(If we had a map to life everyone would be following the same path. You need to make your own path and go where you want to go. Follow your own direction and yes you might get lost, but you will find your way as long as you follow your dreams and heart.) - Ancient words of wisdom
What if someone from One Piece appeared in Louises world? What if that person was teleported to Louise's world to be her familiar?
Sorry if this is bad I just started to wright fanfiction and this is my second one kind-of. I am wright them around the same time. I would like some tips to make it better and if you give me an idea and I like it I will put it in. I don't know how often I will be updating and if I haven't updated in a month that means it is dead because something unexpected happen, so I had to stop permanently.
Chapter 1- The Beginning of Fates Design
Tristain Academy
It all started at a castle that taught magic to kids from all over the world. The castle is located in the middle of the woods, with a town a little bit away. No, I am not talking about Hogwarts. This is Tristain Academy for young nobles to learn magic. They have to work hard and learn as much as they can so they do not disgrace their families names. They would usually be in class, but they are stand outside of the castle for something very important to the second year students. That would be the Second years Spring Time Summoning, were they will try to summon their familiar to determine what elemental affinity they have.
Everyone was nerves because they are all hoping for an awesome familiar, so they can boost about it to the other nobles and to show their families. One person was more nervous than anyone else. Her name was Louise Francoise Lu Blan De La Valliere. (Ridiculously long name) The reason Louise is so nervous is because she has failed at all the attempts she has made with magic. The best spells she has cast do nothing, but the worst end with an exposition. Do to her success rate being zero she has been given the nickname of Louise the Zero. This is her last attempt to prove her worth by showing that she can do magic by successively summoning a familiar. If she fails she will disgrace her family and be sent home to be married to a man around ten years older than her for the good of the family honor.
After everyone had summoned their familiar it was finally her turn. There was a whole bunch of different familiars. There was the regular cat and dog. There was a horse, owl and even a small little water frog. There were more interesting ones like some kind of eyeball with wings and a fire salamander, which was summoned by Louise's enemy Kirche Augusta Frederica von Anhalt Zerbst. The most impressive is Tabitha's. She was able to summon a Rhyme Dragon, but everyone thought it was just a dragon except Tabitha. It was finally her turn to try the summoning.
Has every one had their turn? Asked Professor Jean Colbert. Not everyone, Louise the Zero still hasn't gone said Kiriche. After she said this everyone started talking about how bad she is at magic and how all her spells end with an explosion. What's wrong, didn't you say you were going to summon the most powerful familiar Kiriche said. Yeah Right, the only thing she's going to do is cause an explosion Guiche de Grammont said. Louise got mad and yelled "I'll show I will summon the most powerful familiar that ever!" You can go now Miss Lalliere Colbert said. Louise walked up to the empty spot and stated to chant.
My familiar that exists somewhere in the Universe
Strong of will and body
That can crumble anything in its path
, but has a kind and loving heart
It is certainly original Kiriche said. I'll say said Guiche. Tabitha looked up from her book and said "Interesting."
That will bring peace to war with its might
I call upon thee, come to me
Familiar of Power
Louise pointed her wand down after she was done chanting and what resulted was what was expected. An explosion accrued. It was so big that everyone got launch backwards about 20 feet, except Tabitha who walk 40 feet away before Louise finished. Louise nearly lost conscious from being so close to the explosion. The explosion was so big that it shook the very earth itself. The even castle shook, scaring everyone inside. The animals were all freaking out from the explosion. People in the closet town felt the ground shack and all the animals went quiet and looked toward Tristain Acedamy as if some kind of premonition. Everyone except Tabitha was completely disoriented even Professor Colbert. Finally after a couple of minutes everyone started to stand up. Way to go Zero you did it again said Guiche. That was the biggest explosion so far Kuiche. I still can't see anything because of smoke said Montmorency Margarita la Fere de Montmorency. After a second the smoke started to clear up and they could see a blurry shadow of something huge. What did she summon it, it is huge said Kirche. It looks like a statue said Montmorency. HAHAHAHA leave it to the Zero to summon a statue, even though I find it an embarrassment to my element it is still funny. Louise was so crushed by her failure that she stood there frozen in shame. "Why? Why couldn't I cast this one spell correct? Maybe I'm a Zero" Louise thought. Miss Tabitha can you please clear up the smoke? Professor Colbert asked. Tabitha raised her staff and waved it to cast a wind spell. The smoke then cleared up in seconds.
What everyone one saw at that moment will be remembered for the rest of their live. Some people fainted, others stood frozen either in shock or fear. The animals didn't do except stare forward for some odd reason, though no one not even Colbert or Tabitha. Some started crying from the shock and one person had a mental break down and collapsed. Montmorency screamed and Guiche fall on his back still facing forward at what he saw. Kirche fell to her knees, hands on her mouth and even Tabitha, who show no emotion was wide eyed at what she saw. All she could say was "Oh my God." Professor Colbert was equally as stuned at what he saw. All he could do was clutch his staff in shock. For what he saw was like nothing he has ever seen. Even under command of Duchess of La Valliere, Karin, Louise's mother, Also known as Karin of the Heavy Wind. Louise was by far the most shock and more. She there too frozen to move, she stood so still you would have thought that time stopped. The only thing she could do was think, Think one thing over and over again. That thought was "What have I summoned. By the name of Brimir what have I summoned?"
So what do you think of my kind-of first fanfiction. It is the first on I posted. The first one I started has barely even reached two paragraphs. I don't know how long I will continue this, but I will inform you if I plan on stopping and hopefully someone will take over.
Can Anyone guess who she summoned? Guess and add an idea to your guess about what you would like to happen in the story at some point. If you guess it correctly I will most likely put your idea into the fanfiction.
The reason I am making this story in the first place was to get use to typing and to help increase my creative writing for college.
A drop of doubt can put the fire of courage out, so always be confident in life.