she was as innocent as ... Millie.
"..." was Wolfwoods reply as the young girl stared at him.
"Mister" Nicky asked yet again"are you okay" Wolfwood just stared at her, she looks so fimilar but at the same time so ... so diffrent.
"Ash, I think he may have something wrong with him." Nicky called to the other room, and then he thought about the innoicence in Nicky's voice.
"Why" called that fimilar voice from the other room.
"Well, he ran into the wall and now hes not talking." Nicky told the voice in the other room.
(("Ash")) Wolfwood wondered.
He heard footsteps heading towrds the kicten. Then he saw ...
"...Vash" Wolfwood stared at the girl walking through the doorway and over to them.
"Vash? Vash, who?" Nicky asked confused "Who's Vash, Mister"
He must of heard my name wrong, my name is Ash. The girl said walking over to him, and the she said "it doesn't look like there's any real damage he just looks a little shook up. So don't worry about it. That may be why he mistaked me for this "Vash" person.
Wolfwoods jaw dropped yet again. The girl who stood over him with a look of concern across her face, was about 5 foot 5 inchs, had blonde hair, aqua-blue eyes and small silver hoop earings. (("But, ..she... she looks...she looks... just like him...")
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