AN: Hello, Those who are new here won't realize the difference but to whomever has already read this chapter, I have changed it, It's no longer Kakashi, I'm changing him for Itachi. Anyways to those who are new, WELCOME and enjoy my fanfiction :-D
Chapter one
In Konoha hospital there lies a boy who is unnamed and unknown but he has been in a coma for the past seven years of his life. He is currently at the age of eleven, and he was expected to stay in a coma for the rest of his life the only reason he was still kept on life support is because the current hokage didn't have the heart to kill of a boy just because there is a chance he won't wake up.
It was a good thing because on the day the shinobi academy restarted this boy's situation within the hospital started to change as his life signs started to show his brain activity was increasing showing he was very slowly coming out of his coma. This day is the day in which we join his life and we find within his hosptial room the Hokage and a man with long blonde hair dressed in grey combat trousers and black top with a flak jacket over it.
"lord Hokage are you sure you want me to delve into this boy's mind to try and wake him? He seems to be coming out of his coma on his own" spoke the man with blonde hair.
"yes Inoichi, this boy has been in a coma for the past seven years and he may be recovering from his coma but it will still be a few months before he is fully awoken. I believe if you can help him out of his coma it will be better than sitting here and waiting for him to awaken himself." The Hokage said with a voice of wisdom.
"Hai lord Hokage, I will see if I can get into his mind this time. Last time i tried when he first came into the village his mind had a mental barrier that even I could not penetrate." Inoichi answered. Following this he went through a few handsigns and finished with making a triangle toward the boy on the bed 'Mind transfer Jutsu' he thought as he closed his eyes.
The scenary surrounding Inoichi went black as he kept concentrating for a few more moments, during this time a grey wall was rapidly approaching him. He kept his eyes closed as the wall kept approaching, only when the wall got close did it slow down. When the wall was but a meter away from him did it finally come to a halt and infront of him there was a door.
Inoichi opened his door and slowly raised his hand to open the door. At first the door resisted the mans attempt to try and open it but after applying a bit of force inoichi flung the door open. Inoichi gazed into the doorway and saw that the inside of the door was much more different than the outside. Outside the wall was a dull gray but inside the door opened up onto a bright green meadow that had various flowers growing in it.
Stepping into through the door Inoichi got a better look at the meadow, once he got in the door his breathe hitched and the sight that beheld him on the inside. The door closed behind him and dissappeared from view without Inoichi noticing as he looked around there was a moderate sized lake off to his left that was fed by a river that came from what was "north" for inoichi. As he saw it the river stretched all the way toward a waterfall that was within a mountain range about a mile away from him, another river stretched out from the lake and went through the "center" of the meadow and in the center of the meadow stood a huge oak tree surrounded by a few pine trees. The river carried on going off to the left and went into what could be described as a sea because inoichi could not see the end of it. Looking up he saw the sky was clear with a few clouds here and there.
Bringing his focus back to the middle of the clearing before him he saw something slightly off colour at the base of one of the trees. Thinking that might be the boy he's currently here to find he took off at a jog toward it. It didn't take Inoichi long to get to the trees, as he was getting closer he could slowly distinguish the odd colouring and the closer he got the more it looked like the little boy that he just saw laying in a hospital bed.
Getting closer to the boy he noticed the boys' eyes were closed and he was gently breathing showing the boy was asleep. Inoichi approached quietly as to not startle the boy awake. The closer he got the better look at the boy he got.
The boy had dark red hair that fell down to his shoulder and the top of his hair was blown backwards and shorter than the rest of his hair as it stood up in spikes. Even within the boys mind his body looked very malnourished as he had been without movement for seven years.
Inoichi kneeled down next to the boy and gently placed his hand on the boys shoulder and shook his slightly. The boy slightly stirred and as his mind was coming back he felt the hand of a stranger upon his self and woke with a start that made Inoichi jump slightly so his hand moved from the boys' shoulder. The boy was now staring at Inoichi with a set of deep purple eyes. The boy just sat there staring at Inoichi for a moment.
"Hello, my name is Inoichi Yamanaka, I'm not here to harm you but to help you." Inoichi spoke first. The boy however just stared at Inoichi his gaze not wavering but he showed no signs that he would respond to the man. "you are currently in Konoha Hospital and I'm one of the Shinobi here that is assigned to try and help you get better. May I please know your name?"
