Well
I did say I would write a poem to challenge The
Fifth Champion with
their poem "Dreaded Dreams" so I am writing this.
-TEARDROPS-
Tears drop slowly.
Splashing as they crash onto the grass,
Glistening in a sunsets flame,
Oceans dew, carry memories
Of secrets past,
No one will know.
The cries echo through
The night, but nobody listens.
His bloodstained hands tremble.
Shadows pass through him,
He breathes the darkness.
Winds howl and trees bend,
He only hears silence
And only sees the colours still blur.
Dead to the world,
He falls.
In the moons gaze,
The living corpse lay.
Fearing to rise,
He is consumed by the night,
Thoughts and memories run, looking for the sun.
Found in the suns rebirth,
Locked in his own mind,
They cried for him now,
He isn't invisible any more.
His tears are noted,
But
they are gone.
I guess you've figured who it is so please review and tell me what I should do to improve or something.