I had an idea for a self insert fanfiction so I decided to try and see if it was successful. It probably wont catch too many peoples eye because it isn't that well done. But the only thing that I have to say to that is try and remember that I'm just starting to type my own fanfiction stories so I'm not going to be that good. I'm still an amateur. I hope that if people read this that they like it and review it, and if there are reviews that say they don't like my story, then the best thing I could say to that is that I tried my best. So please, be patient with me.

Also, I will be starting the third chapter for my other story Naruto's Sudden Surprise, so for those who like that story won't have to wait too long. Please leave a review saying whether or not you liked this story. I appreciate any type of criticism.

I do not own Naruto

You know, I always believed in wishes, but I never thought that they actually came true. I thought that they were something you were told as a kid and kept believing in them to keep your imagination.

This is what I always thought. That was, of course, until my wish actually came true. And to top it off, it started off weird.

Lets start from the beginning.

It was August 31, the last official day of summer(to me). It was late at night that I got bored trying to find anything on my TV, so I tried going on my laptop. Downside is, I didn't know what to search for. So I shut my laptop and looked outside my window. I noticed that the stars were out, so I decided to go outside to look up at them. After getting out, I laid on the grass just staring at the sky.

After awhile, I was going to go back inside, but before I got up, I saw movement in the sky. Looking up, I saw a shooting star flying through the sky. Deciding I was going to make a wish, I closed my eyes to think about what I wanted to wish for. While thinking, I kept remembering the Naruto show and how I didn't really like the story. Knowing what I wanted to wish for, I opened my eyes to still see the shooting star. I closed my eyes again and said what I wanted to wish for.

" I wish I was in the Narutoverse as my own character." I said.

Opening my eyes, I saw that I was still outside. Now, I knew that it was impossible so I don't really know what I was expecting to happen. But after staring at it again, I went back inside to try to go to sleep. Going back into my room, I lay down on my bed, thinking to myself, "Maybe if I made a different wish, it would have come true." After that thought, I fell asleep thinking about my wish.

After some time, I started to wake up. But I realized that something was wrong. One, I wasn't in my bed. Two, it was very dark. Three, I had no idea how I got there. Getting up, I looked around and all I saw was darkness. In fact, I had no idea that I could actually see. Panicking, I started to run straight, hoping that I would find something.

I had no idea how long I ran for. It could have been seconds, minutes, hours. I had no clue. Stopping to take a break, I bent over putting my hands on my knees looking at the ground. I didn't know what I was going to do. Then, I saw a light shining on the floor in front of me. Looking up, I saw something that I could not believe.

Welcome to Naruto

Start Game

I couldn't believe it. My wish actually came true. I never said for it to be like a game, but that thought didn't occur to me when I was looking at those floating words. I didn't think it would actually come true. Granted, I did always want to change the story but I thought that it was impossible. But here it was, impossible looking me right in the face. I didn't know whether to be excited that I was going to be in Naruto or scared that I left my friends and family. But without any idea on how to get back, I decided that since I couldn't go back to my world, I might as well go into the Naruto world. So, with that in mind, I touched Start Game. All the words vanished, only to be replaced by another title.

Create Your Character

I didn't know how old I was going to be so I just made it how I would like it. My character was 6ft tall, 165 pounds, and had some muscle mass but not enough to make him look like a body builder. My character had white hair with black and red streaks in it and blue eyes. Once I was done, another sentence popped up smaller.

Next Page

Touching it, it brought me to more specific things for my character.

Stats

Abilities

Kekkai Genkai

Affinities

Village

Status

Deciding to go in order, I touched Stats first. The words vanished, then were replaced by my stats. It said I had 100 points already available.

Strength:

Intelligence:

Charisma:

Luck:

Chakra:

Chakra Control:

I decided to put 20 in strength, 20 in intelligence, 10 in charisma, 10 in luck, 20 in chakra, and 20 in chakra control. Having finished with my stats, it brought me back to the previous screen. I touched Abilities next. Again it said I had 100 points.

Taijutsu:

Ninjutsu:

Genjutsu:

Kenjutsu:

Fuuinjutsu:

I put 20 in each category. Going back, I then went to my Kekkai Genkai page.

Kekkai Genkai: (3 total)

That surprised me. I didn't think that it would let me have three kekkai genkai. The most I saw was two and that was with Mei Terumi.