The boys closed his eyes after this in concentration "M-my n-n-name is Yuno" the boy spoke with a croaked voice that showed it hasn't been used for a while.
Inoichi smiled as he heard the boy talk "now then I must give you some bad news as you have been in a coma for the past seven years. The only reason I am here is because you have made enough progress in your treatment for me to enter your mind and try and help you wake up from this coma and try and find the reason you went into one in the first place." Inoichi told Yuno and to the boys credit he just nodded in concentration. "If you can tell us what happened if you can remember anything, because we found you passed out on one of the roads that led to Konoha and you were quite badly injured it was a surprise that you was even able to walk considering the way your body was." Inoichi finished.
the boy sat there for a moment thinking and as the boy was thinking the scenary started to change. Looking around Inoichi saw the meadow slowly start to deteriorate and was getting replaced by a forest of trees. Around the two a house started to rise and Inoichi heard the boys voice "I-I was at home with my mum and dad and it was raining very heavily outside" after he said that the sound of thunder boomed overhead and lightning flased through one of the windows.
Inoichi found himself with Yuno in what looked liked a kitchen within a house and rain was pounding against the windows. "my mum and dad was in another room and i was eating my breakfast. there was a knock at the door." With that Inoichi heard the knocking come from the other room. "Thats when things went bad. I think my daddy answered the door as I heard him say hello to the people at the door. Not a second or two later though I heard my mummy scream from the other room followed by a thing thumping against the floor. I ran to my mummy, i never heard my mummy scream like that so i was very scared. I-I-I wish I never went to her." Inoichi was listening to the boy but was also concentrating on his surroundings as they seemed to follow what the boy was saying he could even hear everything the boy heard.
"i saw my daddy on the floor and all this red watery stuff coming from him and my mummy was on her knees. There was these men standing in front of daddy. The one in front had something long and pointy in his hands that was dripping with the same red stuff that was around my daddy. I had to have made a noise because the men and my mummy looked at me and my mummy looked so scared and she came running to me shouting at me to run. B-B-But i couldn't run, my feet didn't move, I was scared, i didn't know why my mummy was scared and why my daddy was laying face down in the red liquid but something was telling me it was bad, very bad. My mum was so close to me when her face went wierd and no longer was scared but she fell, fell to the floor infront of me!" the boys' voice was in a tone of complete sadness up till that point where it got a tint of anger into it
"My mummy fell and there was pointy things in her back, and she was no longer moving! whatever those pointy things were they had hurt my mummy badly! and I knew the big men were the ones that had hurt my mummy! I got so angry at them and I felt something deep in me, something that wanted me to pay attention to it. After I concentrated on it I can't remember what happened." the boy went silent as the scene carried on playing for Inoichi. It was clear that the boy did know what happened but was locked up somewhere his where the boy couldn't reach.
Watching the scene unfold infront of him Inoichi saw the boys' eyes change from there normal deep purple to have two points of light red come from the outer edges of his eyes and spiral into the iris's. Following this a sudden burst of energy the boy closed his eyes and had taken on a blue glow and had a ring around him made out of purple energy that went up in little strands. The little strands were waving around and whilst this happened the men were so shocked that they didn't realise the threat that was occuring in front of them.
The little strands started to curve towards the boys back in two points at his shoulder blades. At the point at which the strands were touching the boy started to glow brighter than what he was already emitting, from the glows two points started to grow upwards. The points then took a rather drastic change in direction and headed back down. Once they reached back too where the glows started from, but were about a foot away from the boy, the points stopped glowing and started to grow what looked like feathers down the spindles that extended from the boys back. The feathers were a redish black colour and looked very similar to that of a falcons feather.
The men carried on watching in pure fascination and some started to think that if instead of killing the boy they could catch him instead sell and him on to the highest bidder, because who wouldn't want a boy with wings?
Once the boys' wings finished growing the spindles of purple energy went back to wavering around the boy. He opened his eyes to show the pupil itself had gone into a slit with the same colouring it had before he closed them. "Shoton - Crystaline Sword" was all the boy said and it carried a weight of deep sadness and burning anger. The Blue energy then focused on the boys hand and started to swirl around his hand.
A sword made out of a blue crystal started to form within the boys hand. The sword grew to about two thirds of the boys' size and had a very slight curve to it. The guard on the sword grew to the style of the boys wings.
