Ooh, a Hotohori poem! Fun… What's with me and all the poetry now? Ah, whatever…

We

You
See the outside
Experience life like one should

I
Am a captive of walls
Yet to fulfil my duties I must stay

You
Are free of direction
Can follow your will

I
Follow orders
Am expected to rule all

You
Listen to your heart
Your soul, your mind

I
Must sacrifice happiness
For the sake of my country

We
Follow similar footsteps
Of our fate and destiny

She
Is our destiny
Our hopes and dreams reside in her

We
Are the seishi
She is our saviour.


So, what did we think? I'm still a little, insecure about my poetry… Did we like? Did we hate? I have no opinion, because I don't want to lose a muse! ^_~. Review, please.