This is my first ever shot at fanfiction stuff, so comment and stuff. I need the advice, and since I can only get that from honest comments, SHOW ME NO MERCY! (Heh heh, I always wanted to say that.) :)
I was dying from boredom. It had been almost two weeks since a ghost had attacked! And while I like that and all, it would be nice if I could get some action. Without ghosts attacking, there had been no excuse to ignore my homework. UGH.
I knew I had to find some ghost to beat up, or I was accidentally gonna go all ghost-ray-shooting-ninja on Dash or something. So I just... went flying over Amity. Just a little solo patrol to see if anything new had shown up since yesterday. I skimmed over all of Amity Park. Nothing. Not even a ghost mosquito. I was about to head home when, out of the corner of my eye, I saw a flash of blue. "YES!" I shouted.
Ok, so maybe I was overexcited. At least I kept my voice down enough so the ghost didn't hear me. I took another look, and saw a clump of white flash by me. The GIW.
These guys had been a pain in my butt lately. Always hunting me, interfering in my ghost fights, telling me to 'Surrender quietly and come with us to our lab.' And painful experiments. Always something about painful experiments. I turned invisible, and flew off after Idiots 1 and 2, and whatever that dark blue flash of a ghost was.
I streaked after the government agents, completely invisible, and noticed that the dark blue streak had turned silver. Ok, that was weird. I had never seen a ghost, especially an amateur ghost, as this one had to be if it was being caught by the GIW, completely switch the color of their aura before. I was getting used to this when suddenly, the now-silver flash just...stopped. I had to jolt to a stop and nearly lost my invisibility from stopping so hard. Now that the ghost had stopped, I could get a good look at it ...her.
She looked like she used to be completely human. I know, some people may thing that goes without saying, but I have fought ghosts of every species. This girl was completely human-looking. She just hovered there, glaring at the GIW agents surrounding her. She had this long, curly hair the lightest shade of grey covering one of her eyes and tanned skin. She had on royal blue hoodie with white lining (hood down so I could see her face) and dark black-grey leggings under a pale blue skirt. She had on silver and white sneakers... ok, so maybe I'm going overboard on the whole description thing. Whatever. She had these eyes that were like... blue-grey, so pale they were almost colorless and thick grey cuffs on her wrists, kind of like chains. On the ghost side of things, she was hovering 60 feet in the air, she had a scar across her one visible eye, and her entire body was glowing with a silvery aura
Ok, so I might not be the most empathetic ghost in the Ghost Zone. But I could read the emotions rolling off this ghost girl pretty well. She stared at the GIW circling her with a mixture of anger, panic, and fear. Actually, it was more terror than fear. She was really freaked out and a little ticked off.
From above them, I saw the GIW pop out microphones from their hover-whatevers and start yelling to the ghost girl. When I flew closer, I heard the usual speech reserved for all ghosts, myself included. "Give yourself up! Painful experiments!" Yada yada yada. But it looked like the average speech was actually getting to the ghost. She started shaking as she hovered. All of a sudden, she plummeted. Just stopped hovering and sank like a stone. The GIW flew after her, me right behind them
I saw her get closer and closer to the ground. I was getting really interested, so when she went intangible and ducked into the ground, so did I. She became the dark blue streak again (about the same color as her hoodie, if not darker) and took off, not knowing or not caring that I was right behind her. She might have been an interesting ghost, I'll give her that much, but she was still a weird ghost in my town. And I was dying for a fight.
Just thinking about this. Let me know it you guys think i should continue. Hope you like!