"talking"
'thinking'
'flashback'
Chapter 1
[No one's POV]
"guys i think were lost" mewed a ginger tom with a mark of fire on his shoulder. "yeah i think fire's right, i dont remember this place" mewed a gray-blue she-cat with a mark of running water on her chest "are you sure,water?" mewed a dark gray tom with a mark of a cloud and lighting on his head "cause, that patch of grass over there looks familar" the other 8 kits glared at the gray tom "storm, that has got to be the most mouse-brained thing you've ever said" hissed a black tom "shut up shadow" hissed storm "guys, SHUT UP, i smell something" hissed a light gray she-cat with a mark of a whirl wind on her shoulder as she sniffed the air "winds right, smell" mewed a white she-cat with a mark of wings on her tail, "ill scout ahead" said a gray tom as he burst forward "wolf! stop, we have to stick together" said a black and white she-cat "Dont worry shift, ill be alright" the 8 kits caught back up with wolf "dont do that, we have to stick together" mewed shift as she smacked wolf playfully on his head "guys there's someone watching us" mewed a brown tom with a mark of a rock on his paws "how do you know earth?" mewed shadow "cause, follow me" mewed earth, they followed earth as he looked up a tree "we know your there" said earth just as two toms jumped out of the tree "this is thunderclan territory, what are you doing here?" said a golden tabby "we don't know, we just got lost here" "lionblaze, there just kits, there going to have to see bramblestar" said a bulky gray tom with black stripes "ok bumblestripe, come on kits follow me"
Plz review and tell me if i should continue