Revised Edition of the infamous fanfiction "My Immortal". I have permission from the original author, Tara Gilesbie, to revise, and even finish her fanfiction. I will begin with just the first chapter and go from there if it gets any good reviews at all. I will then try to continue to post a new chapter every week. As I am very busy at the moment I can not promise that it will be updated every week. If I spell something wrong I will generally catch it myself but if I miss one please tell me and I will fix it in the next chapter if I use it again. Chapters will be longer(if possible) and will contain better grammar than the original. If you want to read the original it can be found here: Thank you for reading. -Raven
Chapter 1: New beginings
My name is Ebony Way. My hair goes down to my lower back and is as black as a ravens wings and it has streaks as purple as a violet in it. My eyes are as blue as ice in the cold winter and my skin is as white as the snow. Many people say that I look like the famous Amy Lee, the lead singer for Evanescence. And others say that I must be related to Gerard Way, but I'm not. I am in fact a vampire, but unfortunately my teeth are as straight as a humans. I am also a witch and attend a school named Hogwarts, the school for gifted witches and wizards. I'm in my seventh year here and in slytherin house, but it's only gotten tougher here lately. I wear a lot of black and people think I'm Gothic, but I'm really just a vampire trying to hide from the sun. In example today I was wearing a tight black corset, matching black pants, black combat boots, and my slytherin robes.
I was walking outside of Hogwarts when I saw one of my friends, Draco Malfoy. He was taller than me now. His hair was a dirty sandy blonde color and his eyes were blue-grey. He also wore slytherin robes. He walked up to me and smiled a little.
"Hey Ebony" He said softly
"What's up Draco?" I asked him.
"Nothing much," He shrugged, "But we have class soon so I should probably go."
We hurried off to class then and I made it to mine with a few minutes to spare.
What do you think? Please leave me feedback about this but please do not cuss. So long for now! -Raven