Hi There!
This is my first fanfiction here, so I'm hoping it turns out well. This is just an introductory paragraph. I tend to get writers block a lot, so I apologize if you actually like the story. I hope you like it, but I'm sort of looking forward to your criticisms as well, any chance to learn is good for me. So I hope you enjoy!
"Are you sure you want to do this?"
"No, but I'm going to anyways."
"You realize that this is is suicide, right?"
"You ask too many questions."
"But you don't have to-"
"Yes I do. I have to put an end to all of this. If not for everyone else, then for her."
Chapter 1: Good Morning World
Left, right, dead end again. The boy raced along the corridors, desperately trying to find an escape from the creature. But as he met dead end after dead end, he knew he would not last much longer. The beast's calls grew louder, and louder, and the boy was met with another dead end. He tried to escape, but the beast rounded the corner, trapping him. The creature grew louder, and louder, it's horrible cries piercing the hollow air of the labyrinth. The boy recognized the call of the beast though, it sounded so familiar. It sounded like...like...beeping?
The boy woke, startled, and confused. When he regained his senses, he realized that he could still hear the monster, and that there was no stopping his fate. He was doomed.
"Stupid alarm clock". Sora mumbled. Still half asleep, he leaned over to hit the snooze button for the third time this morning, only to realize that he was at the edge of the bed, and that his nightstand was further than he remembered. With a loud thud, Sora hit the floor, tangled in his blankets like a cucoon. Knowing that another monster was soon to arrive, he decided to get up, and get ready for the day, maintaining a single thought. "What a great way to start the day...".
Up early as always, the girl was ready for the day just in time to shut off her alarm clock a few moments before it would have gone off. Why she turned it on, or even had it for that matter, was a mystery to anyone who was aware of her sleeping habits. But she knew why. It wasn't so much as a wake-up call for her, as it was a reminder of her duty to a spiky-haired friend of hers. With her lunch packed, bag organized and uniform double-checked for anything that may need tending to, she was on her way.
As the girl made her way to her morning duty, she couldn't help but notice the vague figure of a child, in the slight silhouette of an all-too-familiar island. "No, it couldn't be" thought the girl. But as soon as the thought had arised, the sun had followed suit, and with the little island's sandy shore bare of any figure, the thought was dismissed. She made her way around the corner, and up to the doorstep, only to hear a loud thud. The girl stopped, looked down at her wrist, and simply thought "He's up early today".
Well, there's my first ever chapter, hope you enjoyed it, please revue. Oh and don't worry, i'll be introducing the rest of the characters int the next chapter or two, I just wanted to post this and read some revues. I'll reply to them in my next chapter, so be sure to read!