Hello everyone. This is my first fanfic. Please don't kill me if you don't like it. You can criticize it though.

Voice

Max thinking

Chapter 1

Max's POV

"Those were the best apple pies ever" said Angel.

"Yeah, those were great. When can we have more? I loved those. Max do you think we can make apple pie's one day. We can use your unlimited ATM card and buy a lot of apples. Max how do you make apple pies? We will have to buy a cook book and…"

We had to listen to chatter. We were flying so nobody could cover her mouth. You are probably thinking we are flying in a plane but we aren't. We have wings. You no, like birds. You probably think that's impossible and wondering who the 'we' is, aren't you? Well, me (max), Fang, Iggy (who are 17), Nudge (who is 14), The Gasman or Gazzy (who is 11), my baby, Angel – not literally (who is 9), and Total, our dog. We are 98 percent human and 2 percent bird, complete with wings. We created at the school by the most horrible scientist in the world you can possibly imagine. We just exploded one of the branches of Itex and we need a bath.

"Everyone, there is a Hotel right below right below us. We can stop there for the night" I said. I did a 360 and saw that it was clear. "Okay. Iggy, land right below you." You're probably wondering why I'm giving directions to him. It's because he's blind. Everyone did a quick landing. We went into the Hotel and got two rooms.

"Well, this is better than sleeping in a tree." Iggy said as he flopped onto the bed. He was right. It was.

"Angel, sweetie, do you want to take a shower first?"

"Sure" she said. Angel went to take a shower. Okay. One down, six to go. Including Total and I. Total smells really bad. He needs a bath. After everyone took a shower, I took a long, hot shower. I like the way the water felt on my back. It was soothing. After I was done, I got into some shorts and a t-shirt. I told the boys to go to their rooms and get some sleep. Tonight I would sleep with Angel. Nudge kicks to much. I told Angel and Nudge it was time for bed. I was so close to falling asleep but, of course, the 'voice' had to make an entrance into my head again. You're probably wondering who the 'voice' is, aren't you. Well, it's a voice that is not my own. It tells me what to do and where to go. It's always been helpful but, most of the time it's just so annoying. It just pops up when I don't need it and is always quiet when I do need it.

"Maximum"

"What do you want voice?"

"Go to Forks, Washington tomorrow morning."

"Why?"Again I am left all alone with more questions than answers. God, it's so annoying. I guess I am going to Forks, Washington tomorrow. What a silly name for a town. I wonder what Fang will think. Speaking of Fang, I wonder if he left the laptop in here. I could do some research on the town the voice told me to go to. To my luck, he did. Okay. I sat on the floor and turned and the computer. It is said that Forks, Washington is one of the rainiest places in the continental US. Oh joy. Rain. Why couldn't the voice tell me to go somewhere warm and dry? I turned off the computer and just sat on the floor.

All of a sudden there was a knock at the door. It was a familiar knock. I got up and walk to the door. When I opened it I saw Fang. Of course, he was wearing all black. It made him look dangerous and mysterious.

"Hi" I said.

"Hi" he said back.

"You couldn't go to sleep?"

"No" he began. "You couldn't either?" He doesn't speak too much.

"No" I said.

"Wanna go fly?" he asked.

I smiled. "Yeah." He smiled back. He held out his had and I took it. It was warm and comforting. We are kind of going out now. We walked into my room, hand in hand, and went out the window. The cold wind felt nice on my face. We were in the air, not speaking, for about twenty minutes. We the landed in a tree where no one can see us.

"Fang"

"Yeah"

"The voice told me where we should go now."

"Where?"

"Forks, Washington."

"Did it tell you why?"

"As usual, no."

"Oh."

"Do you think we should?"

"Well, your voice has never been wrong."

"I guess so. We better get back. If one of the flock finds out we're missing, they are going to freak."

"Wait"

"Yeah." He pulled me close to him. I fit so easily into his arms. I hugged him back.

"I love you" he said.

I smiled widely. I loved him too. "I love you too" I said. It was so true. He then lifted my head and kissed me. The kiss was hungry and passionate. I kissed him back with as much hunger and passion. We broke apart and just sat on the tree branch. I suddenly remembered about the rest of the flock.

"Come on," I began, "we should get going."

"Okay." We kissed once more then fly off in the darkness of the night.

Okay. That was the first chapter.

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