After the sword had finished growing the boy unfurled his wings and his wing span was about a meter in both directions, which compared to the boy was quite big. It was at this point that the men actually realised the boy to be a threat and moved to get their weapons drawn.
The boy gave one beat of his wings and launched himself forward whilst they was raising their swords to get them into a defensive position. The boy got to the first man and sunk his blade across the mans chest before the man could even raise his blade. The man next to the one the boy had just cut into raised his blade and blocked the follow up blow the boy gave after cutting down the first man.
Another man tried cut the boy as he was being blocked but the boy had used one of his wings to swat the man away. The man only went back a tiny bit but it gave the boy enough room to then strike the man he was currently crossing swords with down with a quick movement to redirect the man's guard to a position he could quickly pull away and plunge his sword into the mans chest.
Yuno swipped his blade out and spun to his left and carried the spin on till he was facing the right where his blade collided with that of one of his adversaries. Sparks flew from the collision and the enemies tanto had a crack that went halfway across the blade. Yuno drew his blade back and struck again at the blade shattering it in half and he kept his momentum up and the blade then sunk into the mans neck.
The boys attention then went toward the that was still standing in the doorway and he held his hand up toward him. The man eyes opened as he felt the boy build up a mass of chakra. "Shoton - lance of crystal" Yuno muttered darkly and his hand glowed and multiple lances shot from his hand with high speeds all aimed at the one last bandit.
The lances pierced into the man in multiple places each with a large splatter of blood. One pierced his stomach, another his shoulder, another into his leg and last into the mans brain. More lances were shot but missed the man and some scraping various points. With no more enemies around Yuno screamed in pain with a very clear anger and he ran as fast as he could, taking flight toward a seemingly random direction.
He kept going and using his chakra to infuse his wings to fly even faster, he came to a road and started to fly over it under tree level. Crying as he flew and his chakra was starting to waver and exhaustion was setting into the boy and he was starting to regain his sense. The regain in his senses and the unfamiliar appendage he was trying to control caused him to fall and tumble across the floor losing consciousness.
The memory faded and the world around Inoichi returned to the open fields and bright skies. The boy in front of him was now standing and the wings that he hadn't noticed nor seen were outstretched. "Inoichi-san, I thank you for bringing me around. Until your arrival I couldn't remember much or even move, but now I feel more focussed." The boy stated with a previously unspoken maturity and this had taken Inoichi by complete surprise.
"Y-You're welcome Yuno-kun" Inoichi stuttered but then he quickly regained his composure "Wait what brought upon this sudden change in attitude?" He asked now confused at the boy in front of him as his attitude suddenly grew up to join his body.
Yuno shrugged his shoulders "My mind never stopped developing it is just taking a moment to catch up to my body, I remember hearing voices and I guess my mind absorbed the information and developed with it. I don't remember much of what was actually said but it was enough for me to develop." Yuno said and his wings twitched and it caught the boys' attention. "what the?" he mumbled as he reached up to grab hold of one of the wings and brought it in front of him.
"well I don't remember these lovely things, I can feel every touch on the spine of the things but I can't feel the feathers like with hair. Now this is interesting to me" Yuno was just standing there stroking his wings, not even a few seconds later however he turned his eyes back toward Inoichi. Inoichi saw the boys eyes were his normal purple.
"Yuno, I think it's time we wake from your slumber. Just close your eyes and look for a another feeling similar to the one in your mind but it will feel more natural" Inoichi informed the eleven year old who just smiled and nodded following what the man in front of him said and closed his eyes. Yuno felt for the sensation that was described to him and as he found it he concentrated on it. The sensation he was feeling was like he was waking from a natural sleep and as he opened his eyes the first thing his mind registered was a blinding white light.
As Yuno's eyes started to focus he could finally start making out the two people within his room. One of which was Inoichi the man who was in his head and he too seemed to be returning focus to the world around him from whatever he done to get within the boys' mind. He turned his focus to the second man within the room which was the old man Hokage which he had seen within books he had read before whatever had happened to him happened.
The Old man, Hiruzen Sarutobi that was his name, was sitting on a chair next to his bed with a gentle loving smile one could expect from their grandpa greeted him. "hello young man, my name is Hiruzen Sarutobi the Hokage of Konohagakure, may I know your name please?" Hiruzen asked with a gentle voice that matched his smile.
