I redid chapter 1 because it was written really weird and I hated it. I listened to reviewers' advice too.
Disclaimer: I do not own Tokyo Mew Mew, if I did; I would be making more episodes right now instead of writing fanfic's.
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Ichigo woke up with a jolt as the bell rang. Now she could go to the park to have they picnic she'd with Aoyama-kun! She packed up her things and ran to the park. When she reached the park, she realised that Aoyama-kun wouldn't have ran, so she had some time to day dream. Ichigo closed her eyes.
It was dark, really dark. Somewhere in the dark someone or something was moving, she felt like she knew them. Whoever they were they were coming closer and closer, nearer and nearer until the shadow was right in from of her. Ichigo was pulled into a warm embrace, then a warm mouth was placed over her lips, she could feel their breathe on her neck, she was so happy-.
"Ichigo?" Ichigo opened her eyes warily. "Hello Aoyama-kun," Ichigo's smiled, trying to hide her confusion, what's going on, nya! Where am I? Then she remembered she was at the park with Aoyama-kun. The picnic went well, but somehow Ichigo didn't feel as close to him as she usually did, she didn't even blush when he hugged her. If Aoyama noticed, he didn't say anything about it, he just walked her home like he usually did.
Ichigo was bored, she was leaning out her bedroom window trying to claw at unsuspecting birds, but she was still thinking about her dream. She stood up and barely missed hitting her head on her window sill, she had an idea.
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I have decided to take this story in another direction. I was going to make her tell Lettuce who told Ryou for some random reason, but I decided to... not telling ^^
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