First 3 chapters are kind of short and not as interesting, but everything gets better, but I think you will like the rest of the story if you keep reading.
CH1
In a beautiful white castle surrounded by flowers over every kind and trees of every type, lived a beautiful Queen. She was very kind to all who met her and sweet to all creatures. She wore a wavy white dress that was as crisp as the snow. Her hair was platinum blonde that outlined her pale skin tone with brown eyes and red lips. She was known as the white queen.
She moved elegantly through the halls of her castle towards the kitchen. She sat down in the chair and rubbed her swollen stomach. She smiled at the thought of her baby inside her. "Well, I do believe it is time for a small snack." She smiled rubbing her stomach. "What do you think my little one?" She felt a kick and laughed. "I thought so."
"Thackery is it possible to have a little something to eat. After all I am eating for two."
Thackery turned and through something in the soup. He ran over to the counter and grabbed an apple.
"Here!" He threw it towards her and she caught it without much effort.
"Thank you." She grinned.
A small white mouse came onto the counter. "Hello your majesty."
"Ah, Mallymkun, so nice to see you" The white queen continued to eat her apple.
"Came to check one you." The mouse replied twirling her sword around.
The queen was about to reply when she heard the barking of a dog. Bayard came barging in frantically.
"Bayard, what's wrong?" The queen stood up and moved over to the dog. Before Bayard could reply, a man in white armor came in rushing to the queen.
"Come Mirana you must hurry." He gasped for air.
"Richard dear what's wrong. You know I don't like secrets My white king." She replied with a grin but then frowned noticing his concern.
"I need to hide you and our child. Hurry your sister is coming with her army." He grabbed her arm and began to lead her down the corridors. He pulled out his sword incase of any attacks.
They rounded a corner and a red card soldier came at them.
"Mirana stay behind me!" Richard yelled trying to keep his wife safe. He swung his sword around and blocked an attack. He then rolled down up under the soldier and stabbed him in the stomach. "Hurry!" He held onto Mirana and led her down to the garden. They stopped in their tracks when they saw the Bandersnatch.
The man turned to his wife and they shared a deep kiss. "Hurry now into the forest, the Hatter is waiting for you."
"I won't leave you." She pleaded.
He shoved her towards the forest as the Bandersnatch was charging at them.
Tears running down her face, she did as her husband commanded. She turned around to see the Bandersnatch knocking the king around. Her heart sank into her stomach.