Ok. This will be my first attempt at a long story.
Not 1 or 2 chapters, but a lot more.
But yea, come to think of it, I've only written 3 stories. XD
Lol, but still?! I've written quite a few, just that I was too lazy to put it up.
But yea, hope you like it.
Naruto was sitting on his apartment's hard wooden floor and waiting for the instant ramen to cook. It was his birthday, so he decided to "reward" himself with ramen.
Suddenly, Naruto felt his floor shake.
His instant ramen rocked back and fourth, threatening to fall.
Naruto quickly hold it in place.
He let out a sigh of relief after the shake was over.
Earthquake? Naruto thought. (ok if you are really lost now, let me tell you – Japan is really prone to earthquakes because of it's Geographical Position – or something like that. XD)
Nah, not earthquake. Naruto told himself after hearing ear-piercing screams about the village being destroyed by a certain huge snake.
Naruto looked out of the window. 3 enormous animals were near the Hokage Tower. To be specific, they were a snake called Manda, a toad called Gamabunta, and a slug called Katsuyu.
Naruto squinted his eyes and tried to see the person on Manda.
"I KNEW IT! OROCHIMARU!" Naruto yelled, pointing at the man on the snake, although no one else was in his room and he seemed like he was talking to himself.
"Orochimaru… Sasuke… SASUKE!" Naruto was about to jump out of the window but, "AH!" he remembered something.
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1 second later, we find Naruto sitting on the ground, eating his ramen and mumbling something about "eating and stocking up energy before going to save Sasuke" to himself.
- With the Sannin -
The Legendary Sannin stood on their summoned animals.
"Orochimaru. Haven't you been killed by Sasuke?" Tsunade questioned.
"I didn't know you were concerned, Tsunade-hime! Hell yea, I was killed. But thank god I have a disloyal servant that planted me on himself, wanting my power to himself. Oh, sorry, I had a disloyal servant. He died the moment I took over him." Orochimaru replied slowly.
"You! You took over your closest subordinate?! Damn you!" A certain white haired pervert shouted. "GAMABUNTA!"
"Roger." The smoking toad replied and placed it's hand(or do you call it a leg) on his sword and made a powerful leap at the snake and attempted to cut off it's head.
The snake threw it's tail at the toad and, destroying 2 football fields worth of land, Gamabunta fell hard on the ground.
- With Naruto -
"AH! GAMABUNTA!" Naruto shouted as he was jumping from roofs to roofs, on his way to the Sanin, his eyes turning into circles, making a hilarious expression. (Sorry, I can't describe it well, but it's those kind of surprise + a bit of mocking expression.)
Naruto quickened his pace and thought of Sasuke. Sasuke…This person took Sasuke last time...(Ok, this is not yaoi! They're just friends, ok?! Friends.)
When Naruto reached the Hokage Tower, he leapt onto the top level and shouted at Orochimaru, "OROCHIMARU! DIE!"
Slowly, Naruto's eyeballs turned red with a black slit in the middle. Two of his teeth grew longer and he grinded his two rows of teeth together. His nails grew longer. Red bubble came out from his body as he bent down to reach the ground with his hands.
Kyuubi form, one tail.
Naruto dashed towards Orochimaru, leaping onto Katsuyu, running pass Tsunade and leaping onto Manda. The Kyuubi-formed Naruto threw one hand towards Orochimaru. (A/N: Manda is big, so there was some distance between Naruto and Oro)
Orochimaru leapt backwards. "Now, now, Naruto-kun, don't say that! I'm trying to look for Sasuke-kun too, you know? But the difference between us is that you want to rescue him and I want to kill him. And, I've seen that form before. So there's no way you can hurt me again."
"SHUT UP! I WON'T ALLOW YOU TO HURT SASUKE!" Naruto growled. More red bubbles started to form at the back of Naruto.
Kyuubi form, three tails.
"GUUUUHH!" Naruto growled. The Sannin put up their hands to protect their faces from the horrifying chakra.
Katsuyu was barely able to remain on her position, and Tsunade was blown 5 metres back, and nearly fell off Katsuyu's head.
Gamabunta was surprised but holden on to the ground with not much effort. (Gamabunta was thrown further away, remember?) Jiraiya was blown back a little, and said, "This is bad."
Manda let out a growl and "poofed"(They were on Manda's head, remember?) Orochimaru and Naruto started dropping to the ground.
Naruto reached his hand out and the claw formed by the red chakra was enlarged and extended to reach Orochimaru, but when it reached Orochimaru, he "poofed" into a piece of log.
When Naruto reached the ground, he created a crater and looked around for Orochimaru.
Orochimaru was about 25 metres away from Naruto(on the ground), and he smirked. "More, more! Let me witness more! Come on, surprise me! Prepare me for a fight with Sasuke-kun!"
Naruto, upon hearing Sasuke's name, growled one more time and more bubbles formed.
You could hear Jiraiya cursing and Tsunade gasping when they saw the amount of tails.
Kyuubi form, five tails.
Kyuubi's (I shall now refer Naruto to Kyuubi, because it's Kyuubi controlling him now) chakra was now even redder than before. Of course, because it also contains Naruto's blood. The chakra engulfed Naruto's body and threatened to destroy anything that was near it.
(A/N: For those who don't read the manga, when Naruto turns into 4 tails or more he loses he's consciousness, and Kyuubi controls him. And also his skin will be constantly destroying itself because of the powerful chakra, and constantly healing itself because of the Kyuubi's power. By injuring and healing it like that, Naruto's body will weaken and it will shorten Naruto's life span. Also, Naruto will continue to fight despite the great pain he feels.)
Kyuubi growled again, but this time, it was really powerful.
Katsuyu "ahh-ed" and "poofed" and disappeared, leaving Tsunade to drop down.
Gamabunta was blown back a few metres, causing more houses to be destroyed. Jiraiya tried his best to hold on to Gamabunta, but was blown off his head. Just as he was about to be blown away, he hung on to Gamabunta's shirt.
Orochimaru was blown back until he was about 35 metres away from Naruto. He smirked and extended both his hands out and opened his mouth, sticking out a super long tongue. Thousands and thousands of snake were coming out from his hands and tongue.
The Kyuubi just remained there, and when the snakes reached him, the snakes were destroyed by his chakra. Kyuubi didn't wait for all the snakes to reach him. He just ran in the direction of the snakes and attacked Orochimaru with one of it's claws.
Orochimaru, who didn't see it coming, was smirking (haha so stupid) until the Kyuubi attacked him. Orochimaru got a direct hit from Kyuubi and flew for about 50 metres, breaking trees into halves while passing through them(ouch!).
When he finally stopped flying(lol), he put his palm on his chest and looked at the Kyuubi. "I'LL BE BACK!" he shouted, and "poofed".
Kyuubi, seeing that Orochimaru escaped, wanted to go destroy houses but Yamato managed to stop him. (A/N: Ok, Yamato has the First Hokage's DNA in him so he was able to control Jinchuurikis.)
After Kyuubi changed back to Naruto, he sat on the floor, looking weak and worn out. "… What happened?" Naruto asked.
"… You kind of… managed to get 5 tails out... and destroyed half of Konoha?" Yamato answered.
"…" Naruto looked down. He was obviously looking sad. Slowly, he tried to stand up.
"THUD" went Naruto the moment he managed to stand up.
"NARUTO!" Yamato shouted, running towards Naruto and picking him up.
Fin. XD
Decided to end here but if I went according to my draft it would have be longer, but if it went according to my draft it would probably go until 3000+ words.
Yea. So to avoid that I stopped here. :D
So, do you like it?
Review!! (:
