Note:
Hey guys and gals who are about to start on reading my fan fiction. For those of you who already read my fan fiction might see that this chapter had slightly changed. Well that is because looking at the story stats and traffic most people get stuck on the first couple and give up, shame on you people! Everyone join in and shame this people who give up on others after reading only two short chapters! 1, 2, 3 SHAME. Right now that is out of the way those who are just reading the first couple jump to about Chapter 7/8 and read from there as that is when I was starting to get advice and beefed out my chapters abit more. I am going to go over the first couple of chapters and not change it as such but just beef it up more to make it longer and more appealing to those giving up on my fan fiction.
Second thing I would like to note is this is not exactly a sequel. This is a new series of fan fictions that takes the characters from Jaffaarchfiends "Dawn of Twilights Dusk" Fan fiction and a new story is written about them. Me and Jaffa are close personal friends as he only lives a street away from me so we have discussed this and everything is ok, before anyone asks. This does not mean you need to read his first, the storyline is different just the characters, card/decks, and concepts are the same. If you read his and you read mine, which I recommend because his is a good read once you see the storyline, and well mine I just like cause I am so proud of myself for actually doing something and releasing it and not to mention I was told I was a failure at English and could not pass it for my life. Which if those would like to know I passed it perfectly and rubbed it in that stupid teachers face. =] Also please note that this is Season 1 of YuGiOh HR. Once I have done this I will probably go to my next Season so ideas are now open guys! Just leave me a comment or send me a message.
Another thing to note is that the duels use Anime life points and some of the official cards are changed to suit the lower style of life points. There is a huge number of created cards in this fan fiction, but that is because I want to make my fan fiction different and not use all the standard cards, although there is alot of the official cards used, just some I made up because I spend alot of time on Google images and and wanted to incorporate my time on there with the fan fiction I am writing now. Finally could I ask you to please please please please, pretty please with the cherry on top review my work as I would like to know if I am improving, thank you. Please note there that all constructive criticism is welcomed. Not reviews telling me it's 'shit' I would like to know why you thought that and give me a bit more, thank you.
I think I have kept you reading all the side notes apart from the final part which is a wee disclaimer. So you can pretty much skip the next paragraph and dive straight into my fan fiction. Please enjoy it guys and gals. I have been up to seriously stupid late times writing before and hope that many of you enjoy it. =]
I do not own any rights to the Yu-Gi-Oh! TGC, OCG, anime, or Manga, which are registered trademarks of Konami (or whoever currently owns it). I am an independent author not affiliated with Konami (or whoever currently owns it), and am not an employee or representative of them.
Introduction:
"Release me" A deep voice boomed from the darkness.
"Release me from my eternal prison in the flames" It continued to shout.
"You my chosen elite warriors"
"I send you to do my task"
"Spread my corruption through the stars so that one day I will rise and take my place as ruler of the stars" The voice laughed.
At the beginning of time before the galaxies and stars even existence two powerful forces rules over all. These two powerful forces were governed by the might of the masters of the elements. These elements are what bound the the very fabric of existence together but did not interfere with the forces. Through time and argument the two powerful forces grew apart and began to fight with each other. One of the forces wanted the rule all to himself while the other wanted to protect all those. Eventually two sides were created, the celestial forces of the light and the demonic forces of corruption. These two forces are now better described to me and you as Heaven and Hell. War broke out between these two forces that could lead to the end of time itself with each side growing more and more powerful by the second. The masters of the elements who swore never to interfere in the lives of the forces finally decided to interfere and put an end to this never ending war. They decided to split up the two forces and lock them away in prisons. The celestial forces were pushed up into the world above while the demonic forces were sentenced to the blazing fires of below. In an attempt to keep the forces from escaping the masters decided to create a galaxy of plants and stars using their powers which bound the fabric of existence together. After billions of years life started to grow on planets and civilisations started to form. These civilisations began to find ancient inscriptions embedded onto rocks, this soon turned out to be a bad thing. The demonic forces soon found out that these inscriptions were the keys to their prison below and soon began to find ways of spreading their corruption through the galaxies. As a result of this War, Terrorism, Violence, Robbery, Murder and so much more was born into the minds of people. The celestial forces began to weep in their kingdom and soon began to find a way to fight back. They began whispering and sending messages to people in their heads and then Religion and Faith was born to combat the spread of the corruption. The masters who had sworn never to interfere again found that if this was to come about and the ancient war was to resurface then something must be done. They sealed there powers into special marks and then embedded their power into the bodies of selected humans who became known as the chosen. Since the beginning of time this war has raged on and now the time for action is upon us. Will the chosen awaken in time to stop the demonic forces or will the celestial forces interfere once more and destroy everything in existence?
Chapter/Episode 1 – 'A New World'
"Hey! Alice!" A young man cries as he runs towards a girl.
As the girl turned around you could notice her slim figure and smallish face. Her long blonde hair picked up in the wind and covered her small mouth and deep green eyes. She was wearing a short black skirt and a white shirt with a black jacket covering it, her school bag slung over her shoulder. She drew a smile when she noticed the man running towards her.
"Oh, Hey Shaun" she said softly.
The man, now known as Shaun, stopped in front of Alice; He bent over and began gasping for breath. He was wearing a pair of black trousers and a similar white shirt with black jacket, although the jacket was an official school one unlike Alice's it showed a school crest on it.
