Sorry my first fanfiction please comment

Annie woke up to see her fiancée sleeping next to her a smile appeared on her face. She couldn't believe that they were engaged, she felt like the luckiest person ever she look at the ring as she got up and started to get dressed. Annie didn't even notice Liam was wake for most of it until he spoke,"Where are you going so early?" As he pulled her into a kiss as he stared to sit up. She sat down beside and replied," I would love to stay but Naomi,Silver and Ade want to take me to brunch which is looking more like lunch now since I slept in." She gave him a light kiss to show she was sorry, he replied by pulling her down onto of him. Sadly she stop,"No No we had sex 3 times last last night,"-"Great lets make it 4" he interrupted but then resumed kissing."I'm sorry I know but I have to go I haven't even seen Ade or silver since the accident so I might as well go." She got up and gave him a deep kiss then left.

At the restaurant, "Annie, why are you so late?" Ade asked as Annie just arrived, "she was problem getting ready let because she didn't want to leave Liam," Annie hugged Ade and Silver and asked Ade about her leg. Ade stopped talking and nearly shouted," you're engaged, Oh My God! I can't believe this. It's hug." She stated looking and admiring the ring, they were talking about how happy they are when suddenly the waiter came over with a bucket of champagne for Annie with a note that said - Hope you will join me for a drink sometime, hope your personality is as beautiful as you x- The waiter pointed to the man who sent it, he was gorgeous looking. Naomi had no problem opening it, Annie finally said, "I can't drink this,"
Referring to the drink as she felt guilty her friends thought something else."Oh My God, you're pregnant!"
Her friends starting asking questioned, " No I'm not pregnant, I mean I can't drink this, I feel guilty like I'm cheating on Liam or something," "Okay we can fix this, Sil go work your magic."Naomi continued, " Well, Ade has Navid, I have Jordan and Annie's engaged you're single, work with me." Silver replied with a rather loud No. Out if the blue the waiter came over and gave Annie the phone number of the man who gave the champagne over, Annie didn't wait to but she felt it would be rude not to so she folded it up and put it in her purse. After paying and leaving the four girls saw paparazzi taking photos if them, they put up their hands to cover their faces, Annie forgot about her engagement ring and held it up, unfortunately paparazzi started asking questions related to her book such as, "Who Are you engaged to?-Are you engaged to Liam Court? -How did you two get back together?" Finally the four girls made it to the car, before that Annie's only response was, "No comment."

In the bar, Liam was putting away some beer, when he heard a voice say ,"Miss your brother," Liam turned round and and stated the obvious, "Charlie"