"My name is Yuno, I can't remember my last name properly except for Uzu." Yuno replied to the Hokage with a weak voice.
"Well for now then until you remember your last name you will be Yuno Uzu, how much do you remember and how much have you been told about the current situation Yuno-kun?" The old man asked politely
"I'd like that, as far as what my memory tells me before I went into the coma my home was attacked. For what I have been told, I know that I've been in a coma for the past seven years of my life, I was found on a road toward this village." Yuno gave in return taking a few moments in between to get his thoughts straight and to get his breathe sorted.
At this time Inoichi finally came too "His mental condition is good and he has a surprisingly strong mental barriers. From what I was able to gather from his memories he should have a pair of wings and a chakra element that is known to be extremely rare, Shoton, he's able to create and manipulate crystalline structures. Yuno-kun do you mind sitting forward I would like to see what's the condition of your back and what has happened to the wings I saw in your memories and in your mind scape." He came out with rather abruptly.
Yuno complied with what Inoichi told him to do and sat up on the bed. Inoichi then proceeded to move to his side and lift up the hospital gown and couldn't see any sign of where the boy's wings were except for two markings between the boy's shoulder blade where the wing and back were joined. Inoichi put his fingers on the two spots on the boys' back "Yuno-kun do you mind focusing your chakra, if you can, on where my fingers are touching please?" Inoichi explained
"urm, sorry but I know that chakra is the energy that Shinobi use to perform almost all their techniques but I've never accessed it before so I don't know how to control it." Yuno said as he rubbed the back of his head. Inoichi made a hmm noise behind him as he tried to figure out what he could do to try and explain.
Inoichi got an idea and as he opened his mouth to speak "How about we do this when he's feeling better and had food, drink and everything and we can continue this tomorrow in my office." Came the voice of the Hokage.
Inoichi nodded "alright, then I'll leave for now and go attend to the other things I have to do today. I'll see you tomorrow Yuno-kun okay?" he asked
"I'd like that Yamanaka-san" Yuno answered with a broad smile toward Inoichi
"I'll see you then and for now just call me Inoichi-san okay?" Inoichi said with a smaller smile then the one he received. With that said Inoichi made his way out of the room.
Once he had left the room Yuno turned his attention to the Hokage "I'll go get the nurse so she can bring in some dinner for you okay? then I'll send a Shinobi to come and get you for tomorrow when we'll be meeting, for now however I would like it if you rested some more till then." The Hokage instructed.
"Yes Hokage-sama" was the reply that greeted the Hokage from the boy. Yuno closed his eyes and turned onto his side to get more comfortable and found his muscles ached from the lack of usage. Hiruzen then left the boy to rest to go find a nurse. Yuno tried to get back off to sleep but he had trouble trying to get his body to relax properly and found his body was full of energy.
Yuno decided that he should at least get up and stretch his muscles to get rid of the ache within them. With that decided he laid back onto his back and slowly got himself to sit up properly feeling the ache in his back muscles telling him to stop moving. Ignoring the pain from stretching the unused muscles he then swung his legs around to the side of the bed and gently started to apply pressure onto the floor. feeling no pain at the moment he placed a hand upon the wall next to his bed and slowly started to stand up, feeling his muscles stretch and ache slightly again he continued to stand not wanting to be beaten.
After getting his body to stand Yuno tried to take a few steps and found that the pain that was in his muscles was dulling and he was able to take steps without a problem. He walked around his room a few times to get used to his grown up body, stretching his arms and getting used to the span of his arms. whilst walking around the room he noticed a set of clothes on the side and they looked like they would fit his body. He went over to the clothes and picked them up and carefully put them on, after stripping himself of the hospital gown, so he didn't fall over and cause unnecessary harm to had given him a normal black top, a pair of blue boxers and a dark grey pair of cargo trousers.
Slowly getting used to his body he pressed his ear against the door to his room to try and hear if anyone was in the hallway outside. He stayed there for a few seconds and as he couldn't hear anyone out in the hallway he slowly opened up the door to have a peak into the hallway.
Seeing no one in the hallway he stepped out into the hallway and made his way down the hall slowly trying to be as quiet as he could be. After a little while of sneaking around the hospital going up trying to get to the roof of the hospital, after about half hour of sneaking and going up he finally managed to make it to the rooftop.
