Okay this will be my first story and probably my only since I'll be trying to work while my daughter is either sleep or playing. So please don't judge me. I'm just doing a test run. Thanks and enjoy
Summary:
This is my own version of it. The characters will include, Eddie and Loren (of course), Mel and Adam, Aid Eddie's mom, Eddie's dad die, Nora and all know Trent will def. NOT be nowhere in this…..its drama love, love making (lol)…..Loren and Eddie was just average people, Loren was 19 and Eddie was 24… (BIG age diff I know) Loren was a trouble maker before her and Eddie met. She wasn't as focused in school; she had the wrong person as a friend. She didn't want to listen to anyone. Till she met Eddie and after that her whole life changed…..read to find out how…..
Chapter 1
Setting: Tates Crib
Nora: Loren hunny what are you doing?
Loren: nothing why?
Nora: well I wanted to talk to you about your grades in school.
Loren: why? I don't think you need to worry about it. My grades are doing just fine.
Nora: hey! Watch how you speak to me young lady.
Loren: whatever! Are we done here I have umm….homework to do.
Nora: okay just go. Dinner will be done in a few.
Loren walked in here room just as her phone was going off she looked at it; it was her best friend Aid. She answers the phone
Loren: yellow!
Aid: hey lo! What are you doing tonight?
Loren: nothing sitting here with Nora and maybe homework. Why? What's up?
Aid: I know this college kid that's having a party and he invited me and I'm inviting you...wanna come?
Loren: hell yeaaa I'm in!
Aid: alright I'll be there around 8.
Loren: alright Aid sees ya then bye.
Aid: bye
Meanwhile in the kitchen Nora was sitting there cooking as she had a flash back
*flash back*
Nurse: Ms. Tate you're going to have to push…..come on you can do it…
Doctor: Nora here is your beautiful baby girl…. What's her name?
Nora: Loren, Loren Elizabeth Tate
flash ahead to when Loren was 4(they were at the park)
Loren: mommy look I'm a princess
Nora: I see you hunny your beautiful, you mommy princess
Loren: I lub you mommy
Nora (in tears): I love you to baby
*end of flash back*
Nora hears Loren talking and decides to go ahead and call her for dinner…
Nora: Loren hunny its dinner time
Loren: took long enough. What are we having?
Nora: your favorite lasagna
Loren: thanks
(After dinner Loren cleared the table and wash the dishes Nora went in the room)
After Loren got done cleaning the yelled to her mom that she was jumping in the shower. After she got out she started to get ready for the party…..Aid texted her and said she would be there in 10 mins.
After Loren got dressed she put on her robe on and went to her mom room to let her know she was "heading to bed" but Nora was already sleeping. Aid texted Loren and said she was outside.
Setting: eddies house
Eddie was sitting watching a movie when he gets a call from his best friend.
Eddie: Hey Tyler what's up?
Tyler: I'm having a small party at my house. Come swing through. I know it's a short notice but come on and have fun you need to get out.
Eddie: I don't know man
Tyler: come on man you been coped up in that house for way to long.
Eddie: I know….. (Eddie thinking)…alright man give me a few minutes.
Tyler: cool see ya
Eddie sat on the couch pondering for a while….thinking about everything that had happen in his life….his mom developed cancer and she won the battle but then her dad got diagnosed with it and it was too late and he lost the battle. He just lost his self after his dad died he stop hanging with his friends he talked to his mom every other two days….he was losing it.
Eddie said to his self out loud GET UP ED!
Eddie got up and hopped in the shower 20 mins later he's out getting dressed. He making his way to Tyler's house.
Meanwhile at the tates house
Nora: Loren hunny (Nora knocking on the door, she pushes it open)
Nora see that Loren isn't there, she calls Loren multiple of time and leaves her millions of messages.
At Tyler's party
Tyler: Aid hey babe! And who is this pretty little lady
Aid: hey babe. This is my best friend Loren
Tyler: hello beautiful I'm Tyler nice to meet you
Loren: nice to meet you too
Tyler: well ladies there's drinks over there food is on the counter, make yourself a home and enjoy
Aid and Loren: thanks
Loren: damn Aid, where you meet him at?
Aid: at some club, he thinks I'm much older than I am
Loren: (laughing)…..mmm who is that right there he sure looks good….I wouldn't mine giving some to him
Loren and Aid started laughing.
Aid: hey Tyler come here
Tyler: yea babe
Aid: who that, that just walked in
Tyler: oh that there! That s Eddie that's my boy…hey Ed over here (he shouted)
Loren: NOOOO! Don't do that
Tyler: aw girl don't get shy, he's a nice guy
Eddie: hey dude thanks for inviting me…. (he looks over and notice Loren)
Eddie thoughts
Man who's that and where has she been hiding. She standing there with her long hair flowing, and that sexy dress, whew she has some nice legs.
Tyler: hey man ill like you to meet my girl Aid and this is her friend Loren
Eddie thoughts
Loren!
Eddie: hey ladies
Aid and Loren: Hi (they both blushing)
Eddie then turns to Tyler motions him to follow him when they are out of distance they begin to talk
Aid: man lo he is fine
Loren: yea he is…I wouldn't mind talking to him.
Aid: hey lo I'm going to get something to drink want something
Loren shook her head; she was too busy thinking about the guy that walked in….Eddie
Loren thought
Mmm Eddie I wouldn't mind getting to know him I wonder if he dates younger girls, well I'm not that young but I wonder….Eddie walked over to Loren and heart started pounding she started to feel knots in her stomach she was so nerves
Eddie: hey so are you enjoying your self
Loren: yea it's alright
Eddie: yea its cool, so how old are you?
Loren: umm 19?
Eddie: are you asking or tell (Eddie laughed)
Loren: I'm telling
Eddie: well then, oh hey I'll be right back okay
Loren: okay
Loren thoughts
Oh no did I scare him away? I hope he comes back. Please let him come back
Woah! With taking a while and dealing with my energized 9 month old…I'm finally done…
I hope you enjoyed it. Please review! No negative review please! Thanks you