Hi Everyone :D This is my first fanfic EVAR and i would like to know what i could do better so reviews would be much appreciated.
The Son
Chapter 1: The meeting
Stupid dog why did you have to bite. Several minutes ago i got attacked by a dog trying to get some food. It didn't like sharing so it attacked me. Sadly i had to kill it because it got heavily injured. The bite really hurt, i was hungry and very tired. This was not a good day to be Clementine. You could say it had been a bad couple of days with losing Christa and all i hope she's okay tho. I was to tired to move on and decided to rest against a rock for a bit. I almost fell asleep when i could her the growls of Walkers. I got up but I was too tired to run I kept on going forward but for once a Walker was faster than me and caught up to me. It was able to get me to the ground and with all my remaining energy I tried to push it off. It was to strong I was gonna die here…I'm sorry Lee. The Walkers jaws were about to take a bite when its head all the sudden came off. Walkers that were closing got shot with arrows by a stranger while two others removed the Walker off me.
"I'm out grab her and let's go" an older looking man said. A boy about my age lifted me up from the ground and started running. After a couple of minutes of running they started to slow down.
"We in the clear" the boy who was holding me asked.
"I think so" a man in his early twenty's said relieved.
The boy then looked at me and smiled.
"You okay" he asked concerned.
"I-I think so" I replied.
"That's good to hear" he said still smiling "My name is Thomas, these two are Luke and Pete" he introduced.
"Hi" both Luke and Pete said.
"Nice to meet you, I'm Clementine" I replied trying to smile but it hurts to much.
"You sure you okay" Thomas asked me worried.
"Yeah I'm su-" I started but go interrupted by Thomas dropping me.
"OH SHIT she's bit" he said scared.
"It was a dog" I quickly spoke up.
Both Luke and Pete looked at each other concerned not knowing what to do with a "bite-victim".
"I didn't see no dog, Clementine" Pete spoke up.
"I promise it really was" I tried once again.
"Then where did dog go" Luke asked.
"I…I had to kill it" I spoke up surprising the 3 guys.
"So a dog attacks you and you just kill it" Luke asked angrily.
"It was heavily injured I put it out of its misery" I said remembering what I had to.
The dog was impaled by the tent pegs and was struggling to get out. It looked like it was in a lot of pain. I slowly walked up to it and put my knife by its throat. "I'm sorry" I softly said to the dog. I stabbed him and cried out in pain one more time before he died. I stood up and slowly walked away tears burning behind my eyes.
"Either way I wanna take a look at this bite" Thomas said snapping me out my thoughts.
"Dude be careful you don't want her taking a bite out of your neck" Luke warned him.
"She hasn't even turned yet so what are you worrying about" he asked his friend.
He kneeled in front of me and slowly rolled up my sleeve to show my wound.
"Damn that must have hurt" he said looking at me worried.
"It still does" I replied
Thomas took a good look at inspecting it. But he quickly smiled at me.
"I know you were speaking the truth" he smiled.
"So it's not a lurker bite" Luke asked Thomas.
"Nope it's a dog bite" he confirmed to the his friends.
"Phew" Luke said he sounded really relieved "Sorry about before, kid. Was just thinking of protecting my friends."
"I get it" I said weakly. I felt dizzy and all the sudden lost consisness hearing one last curse word from Thomas.