He took a look around at the village and the sight impressed him. He'd never seen such a big village and so many people moving around and so many houses, for awhile he just looked about the village taking it all in, even the Hokage mountain.
He snapped himself out of the gormless staring he was doing. He came up here for privacy and he guessed the longer he took the more chance the nurse would go to his room to find him missing. He tried to remember the books he used to read before everything happened and remember what it had said about chakra. For a few moments he just stood there trying to remember what it was and how to access and control it.
It took him a moment but he finally remembered what the book had said about chakra 'Chakra is a form of energy that is contained within a living being. If I remember correctly then if I concentrate on trying to find that energy then I should be able to access my chakra, and if I access my chakra I can try and concentrate it to go to where Inoichi-san had said to then I can see what the results are.' Yuno thought to himself and he went about doing just that by sitting down in the middle of the rooftop.
Yuno closed his eyes and concentrated on feeling his body and looking for the energy that would be his Chakra. After a few moments he found the energy he had been looking for and concentrated solely on that, he felt the energy rush around his body energising him further and he continued to concentrate on the energy and the purple energy from his memory started to swirl around him. He then tried to get the energy to concentrate on the two spots Inoichi had pointed out to him. The energy that coursed through him before started to go to where he was instructing it, the two spots started to glow like they did before. his eyes flew open as his wings shot out of his back, tearing the top he had put on before open.
The wings were outstretched behind him and he tried to move them so they furled back up so he could get used to the feeling of them. He was looking at the ground when he finally got the muscles in his wings to furl them back up and when he had looked up he was surrounded by Shinobi all in their various forms of Taijutsu stances. Yuno looked at all of them quite scared and then another landed right in front of him with a curious look in his eyes. It was The Hokage and once he had revealed himself the rest of the Shinobi relaxed their stance but not by much.
"Yuno-kun, I thought we agreed that you will be getting rest in your room?" The Hokage said in a gentle voice.
"well, you see, the thing is..." Yuno tried to figure out what to say exactly "I was laying there and I had my eyes closed trying to get back off to sleep, but I couldn't my body wouldn't allow me to. I had this overwhelming urge to get up and go running, with that in mind and me knowing I can't go running straight out of a coma I came to the roof to make sure I wouldn't be disturbed whilst I tried what Inoichi-sama had said, and look! I got my wings back!" Yuno rapidly rambled with a excited yell at the end and to emphasise the point he made, his wings spread out on either side of him to their full extent. The span of each about a meter and a half and the feathers fell to the boys' hips.
"Everyone, back to where you was before here, I can handle everything from here" Sarutobi stated still looking at the boy in front of him who had a face splitting grin on. A few of the shinobi did as he said but others stuck around not really sure if they should really leave their Hokage to deal with the boy on his own.
"But Lord Hokage this boy has incredibly potent chakra!" One of the Ninja asked in a state.
"I said leave, Now!" The Hokage ordered the remaining with a tone that dared one to defy him. The Remaining Ninja's now remembered why he was The Hokage one of, if not, the most powerful Shinobi in the village. They all either jumped away or used Body Flicker to get off the roof. "Yuno-kun would you like to come with me to my office as you seem to have so much energy?" Hiruzen phrased it as a question but his tone said it was an order. Yuno just nodded his head "Good I expect you there in a few minutes. Try to use your wings eh?" with those remaining words his used Body Flicker to head back to the office leaving Yuno on the rooftop.
Yuno flexed his wings and started to flap them, he made progress but he wasn't creating enough updraft to lift off the roof. He kept trying, trying to figure out what he was doing wrong. He started to do it faster and harder slowly lifting off the rooftop, he kept off the roof for a whole ten seconds before he fell back onto his butt. Scrunching up his face and standing back up, he tried jumping and flapping which was met with more success than his attempt before but he wasn't able to move much before falling again. Getting frustrated he dove into his mind to see if anything he read when he was little could help him.
That's when he remember you could use Chakra to boost muscles strength and speed and the like. So with that in mind Yuno focused a bit of the energy he had to his wings. Feeling his chakra go to his wings he jumped and flapped his wings again this time he went up a lot more than last time and he gently flapped his wings, noticing the strain on his wings had decreased a lot. Yuno looked around and he slowly moved forward whilst staying upright, not by choice however and he realised he probably needs to shift his body to increase the speed in which he can go forward.
