I'm new at this so I may not be a very good writer. I just came here
yesterday.
First date chapter one
It was just an ordinary day at the Kamiya dojo; Kenshin was doing his favorite chore (Laundry! Duh!), Yahiko was practicing with his shinai as well as trying to tick Kaoru off, she was whacking him senseless and Sanosuke was lounging around, Yep, just an ordinary day. Well, maybe. Kenshin wasn't exactly enjoying this for once. He was having a quarrel with his conscience about whether or not he should ask Kaoru out on a date. I mean come on! He's lived in the dojo for a little over a year now!
'Should I ask? But then again I don't deserve to. My hands are stained with the blood of many men and she is so innocent. She even welcomed me into her home so I should be grateful.'
What is going on and what are you afraid of?
'The truth.'
Which is?
'I love her.'
What's wrong with that?
'I really don't think I should ask her like that. It's too embarrassing and I don't deserve it, not after what I've done.'
Wasn't that in the past?
'Yes.'
Didn't she tell you that she never cared about your past?
'Well, yes.'
Well go ahead then! Besides, don't you remember how she asked you to stay despite your true identity? She wanted you to stay! Which means she must have liked you! She has been so obvious sometimes and she's given you her everything and all you do is ignore her and do the laundry and everything else! I swear you must be in love with chores!
'No I'm not!'
Yes, you are! *sigh* Kenshin stopped trying to argue and continued with the laundry while thinking about Kaoru. "How do I know she loves me? She probably doesn't."
"Who are you talking about Kenshin?"
"Oro?" Kenshin mumbled and turned to see Kaoru staring at him in a curious manner. "What is it Kaoru-dono?" Kaoru continued to look at him.
"I was about to ask you the same question. Who are you talking about?"
"What do you mean?"
"I heard you talking about someone. You said 'How do I know she loves me? She probably doesn't' remember?"
"Hm? When?" Kaoru started to get annoyed.
"Don't you 'when' me Kenshin! I have ears I heard you! I'm just curious is all, do you happen to like someone?"
"Oro." Kenshin figured there's no way out of this one.
"Hai Kaoru-dono, sessha likes someone." Kaoru felt a little shaken and sad.
"Sou ka.well, good luck." And she walked away. Kenshin stared after her. 'What's wrong with Kaoru?'
She's sad.
'Why?'
She thinks you like someone else other than her.
'Oro? Demo, I don't!'
She doesn't know that Did this mean that Kaoru really did have feelings for him? Perhaps he does stand a chance. Kenshin thought for a brief moment before he found his answer. 'Yosshi! I'll ask her later.' But there was a slight problem. Did Kenshin have the courage to do it?
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Hi everyone, I'm new here and I just started writing so please don't flame me! I know I'm really that experienced! Anyways I got the first chapter done but I don't know about continuing it. You decide whether or not. Well, I gotta hit the hay, see you guys around!
First date chapter one
It was just an ordinary day at the Kamiya dojo; Kenshin was doing his favorite chore (Laundry! Duh!), Yahiko was practicing with his shinai as well as trying to tick Kaoru off, she was whacking him senseless and Sanosuke was lounging around, Yep, just an ordinary day. Well, maybe. Kenshin wasn't exactly enjoying this for once. He was having a quarrel with his conscience about whether or not he should ask Kaoru out on a date. I mean come on! He's lived in the dojo for a little over a year now!
'Should I ask? But then again I don't deserve to. My hands are stained with the blood of many men and she is so innocent. She even welcomed me into her home so I should be grateful.'
What is going on and what are you afraid of?
'The truth.'
Which is?
'I love her.'
What's wrong with that?
'I really don't think I should ask her like that. It's too embarrassing and I don't deserve it, not after what I've done.'
Wasn't that in the past?
'Yes.'
Didn't she tell you that she never cared about your past?
'Well, yes.'
Well go ahead then! Besides, don't you remember how she asked you to stay despite your true identity? She wanted you to stay! Which means she must have liked you! She has been so obvious sometimes and she's given you her everything and all you do is ignore her and do the laundry and everything else! I swear you must be in love with chores!
'No I'm not!'
Yes, you are! *sigh* Kenshin stopped trying to argue and continued with the laundry while thinking about Kaoru. "How do I know she loves me? She probably doesn't."
"Who are you talking about Kenshin?"
"Oro?" Kenshin mumbled and turned to see Kaoru staring at him in a curious manner. "What is it Kaoru-dono?" Kaoru continued to look at him.
"I was about to ask you the same question. Who are you talking about?"
"What do you mean?"
"I heard you talking about someone. You said 'How do I know she loves me? She probably doesn't' remember?"
"Hm? When?" Kaoru started to get annoyed.
"Don't you 'when' me Kenshin! I have ears I heard you! I'm just curious is all, do you happen to like someone?"
"Oro." Kenshin figured there's no way out of this one.
"Hai Kaoru-dono, sessha likes someone." Kaoru felt a little shaken and sad.
"Sou ka.well, good luck." And she walked away. Kenshin stared after her. 'What's wrong with Kaoru?'
She's sad.
'Why?'
She thinks you like someone else other than her.
'Oro? Demo, I don't!'
She doesn't know that Did this mean that Kaoru really did have feelings for him? Perhaps he does stand a chance. Kenshin thought for a brief moment before he found his answer. 'Yosshi! I'll ask her later.' But there was a slight problem. Did Kenshin have the courage to do it?
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Hi everyone, I'm new here and I just started writing so please don't flame me! I know I'm really that experienced! Anyways I got the first chapter done but I don't know about continuing it. You decide whether or not. Well, I gotta hit the hay, see you guys around!