Hi this is my first time I am writing a story so don't kill me. Just tell me what you guys think about it so i can improve it and get chapter 2 out soon.
Chapter 1
It was a god day today as the sun was rising, the birds were singing, the city people talking, trading, and going about their lives, but our favorite blond on the other hand was not having such a great day, because you see he was fighting any enemy that was stronger than the mighty Kyuubi. He was fighting the ban of all rulers...paperwork...
"Why do I have to do this hellish paperwork?!" Yelled the blond who was getting tired of it. "Because you are the emperor, and you need to look over these documents yourself" a samurai with very long hire responded.
The samurai wore a normal samurai uniform, and it was all red with some black stripes on each side of the arm and some blue. He had blood red hair and green eyes with a hint of red in them. He was also the first and the most trusted advisor of the emperor. His name was Kurama.
"but why can't I just use some shadow clones to do it for me!?" questioned the emperor who was getting annoyed by the paperwork which just kept growing! "Because this is not your average paperwork kit...these are reports on weapons project which was started by Karin 2 years ago and we can't just let a random person check them." Kurama responded being annoyed by the emperor's questions. "If I had known that the weapons project was going to give me this much paper work I would have..." the blond said as he stopped when he was reading a certain report. Kurama was about to say something when the blond said "Kurama I am going to the port!" The blond said as he was jumping with excitement. "kit wait you still have to fin-" before he could finish the blond gone is a yellow flash. "what am I going to do with you Naruto" Kurama finishing with a sigh.
Naruto arrived at the docks and made his way to the military section of the docks which was covered by very high wall for secrecy, but that was not the only part which was coved in secrecy. Inside the walls the military port was massive and housed the empires finest vessels, but that was not why he was here. He made his way to a massive warehouse or so it looked like, because was coved with a Genjutsu it was actually a dry-dock. He was walked straight through the Genjutsu, because he wasn't affected by it and he scared the crap out of the 2 guards who were about to attack the intruder...that is after they saw who it was.
"Y-your m-a-a-ajes-ty!" yelled one of the guards who was shuttering and Naruto was laughing his ass off. "Oh man you guys should have seen the look on yo-" before he could he was hit hard by a clipboard. "WHAT HAVE I TOLD YOU ABOUT SNEAKING UP ON PEOPLE!" Yelled the red-head annoyed by Naruto's pranks. "Sorry I was just having some fun Karin" Naruto responded while rubbing the back of his head. "Anyways why are you hear?" asked the angry red-head. "I was reading over your repots and one of them caught my eye..." answered Naruto. "Oh and which one was it? wait don' tell me..." Karin responded, but she knew the answer. "The new ship you have finished the working on a month ago!" answered the blond while jumping up and down like a 5 years old. "I am guessing you want it to set sail right away?" Karin asked even thought she knew the answer. "Hell yes!" yelled Naruto like he was learning some new jutsu. "and the distention is the free bird empire?" Karin asked and Naruto nodded like he was about to get his ramen back which he hasn't tasted for almost 6 years. "Do you think it's wise to show off our new weapon to them?" Karin asked. "Yp I think its wish, because that was at least the East would think twice before invading my empire and the Free Bird empire might also." Naruto responded with a serious ton. Karin didn't ask any question, because she knew that Naruto hated the east with a passion, but he would not attack and start a war, because of his hate. "Very well plus we might learn something about them we know next to nothing about them, but then again they know nothing of use as well. I'll send word that we will arrive in 2 days to them." Karin said. Naruto looked dumfounded "2 Days, but won't it take 8 days even by a vessel?" Naruto asked and Karin got a smiled that would put a cretin snake to shame. "Not with this ship it won't!" Karin was proud of her newsiest invention. Naruto just nodded and headed out back to the palace.
Free bird empire: Palace 2 hours later:
"You highness!" a guard knelled before his empress. "You many rise. What is the reason for you to report to me?" asked the empress with a gentle smile. "A message has been received by the Whirlpool Empire and it says: 'we shall arrive in 2 days by sea to meet and negotiate the alliance and the trade agreement'" finished the guard. "how will they arrive in 2 days? Even by see it will take at the most 8 days" thought the empress. "Thank you for this information you may go" said the empress. "Shikamaru" and a tall boy with black hire which looked like a pineapple walked in. "Hurry up I was having a good time watching the clouds with Temari" said Shikamaru while mumbling 'what a drag' while the empress just giggled. "The Whirlpool Emperor will arrive in 2 days" when she said that Shikamaru was just looked at her with a black face and said "How? It takes 8 days by sea and 15 by land" Shikamaru said it like as-a-matter-of-fact. "I don't know? What do you think?" asked the empress with curiosity on her face. "I don't know, because we know nothing of their empire so who knows what they have." Shikamaru walking away with, but was stopped when the empress asked "Have our spies found anything on Naruto?" she finished and waited for the news eagerly. Shikamaru sighed and said "Nothing so for if we find anything on him I will tell you Hinata." he finished with a sad look in his eyes. "I see..." she finished with her head hanging down. "Well can you tell everyone to get ready for the arrival of the emperor?" she said with a sadness in her voice. Shikamaru just nodded and walked away knowing that saying anything else would just make her more depressed.
Neji was walking as we noticed Shikamaru walking out the empress throne room saying troublesome. "What's wrong Shikamaru?" He asked his friend. "The Whirlpool emperor is arriving in 2 days." this caught Neji's attention "so in 2 days...better prevent him from asking a marriage proposal from Hinata" Neji wondering while Shikamaru looking at him knowing what he was thinking. "Relax she won't marry anyone , because she loves Naruto too much I mean for 4 years our spies have been trying to find him" Shikamaru said reassuring Neji that she won't marry anyone other than Naruto. "I know" Neji said and walked away. "I just hope the meeting with the emperor goes well" thought Shikamaru, because he wasn't a fool. He knew that the Whirlpool empire was somewhat larger and rumored to have a very advanced military and he didn't want them to be enemies if the rumors were true. With that said he walked away to watch clouds with his wife after that he began to ordered to get everything ready for the arrival of the Whirlpool emperor.
