Ok. This is my new HP fic: Fire eyes. I'm going to try to make this a
romance but if you have any suggestions tell me, flames accepted because it
will make my story better. It is important that you read these first 2 ch.s
cause you wont understand anything if you skip them!
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It was a beautiful spring day, the sun was shining and the weather was perfect, too perfect for anyone to ruin. But it wasn't exactly the kind of day Amber (should I change it to Ember?) Rebme had hoped for. Amber had light brown hair past her shoulders, wavy, with natural highlights of red and dark brown, her eyes were light brown and she was tall with fair skin. Well, anyway, it was her b-day and she was turning 6. They were having the party in her big backyard where her 6 guests could eat and play games. The guests were: Naem Olam, a girl about Amber's height with straight black hair and cold icy blue eyes (Amber did not really like Naem but her parents forced Amber to invite her), Rodger Adams, a boy a cm. taller that Amber with short dark brown hair usually up in spikes with light brown eyes, Betty Taylor, a girl that was almost identical to Amber but had strawberry blonde hair and blue eyes, Neville Longbottom, you know what he looks like, Veronica Olam, Naem's younger sister, has the same hair but with warm dark brown eyes. Our story starts, the children had just finished playing 'pin- the-tail-on-the-donkey' (Betty won) when Amber's mother, Lexi, a short woman with long, strait red hair and blue eyes, had called them to lunch. As everyone was heading to the food table Naem started stealing Betty's prize candy and putting it in to her own pockets.
"That's not nice." Amber said, Naem whirled around. "That's Betty's candy you know that!" Naem remained silent, Amber followed her into the food line. "You have to give it back and knowing Betty, she will share with everyone." Amber continued, they were now grabbing plates of food. "Humph." Naem finally spoke, "no way! I want all the candy to myself!" they were now walking toward the tables, Amber glared at Naem, and when she looked into Ambers eyes, Naem's smug look turned to one of terror. Suddenly, her plate of food burst into flames.
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HP does come up! But you need to know this information. Please Review! Review! Review each ch. so I can see if I did anything wrong and where!
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It was a beautiful spring day, the sun was shining and the weather was perfect, too perfect for anyone to ruin. But it wasn't exactly the kind of day Amber (should I change it to Ember?) Rebme had hoped for. Amber had light brown hair past her shoulders, wavy, with natural highlights of red and dark brown, her eyes were light brown and she was tall with fair skin. Well, anyway, it was her b-day and she was turning 6. They were having the party in her big backyard where her 6 guests could eat and play games. The guests were: Naem Olam, a girl about Amber's height with straight black hair and cold icy blue eyes (Amber did not really like Naem but her parents forced Amber to invite her), Rodger Adams, a boy a cm. taller that Amber with short dark brown hair usually up in spikes with light brown eyes, Betty Taylor, a girl that was almost identical to Amber but had strawberry blonde hair and blue eyes, Neville Longbottom, you know what he looks like, Veronica Olam, Naem's younger sister, has the same hair but with warm dark brown eyes. Our story starts, the children had just finished playing 'pin- the-tail-on-the-donkey' (Betty won) when Amber's mother, Lexi, a short woman with long, strait red hair and blue eyes, had called them to lunch. As everyone was heading to the food table Naem started stealing Betty's prize candy and putting it in to her own pockets.
"That's not nice." Amber said, Naem whirled around. "That's Betty's candy you know that!" Naem remained silent, Amber followed her into the food line. "You have to give it back and knowing Betty, she will share with everyone." Amber continued, they were now grabbing plates of food. "Humph." Naem finally spoke, "no way! I want all the candy to myself!" they were now walking toward the tables, Amber glared at Naem, and when she looked into Ambers eyes, Naem's smug look turned to one of terror. Suddenly, her plate of food burst into flames.
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HP does come up! But you need to know this information. Please Review! Review! Review each ch. so I can see if I did anything wrong and where!