WOO my first fanfic now lets get down to something
1.)This is my first time actually writing a story so nice reviews plz and if not, not too mean reviews
2.)I'm gonna warn you right now. If you're the kind of person who doesn't like real characters from a series kissing up on a fan character thought up by someone then I guess you should leave now (if that made any sense -.-)
3.)It might not be good. But if you can stand horrible stories then enjoy plz.
I do not own any of the characters or content from dragonball,dragonball z,dragonball gt,and so on.
The sound of footprints are heard on a metal surface, panting heard from a red tinted, shaggy white haired girl who is frightened to what might happen to her. She can't run any longer in her shorn clothing of rags, leaning to the side of a metallic wall, thinking why her. This girl has done something she shouldn't have done."Will I even make it out alive?", the girl said not suspecting an answer.
"Well hello, Rouge, I very much doubt that."
"Bojack." She said it almost as a whisper to not be heard. Then Bojack stepped closer and closer, one foot after another then he stopped. Rouge started seeing a gold aura around him, then she started screaming.
"Mama, Mama wake up!"
Rouge's eyes have shot open, her eyes bloodshot, bags under her eyes, she looked horrible. Thank goodness it was just a dream, she thought.
"Mama, is it one of those dreams again?" A young girl said.
Rouge had nodded. She always dreaded each day, just because of what happened to her and her daughter.
So what do you guys think a beginning of a good story or *raspberry* a plop down the sink?
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