Hey ya'll this is my first fanfiction (of course i still read it all the time before and after this) it is a divergent fanfiction with major Allegiant spoilers. I am open to constructive criticism but, not hate. oh wow i almost forgot to mention this is a collab fanfic with Ngarc345 by the way it is the same chapters on her account so like ya, its Saturday so i don't really know how to use words until Wednesday so ya um oh ya but she has really good fanfics ya'll should check that out if you like the Mortal Instruments she has a fanfic about that called My Guitarist that i love and can't wait for her to update (cough cough hint hint) Anywho i plan on updating this on Wednesdays i believe unless i lose my patience and cave early or get to busy which are both pretty likely wow sorry for the super long/ super confusing badly worded authors note i hope you like the story and i really appreciate you reading it you're super awesome anywho i am going to shut up now and let you read Peace Out ya'll enjoy -MyFourTris
When I wake up, I hear a beeping. I can feel tubes placed everywhere in me. I open my eyes to a blinding light and groan. I blink a couple of times not knowing where I am. "Tris," I hear a familiar voice say. My vision clears and I see him standing over my bed, his blue eyes are filled with tears. "Tobias," I say tears forming in my eyes. He bends down and kisses me softly. He kneels down beside my bed. "You're awake. Thank god you're awake," he said. "What happened?" I asked. He sighed. "I'm not sure of everything that happened while you were . . . in the room, but I know that you punched the code in and because of how disoriented David was he missed and hit you in the shoulders. Thank god he missed. But you lost a lot of blood before they found you. You had some head trauma too. They didn't know if you were going to wake up Tris," he said tears slipping down his face. I placed a hand on his cheek. "I'm awake now," I told him. He chuckled. "It's over Tris. We're safe now. We're finally safe. No more factions and no more war," he told me. I smiled. "Good," I told him. He hit a button and told the intercom that I had woken up Doctors came in and check on my vitals. They were all amazed I'd woken up and that my vitals were good. They gave me some medication for my muscles. Apparently, they hooked me up to this machine that would stop my muscles from deteriorating but there would still be some pain for a few days. I would have to come in for physical therapy every week until I was back in the hang of things. They told me I would be able to go home the next day. Tobias sat on my bed and I asked him, "What's it like now?" He took my hand. "Better than ever," he said. He smiled and said, "I promise I'll be back tomorrow to take you home." He kissed me on the forehead and said,, "I love you" before I could say anything and left. I wondered where home was. I settled into the bed and tried to get comfy. I fell asleep again despite how long I was asleep before.
When I woke up, the doctors gave me some more medication for my muscles. "Up for visitors?" the doctor asked. I swallowed and nodded. "You don't have to if you're not up for it," he said. "I'll be fine," I told him. He went out and Christina came in. We talked for a while. She asked how I felt and told me about the new system. It felt nice to talk to my friend again. "Hey, what about Uriah? You haven't mentioned him, where is he?" I asked. Her face turned somber. "About that. . . we need to talk. I don't know if you remember but he went into a coma a little bit before you did," Christina tells me. "Oh god has he not woken up yet?" I asked concerned. Christina took my hand. "They couldn't find brain activity. Tris they had to unplug him," she tells me. I gasped. She squeezed my hand. "I know. His mom and brother came by and said goodbye," she told me. "I wasn't even there to say goodbye," I said though my voice was barely more than a whisper. "You're awake now though. We spread the ashes along the Chasm so maybe when you get out of here we can visit and you can say goodbye," she told me. I nodded. Not too long after she had to leave because she had a couple things to do. The doctors came in and said I could go home but I would have to get checked up again next week. Tobias came in and squeezed my hand. He helped me walk to where a car was waiting for us. I had never been in one so it was strange. I had only ever traveled by train and bus but the buses weren't running anymore and trains were obviously out of the picture what with my just waking up. I stared out the window the entire time, taking the new city in. This is home, I thought to myself. He brought me to a small house and carried me inside. "Welcome home," he said. I threw my arms around his neck and kissed him. It felt good to have his arms around me again. "I missed you so much," he said. "You won't have to anymore," I promised. We kissed and he set me down. He showed me around his small apartment. It was and a lot bigger than his one in the Dauntless compound but the relatively similar. He brought me through all the rooms until we were in the bedroom sitting on the bed. "It's not much," he said rubbing the back of his neck. "I like it," I told him. "It's a lot better now that you're here," he said. "Oh you've been waiting to use that one," I teased him. He smiled. "Maybe a little," he admitted. I wrapped my arms around his neck and kissed him softly. I smiled. We would never have to live in fear again. This is my new life. This is my new home. And I already love it.
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