This here, is a new story. I got this idea while reading a great book :D This will always be in TenTen's point of view. This also be divided into two parts. Part 1 will be TenTen's childhood, part 2 will be with Team Gai, Neji etc :) I DO NOT own Naruto. So please enjoy and review!
Kohana's Cinderella
Part 1
Chapter 1 Introduction To My Life
October 7, 2009
"My name is TenTen. I am originally from Suna, but I live in the Hidden Leaf Village. My mother died when I was only three in a battle. My father never had a liking for me. He remarried when I was five. My stepmother treats me like garbage. She prefers my brother over me. And she favortizes her own child, who is a spoiled brat since her birth. And that made my father, Haruko, hate me more. My stepmother is Kuniko Zatzihawa. My younger brother is Nori and my stepsister is Umeko Zatzihawa. And this is the story of my troubled childhood."
TenTen was on her way home from school. It was a very rainy and windy day. Her school was over a mile away. While she walked to school, Nori and Umeko got a ride. But meanwhile, their school was closer than TenTen's. At school, TenTen felt wanted. She had friends and she could be herself. At home, TenTen had to do her homework, walk the family dog which always attacked her, tend to the parents' needs, and clean the clothes and cook dinner. And the dinner normally made, she couldn't even eat it. Even though most of the time she eats when everyone else is busy.
And for TenTen only, she couldn't go to her friends' houses, and they couldn't come to her house. Even if it was TenTen's birthday.
Anyway, TenTen was in her room doing homework when Kuniko called her.
"Yes mother?" TenTen asked politely.
"Where is Koko?" Kuniko asked.
"Koko?" TenTen asked confused.
"Yes Koko, the maid. Where did you see her?" Kuniko demanded.
"I haven't seen her today." TenTen answered.
"Liar!" Kuniko yelled slapping TenTen across her face.
TenTen placed her hand on her stinging cheek.
"Go to your room! You will not get any dinner tonight nor go outside to see the ducks in the pond." Kuniko stated.
"Like I have anything better to do." TenTen mutterted under her breath.
"What did you just say?" Kuniko asked.
"Nothing." TenTen quickly answered.
So TenTen headed up to her room. In her room, she locked the door and started to attack her innocent pillow. She hated her stepmother. TenTen sometimes just wished that she could scream at Kuniko and her father. But doing that will get her kicked out of the house. So she just had to live with it for now.
TenTen often heard stories of the great ninja in the Hidden Leaf Village. Though she lived here, TenTen lived in the poor parts. And that made her wonder why her parents have a maid and workers, but not a big house. TenTen just wanted to escape from her hellhole and go to pursue her dreams at being one of the greatest ninjas of all time.
This might be a strange beginning right? But what do you think so far? I would LOVE it if you review. Criticism allowed, no flames :) I'll give you cookies :)