Percy Jackson Son of Odin
Odin king of Asgard was walking on Earth for a leisurely stroll to make fun of the ignorant Greek Olympians. He hated the fact that all they did was bicker each other over power screw and cheat on each other. His thoughts were stopped when he heard a voice screaming for help, and so he ran over he saw 3 hellhounds on the woman and slaughtered them leaving gold dust in their trails. He saw blood, claw marks, and bite marks on the woman. "Please I don't know who you are please help my son. "the lady asked the Asgardian king. "I will do my best to take care of him" she accepted her fate and gave him the baby. She had died he had touched the baby and he saw he was a demigod and the son of Poseidon, he was furious at the stupid Greek gods that power got to their heads and to Odin that power was mere kids play. He touched the boy and saw what the boy would become because he was The Odin All-father, so he called Heimdall and a rainbow bridge appeared to take him to Asgard. Odin was outside where is son Thor and his wife Frigga was, "Who is this Odin?" Frigga asked Odin referring to the boy who was no older than 9 months. "His mother had died by hellhounds and she asked me to take care of him and I couldn't say no but when I touched him I realized he was the son of one of the Greek gods Poseidon". Frigga and Thor had faces of disgust at the mention of Greek gods "I shall make him Immortal and make the ignorant so called Gods of Greek suffer or change them to learn the errors of their ways." But just as Odin was going to make the baby immortal he was stopped by a bright light as soon as the light dimed he immediately bowed. Frigga and Thor were wondering why he was bowing Odin signaled them to bow and they did. "This is lady Chaos the creator of everything". They had surprised looks on their faces "What brings you here lady Chaos?" Odin asked, "My father Helix has blessed this boy with Immortality and given him domains also Items." "What are these domains and why lady Chaos?" asked a very curious king of Asgard, "He will be the god of Justice, Time, Loyalty, and Portals. Since he has very powerful domains I have made him weapons they are the helmet of unlimited knowledge to let him gain a battle strategy in an instant, a watch that can transform into dark void metal (hardest metal ever created by Chaos), a black Pegasus (that was so dark you could see nothing) that can only be called by the boy, and finally a pair of glasses that could transform into any weapon he wanted." replied lady Chaos, "We shall raise him to be a caring, strong, and respectful person." said Odin, "He will go through tough and dangerous trials that await him when he gets older." She had said before she had left. "What should we call the baby?" Thor asked his father "Perseus" said Frigga that gained a smile on both Thor and her husband's faces. "Perseus God of Justice, Time, Loyalty, and Portals also Prince Of Asgard!" exclaimed Odin.
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