Hey I got a review about my English being terrible so I hope it is better now. If not, then I at least hope you understand it. I am going to read through all of my chapters and repost them. Hope you like the story. So sorry for my bad English.
The name is Blaze.
I am not like all the other stupid kids on the playground. They live a normal stupid life. What I live with is darkness. Is that wrong? I don't like normal people because they only see the world in light, but if you wait till dark then you will see all the secrets life holds. You would think that this world is a good place but is it? People are hurting and do not get any help of any kind. People are ignorant and only cares about themselves. This is not a world I would like to live in if I could choose. But if people could choose then everything would just happen in the other worlds. I got powers. Powers that is belonging to the other half of me. The demon half *evil smile*. I got the power over darkness.
I have been in Hell and met other demons who are my friends. I have seen another dimension, I can travel there and other places like Hell. I have a friend there. He is not normal. No. He is long way from normal. He is the leader of a group of. Wait for it. Ninjas. I know. Cool, right. He is a good listener and can use practical logic. He likes art and training. He meditates a lot when he is home. He says his brothers are super irritating. I believe him. He is also funny and actually a good trainer. He has trained me physically. Well there is one more important fact about him. He is a humanoid turtle. Yes, I know, strange. I kind of freaked out when I saw him. But after I got to know him, we actually got to be best friends.
You maybe want to read how we met. Well it started when I was ten years old…
I was in my room. Locked of course. My sister tried to get me out. I could not handle my parents any more. I just wanted to get away. I created a portal away from here, another dimension. I went through it and I saw sewers canals. I walked in them and just looked around me.
After a while I began to hear quiet voices. I followed them till I almost could see the people talking. When I could, I hid myself in one of the tunnels. I watched as three kids at same age as me walked past my hiding spot. The special thing about the kids was. They were not human. They were humanoid turtles. They were talking to each other. I began listening to their discussion. The turtle with the red mask said "I can't believe how Leo is. He is Splinter Jr. I am so irritated that he gets everything till. And he tries to be so perfect. I wish he was not my brother." This Leo cannot be that bad of a person. But if he is their brother then I think they are some terrible brothers to this to Leo. The turtle with the purple mask said "Raph don not talk like that about Leo. It is just mean." Raph answered "Donnie is you not just bored about Leo being perfect. He does nothing more than to train and meditate." The turtle with the orange mask said "I do not think he wants to be like that to us, but Raph has a point. But I do not want to be mean to him. Cannot we all just be friends?" And again the mean one answered "Mickey do not take his side. We can never be friends with Splinter Jr. Right?" The others looked at each other and then said "Yes Raph". I could not believe them. Could they really be that mean to their own brother? They are monsters. Literally. Then Donnie said "I think I hear Leo. Run!"
After they ran away as cowards, I could hear a quiet voice echoing through the tunnels "Raph, Donnie, Mikey! Where are you guys? This is not funny anymore!" He had to be Leo. He had a blue mask and two swords on his back. He was kind of cute.
I stepped out of the tunnel and stepped right in front of him. His eyes widened and he stepped back a bit. Then I said "If you are looking after your brothers, then they ran that way. If I were you I would not go after them after all they said about you. For you are Leo right?" He answered "Yes my name is Leo or it is actually Leonardo. Who are you and why are you not afraid of me?" This time it was my turn to just stare. Then I said "The name is Blaze and for why I am not afraid of you is because I saw three others who look just like you before you showed up."
We just stood there for a while before I began to tell him about what they said about him. "You know; You seem cool. And those three are some big idiots. I know this maybe is a little bit strange to ask after we just met but, do you want to be my friend?" he looked at me and then just gave me a smile. After that we found our own place to be at. He would always go out from his home and meet me there. We still use that place today. I actually live there now, halfway with him.
I hope it got better. I feel terrible after reading trough what I had up before. Thank you guest for making me correct myself. If it still is bad, then I am really sorry. This is my writing style and my writing program do not correct everything. Hope you liked it and please review. See you next time. I hope.