just as promised I'm restarting the chapters. I will redo most of it. I will be combining the old and the new.
I hope you like the new and improved version of the story.
"Is it almost ready!" A teenage boy was basically jumping up and down.
"Brandon! Can you calm down for a second so I can finish this." A small man connected two cables coming from two enormous machines one to the left side of the room and the other to the right side.
A big generator started up connected to the machine to the right of them. Suddenly a big portal opens up on a medium sized disk, flashing lights of blue, orange and yellow forming a small circle on top of the disk. The colors ended when a big flash of white light exploding from the portal. The portal now looking like you just opened up a pickle jar and inside was blackness.
"Well we got past the easy part." The short man said getting up from behind his desk.
"The easy part?" Brandon said back.
"Yes, the easy part was starting up the D-V, now we have to see if it is safe. We don't know if the D-V will tare you in half or into pieces." The small man said laughing. "Or it may work, who knows?"
"So how will we test it." Brandon asked walking up to the D-V portal that was made trying to peak inside it.
"That's what you're for Brandon, if I go I may die, and you can handle yourself without me. So take this wristwatch. it will record data you find there and will allow you to speak to me on the other side." After Brandon put on his wristwatch and gathered his courage He looked down into the D-V and whistled." Wow, that looked like a drop into nowhere." "That's cause it is Brandon, you're jumping through time and space." He said finishing his notes. "Ok, Brandon. Time to jump."
Brandon walk to were he was right in front of the portal. He did a turn and smiled at the man. "Bye Steve." With that Brandon jumped backwards into the portal.
"I take it he just left." Came a man walking in. "Yeah Migi- you just missed him but the portal is still open." Steve pointed to the opened portal." The unknown man walked over to the portal and stuck his head in. "Hey Brandon if you kill to many people or fuck with the world to much I'll come and get you and rip that ignorant head of your off that fucking body." He yelled waiting for his reply.
"...love you too." Came a solf replay from Brandon.
The Other World
"I almost got it... and better believe it!" A young boy with yellow hair yelled running after a cat with a red ribbon on it's head.
The cat runs faster fearing that the boy is going to caught up and send him back, the cat stop now at the edge of a cliff. The cat turns to see the boy right behind it, the cat can see their's no where to go but down a 60 foot drop. The boy jumps towards the cat, The cat seeing little options left jumped off the cliff but the boy snagged the tail of the beast. Looking down the cat run up the boy and out of harms way.
The boy standing up as well, "now your surrounded." Seeing a pink haired girl and black hair boy coming out of the woods. The Black haired boy shoot forward and captured the cat before it could run away again.
"Nice going Sasuke." The boy jumped up and down. With the weight and the shaking the boy was doing the ground began to crack and soon crumble under the boy.
"Naruto!" The pink haired girl said looking down the cliff to see him but she couldn't because of the overgrowth of the trees.
"We have to do something, Naruto fell off the cliff he could be seriously hurt, or worse." She said rambling to her teammate.
"No." Sasuke said. "A drop like that couldn't have killed a dope like him, his stupidity is like a pillow to him
"Right Kakashi." The black haired boy looks over his shoulder at a white haired man.
"Naruto should be fine but trouble loves to follow him around." The white haired man looks down the cliff. "He is a skilled ninja and we're in a safe area. The walk is almost two days, so if he runs he can make it in a day."
"Well, he should be." Kakashi puts his hand behind his head.
"Then lets go, we've finished the mission, right." Sasuke said walking off holding the cat.
"Sakura don't worry Naruto is a fine ninja and Sasuke knows this, that's why he's like that the." Kakashi said following.
"I hope your all right." Sakura said before catching up with them.
"Ow, ow, ow, ow." the boy said hitting branches on the way down. He landed on his back to the ground.
"Why is it always me?" The boy asked himself.
"They probably left me. Again."He looked up at the cliff and saw no one. Hopping up he made sure everything of him was in one piece but his sides hurt, maybe from the fall.
Suddenly an explosion if colors happen right in front of the boy. The boy could only watch in awe, as rainbow of explosion shot out before his eyes, he dropped to one knees and and shielded his eyes from the colors . Then it stopped and in the middle of where it just happen a boy lad.
Naruto was shocked at the random boy in the middle of a explosion. "Hey, are you all right." Naruto yelled waking him up.
The boy that was on the ground moved. As he got up he started to crack is different body parts, Starting with his fingers, then his arms hearing pops of them going in and out of there sockets. Then his back doing more then a 180 a different sounds of both happened. Finally his neck and with a loud snap from both the left and right side.
The boy turns to see Naruto watching in amazement, the boy smiles and runs towards Naruto waving and yelling. Hello, what world am I in. He asked
"What do you mean." Naruto said back.
"You know, world." He tried to explain with weird hand and arm motions. "And I said I don't know what you mean." Naruto yelled back but the boy was now talking to himself. "Well, seeing as no one I know is here I guess this is a different place." He also looked at his wristwatch and only a number was on it. 338. He turned back to Naruto.
"Hello, sorry about that, my name is Brandon and as you could probably see I'm not from here." He said extending his hand for a shake. "Also you know you had three broken ribs." Brandon walked closer to Naruto and placed his hand on his sides. "Broken ribs, so that's what its called." Naruto said putting his hand on his side. "Wait, it doesn't hurt." Naruto stood back up and felt around his side to make sure. "Did you do this." Naruto said pointing at the boy in front of him. "Yeah it's a habit to fix people in need."
"Wow, thanks. It would have gotten hard going back to the village like that. "What village?" Brandon asked interested. "You know the Leaf village. Maybe two days if we walk."
"What do you do in "The Leaf Village." Brandon asked.
"Well most of the people that live their are ninja's so it's hard so say, it would take way to long to tell you everything." "How about you take the test to become a ninja Brandon."
"But let me tell you the test is going to be hard. Took me years." Naruto said walking with Brandon.
"I think I will do just fine, my body is already adapting to this world.
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