"How come you didn't wait for me Alice?" Shaun questioned in a puzzled tone.
"I told you! If your late, I won't wait for you" Alice began to rhyme off.
"Give me a break Alice" Shaun sighed as he stood up straight.
"We better go now Shaun, we will be late again" Alice said as she checked her watch.
Alice and Shaun began their walk to school, as it was the only school left after the city was destroyed in the battle with the Dark Signers they had a very long walk. The city had not changed much. I was being rebuilt using photographs and ideas from the old city before it was destroyed.
"So, any news about your parents" Shaun questioned as they walked through a slim alleyway and past the old security building.
"No, I have not. It's worse though, my granny will not tell me anything" Alice said without looking at him.
"Same as last time then"
Just then Alice stopped.
"Will it ever change Shaun" Alice said, now looking gloomy at the floor.
"I'm sure there is something linking to your parents or even there death" Shaun began, realising what he had said has sent her off again.
"It's ok, there is nothing I can do right now" Alice said as she began to slowly walk again.
"Maybe there is" Shaun blurted as he walked up to Alice's side.
"What do you mean Shaun"?
"Well the old Library has just reopened on the other side of the city; we could go there see if there is something that hasn't been destroyed that will link you to your parents"
"Just drop it Shaun, look we are late for school" Alice began to perk up.
"Damn, we better hurry or we will be in trouble again" Shaun looked at his watch
"If only we had a D-Wheel like the others do" Alice chuckled
"Well you know I have one" Shaun looked at Alice
"How can you count that, It doesn't even have an engine" Alice laughed
"Haha" Shaun sarcastically sounded off.
"Maybe we can make jokes about my non functional D-Wheel after we get to school on time"?
Alice nodded in agreement as the two of them rushed through the streets of the recently reconstructed Domino City. As they ran they passed the new Duel Stadium built by the NKC (New Kaiba Corporation), Alice caught of glimpse of a man dressed in a full black cloak with a black hood masking his face. There was symbol on a chain of his that was hanging out of the cloak but she couldn't tell what it was however she got a feeling that he was a threat and she could feel a slight pain on her right arm.
The two finally reached the school gates only to be welcomed by a locked gate and the headmaster standing there with a look of disappointment and anger on his face.
"Well, well, where have you two been"? He asked.
"I'm sorry sir, we just have a real long walk and.." Shaun was interrupted.
"And, let me guess, you live so far away? How sad, maybe you should leave earlier or get one of those bikes you kids are rolling around on!" A look of rage began to fill the Headmasters face.
"So what is your excuse Alice? Or am I expected nothing from you again"? The headmaster questioned.
Alice just looked at the floor, she had nothing to say to this guy, heck she didn't even want to be here, the only reason she was there was because her Gran wanted her to get good grades and get a job although NKC had offered her a job long again but had to refuse it.
"Just like your parents, they slacked off and were always late too!" The headmaster shouted.
At this point Alice snapped. If anybody talked about her family she would go mental and always has done since she could remember.
"SHUT UP!" she yelled as she pushed the headmaster to the floor and charged off into the city.
"Wait up, Alice!" Shaun shouted.
The headmaster got up, his face red with rage.
"Get in that school right now boy! You will be in detention all afternoon and then again for the next month" the headmaster screamed.
Shaun; dipped his head down and slowly headed into the school building as the headmaster marched behind him.
Meanwhile, Alice was wandering back towards her house. Her Gran was going to kill her, but she usually let her off with the excuse of being angry over her parents. But that wasn't what was drawing her to walk that way. Alice was curious as to why she felt connected to the man who was standing outside the duel stadium. She spotted the Duel Stadium in the distant and began walking towards it; however there was no pain in her right arm at any time. As Alice arrived at the Duel Stadium, she looked around for the cloaked man. She eventually spotted him around the side and headed in that direction.
"I figured you would come" the cloaked man spoke
"Yeah? Well I guess I have something to ask you" Alice replied.
The cloaked man chuckled.
"I see, if it's who I am, I'm sorry Alice but I can't tell you, it's too early" the cloaked man spoke.
"Hey, how do you know who I am?" Alice questioned.
"In time, you will learn" the cloaked man replied.
Alice noticed that the chain with the symbol was gone from around his neck.
"However" the cloaked man began to say
"Should you beat me in duel, it may be your first step in learning the truth"
"The truth"? Alice said raising her tone to a questioning one.
"I will tell you no more"! The cloaked man raised his voice as a duel disk activated from under his cloak.
The man slowly raised his right arm from under the cloak to reveal a normal activated duel disk.
"Well, if that is how it's going to be then" Alice slipped on a duel disk from her bag and inserted a deck from her deck box. The duel disk activated and shuffled her cards for her.
The cloaked man let out a slight chuckle.
"DUEL"! they both shouted.
Author's Note:
Well that is Chapter 1 quickly done. Just a chapter to get my feet wet with writing fanfics. What did you all think? The duel will appear in the next chapter so stay reading! (Stay Tuned sounded a bit weird since this aint tv)
Next time on Yu-Gi-Oh HR:
'Time to duel!', 'You knew my father?', 'Take this with you'
Episode 2 - 'Heart of the Cards'
