Author's Notes: For those who decided to ignore the summary and STILL read this story: I will warn you that the grammar and spelling is bad. If you complain about the spelling and grammar, then that is your problem. Please read the rewrite instead! It's better, I promise! But if you keep reading...well I warned you. Enjoy the story I guess if you STILL decide to read this.

...but seriously check out the rewrite.

The fire works crackled above the Luigi Circuit and under the clear blue sky. The crowd's roar can be heard across the figure-8 circuit. They were excited about the final race that featured all of the ones that are representing the Mushroom Kingdom for the Super Smash Bros. Brawl.

The six racers focused on the Lakito who is going to make the signal.

"Hey! Wait for me."

The crowd and the racers turned their heads towards the source of the childish voice, Bowser Jr. On the crowd watching the mysterious child were Link and Zelda. They came all the way from the Hyrule Kingdom so Zelda cam supports her friend, Princess Peach.

"Who is that?" asked Link in his laid back position.

"I think it is Bowser Jr., Peach told me that he looks a lot likes his father, Bowser." explained Zelda.

Link closely examined the Koopa child. He does look exactly like his father, except that Bowser Jr. is much smaller and he carries his red hair in a pony tail. He also wore a bandana around his neck.

Bowser Jr. placed himself with the other racers. All of the racers now focused on the Lakito.

The light flashed red: the racers gripped the steering wheel. The light flashed yellow: the racers held their foot above the gas pedal. The light flashed green: the racers smacked the gas pedal.

That entire can now been seen on the start line is the exhaust fumes from the cars.

Mario was barely in the lead as Bowser was closing in on his blind spot. Bowser sharply turned his wheel to smash his car onto Mario's. Because of the enormous weight of Bower's car, Mario's car lost balance. His car decelerated, causing Peach and Yoshi to race ahead of him.

All of the racers went through the item block and received an item. Luigi took out the mushroom he received and accelerated, but Wario threw a red shell at Luigi, causing Luigi to flip over from the impact. Wario raced ahead of Luigi.

Bowser jr. was in last place, but he still held onto his determination. Bowser jr. raced towards Luigi, but Luigi used another mushroom, but he lost control of his car on the sharp curve. Luigi turned the steering wheel, but merged onto the grass, casing him to lose speed.

Bowser Jr. passed Luigi and took out his red shells. He threw all three of them and it struck Wario, Mario, and Peach. All three of the racer flipped and lost their speed. Bowser Jr. raced ahead of them.

Yoshi was closing in on Bowser. Yoshi took out his green shell and calculated his aim. He threw the shell but Bowser countered it with a banana peel.

Bowser turned sharply on the curve and used his power slide to gain extra speed. Yoshi did the same thing. Suddenly, Wario crashed all of the racers ahead of him using the star he grabbed seconds ago He is now gaining up on Yoshi.

Poor Luigi is now in last place, but he took out his item that he just received from the block. Suddenly, a lightning struck all of the racers, except Wario who still had his star power.

Warrior ran over Yoshi and Bowser and crossed the line that made him into his second lap. Wario grabbed an item which came out to be a "useless" banana peel. He quickly discarded it. Bowser, too focused on trying to catch up to Wario, slipped on the banana peel and spun around. Yoshi and Peach raced ahead of Bowser. Mario threw a red shell at Bowser and sped ahead of Bowser. Luigi quickly followed.

All the racers are now on their third and final lap. Wario remained in first place followed by Yoshi, Peach, Mario, Bowser and Luigi. Bowser Jr. remained dead last.

All the racers are now closing in on each other, except for Bowser Jr. who was way behind. The racers grabbed their items. Then, cars were flying everywhere. Shells were fired, banana peels were tossed and Peach panicked when the blooper ink splattered her face. Yet, all the racers, except Bowser Jr., were close together.

The racers passed the curve and more items were thrown when they passed the item block. The racers cluttered more into each other, throwing their items like maniac.

Bowser Jr Still had his confidence, despite being in last place. He passed the item block and he flashed a smile. The crowd grew tenser as the racers cluttered like at stampede. The toads quickly took out their camera to prepare a photo finish.

All, the racers concentrated on the finish line after they passed the final curve, but a bo-omb stood right in front of the finish line. All the racers flinched in fear and the bo-omb exploded. The racers flew into the air and Bowser Jr. passed the finish line.

"That was some race!" exclaimed Link as his heart raced from the suspense.

"Wow, what a cunning child." said Zelda

"What do you mean?" questioned Link

"He planned the whole thing from the start. You see, the racers get better item when they are behind. Thus, Bowser Jr. remained behind, though occasionally he moves ahead to reduce suspicions."

"How do you know all this?"

"He smiled when he grabbed his last item which happened to be a boom. Plus, he never worried when he is last. On the contrary, Bowser Jr. was actually confident."

"Wow, I guess I would have never thought of that.

"Same here, we should go see Peach."

All of the racers, except Bowser and his son, gathered around the toad that captured the photo finish. Though Bowser Jr. officially won, the second and third place needed to be rewarded.

The toad, who stood at the side of the start/finish line, examined to photo.

"It seems that Mario finished second and Green Yoshi finished third." announced the toad.

A pink toad, Todette, walked up to Mario and handed him his trophy. Yoshi smiled at Mario, he too received his trophy, though it was much smaller than Mario's.

"Ha, ha!" gloated Bowser Jr. as he pulled his ENORMOUS trophy on his red wagon.

Mario gritted his teeth and balled up fist. Yoshi's eye twitched.

"Don't worry Mario, you can still prove to be the best in Super Smash Bros. Brawl!" reassured Peach.

Mario's eyes flashed in determination.

"Yes! I will be the best in Super Smash Bros. Brawl!" yelled out Mario.

Link, who came to congratulate Mario, rolled his eyes. Bowser Jr froze from the words that came out of Mario's mouth.

"c'mon!" waved Bowser.

Bowser Jr rushed to his dad. He turned his head and looked at Mario pensive.

"get in the Koopa Cruiser!" demanded his father.

The Koopa Cruiser is from Mario and Luigi Super Stars Saga. That is a great game!

Welcome to my second fanfic! How do you like my first chapter? It may seem out of genre, but the romance/hurt/comfort will come! The story have to be developed before the conflict can be introduced!

- starrgrl

Please review! I always respond to readers!

P.S

The Mario Kart race was inspired from the Mario Kart DS, not wii. I don't not have the Wii because it is always sold out!