Clawfang Returns pt 1 chpt.3

Alive or dead

When the groundbridge opened up, Optimus, Bumblebee carried Clawfang while Ratchet was trying to stop the flow of blood from her wound in her side. Arcee, Bulkhead, and Smokscreen when through the groundbridge last in case anyone would shoot at them and the wounded "autobot". Ratchet, Optimus, Bumblebee, Smokescreen, Bulkhead, and Arcee excited the groundbridge and entered the control room, Jack, Miko, stared in horror at the animal in Optimus' and Bumblebee's arms. Raf was even more tramatized at the sight of the blood stained animal. They all ran to whereClawfang was. Optimus and Bumblebee layedClawfang on the metal berth, "Everyone out! Except Optimus and Bumblebee, since you'reclosest to her you'll stay" said Ratchet. Arcee, Bulkhead, and Smokescreen gathered the children away from where Clawfang was. Miko as always started asking questions about who or what that thing was. "Who's that? Is she an autobot or 'con? Why is she covered in red stuff? Is that stuff redenergon? Why did Ratchet say that Bee andOptimus are closest to her?" chattered Miko.Arcee, Bulkhead, and Smokescreen completely ignored her. "How? She can't be alive Megatronsqueezed the life out of her" Arcee said, "Well, you know her you just can't push her down for long cause she'll bounce right back up!" chuckled Smokescreen chuckled half-heartedly "Yeah but Smoky she was the size of a human like Jack's size remember? On Cybertron she could fit in your hand." Remarked Bulkhead "Size of a human that thing?" Miko said, "Cybertron?" said Jack "Wait how did you meet her and is an autobot like you guys or something else?" asked Raf. Before Smokescreen could answer, there was a flash of light and the smell of singed fur. "Clawfang don't leave us again!" yelled a panicked Ratchet. Everyone rushed to the medical bay, now theyknow why Ratchet was panicking, Clawfang'sheart rate was almost a flat line, so Ratchet was using a jumpstarter to bring her "back" to life. But before Ratchet could put the jumpstarters back on her chest, the heart moniter went flat. Ratchet tried again, but nothing happened, everyone stared silently at the limp, motionless figure on the berth.Optimus looked as if he were going to "cry" or just lose it and punch something, but he kept his emotions in check as always, while Bumblebee stared silently at the dead body remembering when he almost lost Raf to Megatron when he was infected with dark energon but Raf survived, notClawfang, he and Optimus knew her more than anyone else and formed a strong bond with her, she was spunky, brave, courageous, funny and never gave up and whenever no one would take a dangerous mission she would take it and risk her life and come back with only a few scratches and maybe a broken paw, leg, etc… but this time she was gone forever. "Lets go there's nothing more we can do for her anymore" said Ratchet breaking the silence. Everyone, except Bumblebee, left the medical bay. Bumblebee bent down to his knees, stroked Clawfang's dried blood covered fur gently, then buried his faceplate in her fur wishing he could cry, and gently but tightly hugged her….TO BE CONTINUED

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