Jigoku Shoujo: The Emptiness Broken
A/N: Hey guyz! Uhm… So here's my story about Naruto. Well, please read and review. Criticism should help a lot. And also if you could help me enhance the story, I would love that. I'll do my best to keep this story running at my fastest rate of speed. Sasuke and Sakura are good, but please give an OC a chance. Now, for my OCs details…
Name Riku Matsubara Age 12 Gender … (you'll know it when we pass through the story… but for now it's a secret)
Name Yuko Matsubara Age 12 Gender Female
The other details will be filled in the story… Hope you like it! ENJOY!
Konoha's Flower
Chapter 1: The Tragic Past
POV of Riku
I woke up and found myself in a hospital. I looked around, and I realized this isn't my home. "You're awake." A voice called from the right side. I looked at who was speaking. He was an old man. I looked at him, with the expression that I don't know where I am, and who he is.
"So, is it okay if I ask you some questions?" he asked. I ignored him. "Alright. I'm the Hokage of this place," he said. He introduced himself formally. As I've heard, Hokages are the highest position in Konoha… so I have to give respect… "Yes, Mr. Hokage, sir." I said. And so he proceeded asking me his questions.
"One last question: What happened to you before you got here?" he asked. I was shocked to hear him ask me that question… and so I told him all I could remember…
Flashback
"C'mon Yuko! Just a little more… we're almost at the forest!" I told my twin as I held her hand to keep her standing. "But… sis… I-I'm tired…" she replied me. "We're almost there. We can have our rest once we get there!" I said as I pulled her up. "Riku, my legs are tired and… and I'm sleepy… we have been running f-from the house to the exit and to the forest… and it's a… long way… aren't you… tired?" she said as she tried to run.
"Hey, you're not the only one tired here," I replied her. "Where's… brother…? I thought… he was coming…" Yuko said as she looked behind to check if our brother was there. "Hiro niichan will come. He keeps promises," I told her as I held her hand.
We, at last reached the forest. We kept on running so we could find a way out of the place. Just then, a figure swooped infront of us. It was very fast, so I didn't identify who it was. The wind blew as the tree rustled. But that didn't stop me from hearing a voice, saying Kill them.
A figure came out from the dark. It was mother. I was almost to run to her and tell her I'm sorry when… "This is it, my dear children… Goodbye," she said, with a smirk on her face. There are twelve people around us. Father included. "No… why…? Why…? WHY?? WHAT HAVE WE DONE?? DID WE DO ANYTHING WRONG??" I cried out loud. "KILL THEM!!" Yukio, my mother shouted as she pointed at us. They were about to attack us when…
"… Riku! You and Yuko run! I'll handle them!" a familiar voice told me. "Niichan! You're—" I tried to finish my sentence… but he said "No buts… just go. I promise I'll follow you both… Now go!" he said. I nodded, as I held my sister's hand again and started to run. we reached a cliff, which indicates it's a dead end.
"Now you're mine!" a voice said as I felt a kunai deepening in my left leg… I fell on my knees. I tried to relax, but I can see my father going closer to Yuko, who can't move because she can't believe the things that are just happening now. I tried to get near her to defend her, but I realized that the kunai has a paralysis seal on it.
"This is all just a dream… just a dream…" I hear Yuko whisper those words as tears fell from her eyes. My father was about to stab her on the head when I saw my brother hold him. "YUKO! Jump! That's the only way you can escape!" he said.
He then looked at me foot with a kunai. He threw father on the side, and removed the kunai on my foot. "Go, now… I promise I'll come after you… okay?" he said as he put his necklace around my neck and then pushed me with Yuko. As I fell, I hear sounds of punches and stabs. "BROTHER!" I shouted at the highest I can as me and my sister both splashed in the water…
End of Flashback
As I finished, I felt tears roll down my cheeks… The Hokage hugged me… "What are your parents' name?" he asked. I couldn't answer… I don't want to say their names anyway… it just reminds me of what happened… and I want to forget it…
A/N: So, how did it go?? Please review… just please please please… Criticize it, comments, help me enhance, or just react… just please review… I will really appreciate. What shall i do, too? a. Six years from this event b. A day after this event and will i change their groupings or will i just put Riku in Team 7?? Please tell me what to do...