Ok... my first chapter of my first story. Have mercy, please!
Thingies. Namco Owns everything. Except what I own. There, that oughta cover it..
I'd really love a review from somebody, I can't tell if this is really good or really crap.
Thanks.
Hm…
Hm… … … Questions weren't needed… It would make sense to ask something, anything about what was going on. But it was unnecessary now… His eyelids were so heavy, he couldn't have opened them if he were to try… Silence enveloped him completely. This was pure bliss…
Voices suddenly began to sound around him, ripping him away from his peace that he wished could have lasted forever. The voices were so badly muffled that they could not be determined while he felt such weakness. Now questions were needed. What was going on? Where was he? Who was he? He tried to move, but found he couldn't. Something was holding his arms firmly in place. He struggled to finally open his eyes with all the strength he could muster. He was surrounded by a blue-tinted liquid and could only barely determine what was on the other side. He uncomfortably shifted as he saw shady figures surrounding him and walking about. One turned to him. After noticing his movement, she turned to another and spoke.
By this time, his senses had improved significantly, and he was well aware that his mouth was covered by some sort of tube that was sticking its way uncomfortably down his throat. And, although his arms and legs were held in place, he could hear them.
"Dr.", she said, "No.4 is awake". The other character walked over to her, and looked toward said 'No.4'. "About time" he said bluntly, then walked over to the tank. "No irregular vital signs… He's breathing fine…". The man was looking at some sort of chart overhead. "Up the dosage by 24 mills, and we'll observe him for a couple of more days", he told her, and she nodded. She went over to the side where No.4 couldn't see. Suddenly, No.4 felt a sudden urge of sleepiness come over him, and, despite his best efforts, he fell soundly back into unconsciousness.
Poor No.4...
Anyways, just thought I'd let ye all know that this first chapter is short- and that that wont happen again. Well, not usually anyway. Promise!