Eye:

Sharingan

Byakugan

Rinnegan(Locked)

Jyuubigan?(Locked)

Body:

Dead Bone Pulse

Chakra:

Chakra Chains

Ice Style

Wood Style

Crystal Style

Lava Style

Storm Style

I was surprised that I could get different chakra style Kekkai Genkai, but I could only get one body. Taking some time to think, I decided to get one from each. So I chose Sharingan, Dead Bone Pulse, and Chakra Chains. Satisfied with my choices, I finished and it took me to the list again. I touched Affinities this time and I already had an idea on what I wanted my affinity to be.

Affinities: (3 total)

Now this really shocked me. I had an idea for what I wanted my one affinity to be, but I didn't think it would let me pick three. For a second, I was thinking that this thing was going to have me overpowered.

Water

Earth

Fire

Wind

Lightning

I already knew what I wanted for my first one, so I touched Lightning. But I didn't know what I wanted for my other two. After thinking about it, I chose Wind and Water. Even if I couldn't have it as a kekkai genkai, I hoped that I would still be able to try to do Ice Style. Done with my affinities, I went back to the list and touched the next one.

Village

Village Hidden in the Leaves

Village Hidden in the Mist

Village Hidden in the Clouds

Village Hidden in the Sand

Village Hidden Among the Stones

I wondered why it only had the Five Great Nations but I wasn't too concerned. I knew that I didn't want to go to the Mist, the Sand, or the Stone. So that only left the Leaf and Cloud. After thinking about it, I decided to go to the Leaf. Going back to the list, I was curious about what it meant by Status.

Status:

Civilian Family

Clan Family

Hokage Family

Orphan

Not wanting to get accustomed to a new family, I decided on Orphan. After touching it, I expected to be finished, but instead another thing popped up that I didn't even think about.

Jinchuuriki: Yes or No?

Now I was curious on why it would let me be a Jinchuuriki. I wondered if I could be any one. I thought that it might be a different change of pace if I was a Jinchuuriki and I wanted to see if I could control a tailed beast's power and be able to befriend it. So with that in mind, I chose Yes.

Which one?

One Tail: Shukaku

Two Tails: Matatabi

Three Tails: Isobu

Four Tails: Son Goku

Five Tails: Kokoa

Six Tails: Saiken

Seven Tails: Chomei

Eight Tails: Gyuuki

Nine Tails: Kurama

Ten Tails: Shinju? (Locked)

I was thankful that I couldn't get the Ten Tails. I didn't think I could ever control that kind of power. I immediately thought of the Nine Tails, but then I remembered that he hated the Sharingan so he probably wouldn't help me. I also chose not to have the One Tail, Two Tails, Three Tails, Six Tails, and Eight Tails. So that left me with the Four Tails, Five Tails, and Seven Tails. After some thinking, I decided that I was going to be the Seven Tailed Jinchuuriki. With that done, a new "screen" showed up.

Are You Satisfied With Your Character?

Yes or No

Liking what I decided, I touched Yes.

Are You Sure?

Yes or No

I figured it just wanted me to be certain with my character, so I touched Yes again.

Name Your Character

I tried to think of a good name for my character. Only problem was, I suck at names. So I thought about one that I thought was kinda cool and that I liked, so I "typed" in my character's name.

Name: Kori Okami

Satisfied with my name, I touched Finish.

Create Your Character: Completed

Starting Game...

After I read that, the next thing I knew, I was unconscious again.

And that's it. That is my second attempt at fanfiction and my first attempt at a self insert. I hope some people who read this liked it, but for those who didn't, I would like to say that I'm sorry that I couldn't do any better and I hope you'll give me your honest opinion on what you thought about the story.

I started this story because I always kept saying to myself that I didn't like the Naruto story, and that the fanfiction stories are better. I kept saying that if I could I would change this or that, then I got the idea that I could change anything in the story if I wrote a story where I had my own character in it. So that is where this story came from.

Also, I apologize for my lack of description on the appearance of my character. Since I'm new, I'm not that very good at describing certain things, but hopefully I'll get better with time and practice.

Please leave a review saying whether you liked it or not and tell me why. I helps me correct any mistakes I've made or will make in the future. Thanks for ready my story and check out my other story Naruto's Sudden Surprise.

FrozenFang