I'm writing a new story. Okay so it's really extreme so there will be blood and injuries described btw. Here is the short first part!


Tragic

Chapter 1 – Amanda's POV

The wave rapidly approaches. The roar getting louder and louder and the wind getting stronger than imaginable.

I look over franticly and see him. Our eyes lock. We can't reach each other in time.

"FINN!"

"AMANDA!"

And it hits us.


I sit, curled up in a ball in the corner of the shower. The water pours down on me. Each drop bringing back the memory.

Charlene is even worse. She can barely take a damp cloth.

Willa isn't too bad about the water. But she has a lot of little scars all around her body. She fell into depression because of Philby.

Maybeck went insane. He was recently released from the mental hospital. I haven't seen him yet.

Jess has horrible nightmares. She typically screams at night. Sometimes, I do too.

Philby, now Philby was the worse physically.

Finn doesn't even speak. Literally. He hasn't spoke a word since. He is like a robot. He has no emotions.

Me, well I have these things I call "moments". It's where it just randomly and suddenly all comes back and it ends up looking like I'm having a seizure.

So to sum it all up, we're a mess. And it's all because of it.


I scream underwater as a branch goes straight into my stomach. I can't see anything. It's going too fast. The water spins me around, making me lose what's up from down. A tire hits my leg. Everything is swirling around me and or hitting me. That's when the wood plank slices open my left shoulder blade. I scream in pain.

Can't breathe. Can't breathe.

The water slows down enough for me to swim to where I think is up. My head reaches the surface. I gasp for air. I look around and that's when the tree comes. And everything turns black.


So what do you think it's about?

R&R? Or I'll make Tia Dalma invade your dreams.