Putting his theory to the test he laid down on his forward in the air keeping his flapping steady so he didn't fall as he did it, then he tried to go forward and found he was moving forward a lot quicker. Yuno flew around the hospital roof for a bit just getting used to the feel of flying; he noticed he could move faster than he did walking but not much more than he would be if he jogged. Instead of lingering on the thought he instead flew to what he guessed was the Hokage tower because it had a big kanji on it for the word "fire".
As he neared the tower he realised he had yet to try out how to land from flying, and when I say neared I meant when he was only about five meters from the window to the Hokage's office. Realising this he did the only thing a rational person would...
... Panic.
He crashed through the window and onto the floor in front of the Hokage's desk.
Yuno slowly pushed himself up so he sat onto his shins, looking around the room he found himself in front of the Hokage again and there was also two other people in the room. One was a Ninja with a weasel mask on, the other was Inoichi who looked like he had just been woken up just as he had drifted off to sleep. Yuno after seeing everyone there started scratching the back of his head "heh heh, sorry about that I didn't know how to land"
"Is this the boy then? He looks rather incompetent" The weasel masked ninja asked the Hokage with his head slanted to the side.
"Yes, this is the boy that I need you to train, that is if he wants to become a Shinobi of the Leaf. Say Yuno-kun would you like to become a Shinobi of the leaf?" the Hokage responded and redirected toward Yuno.
Yuno was looking at the Hokage with slight disbelief that he was asking him if he wanted to join the Villages Shinobi, as he had read when he was younger about some of the Shinobi that this village had produced "Yo-you mean I get to become a Shinobi here if I agree to train under this masked man?" He said slowly and when he got a nod in response his face lit up. "Yes, Yes! I would love to!" He all but shouted.
"Why does it have to be me Hokage-sama? I don't feel I am the best man qualified for this type of task." The masked man said in a rather defeated voice.
"I believe you are the one best suited to teach this young man, he will need your help with his dojutsu as you are one of the best with one. Also I feel that you would be able to keep him safe when his abilities come out. Read up on what we currently know, its all in this file here" The Hokage informed weasel as he passed him a folder containing Yuno's file.
After a moment The Hokage carried on "Also Weasel-san, remove your mask and hand it into ANBU, you will not need it anymore. You are being re-instated as a Jounin of the Leaf.
'Weasel' bowing respectfully toward Hiruzen replied with "By your command Hokage-sama" then turned his attention to Yuno "I will come and grab you from your hospital room in two days use this time to read up on the academy basic techniques, I'll have a scroll with the details waiting for you by the time you return. When I come by I will bring you basic equipment and an outfit to wear and whatever the Hokage requests I bring you." With that been said both 'Weasel' and Inoichi used Body Flicker to leave the office.
Yuno turned toward the Hokage as he started to speak "Yuno, if it is okay with you I would like to request some blood tests done to you by my private Doctors to see if the abilities you have will be passed down through your bloodline because if they do then you will be able to start a clan but we will get into that when you are older. For the rest of today after the blood test you are to go rest or practice flying around but as soon as you feel any sort of fatigue you are to land and go to the hospital immediately, am I understood?" with a nod as a response "good and as you are being taken under Inu's tutelage you are immediately granted the rank of Genin and will be tested on the basic's to see if you stay a Genin or will have to be taken through the academy."
"Hai Hokage-sama." He said with a bow "am I too wait here for the doctors or are they going to be in my hospital room later to do it?" He asked as politely as possible.
"They will meet you in room 209 in two hours so between now and then is the time to relax or practice after the blood test you are to rest no matter what till tomorrow morning seeing as it's already evening." The Hokage informed the boy "Now begone, I've got things I need to get done."
With that the boy ran toward the window he smashed through to get there and brought his wings in so they didn't clip anything on the way out. Once he had left he unfurled his wings and immediately pumped chakra into them to stay up in the air. For the next two hours he flew around the outskirts of the village practicing different manoeuvres in the air and also practiced landing at random times and each time he tried he still ended up in a pile on the floor.
AN: Hello, me again, I know my OC may seem a bit over powered by his first description but he will have weaknesses which will be exploited later in the story. But for now this is this chapter over and done with so if you will be kind enough to leave a review to tell me what you liked and what you disliked that would be greatly appreciated.