Hey there Death Note fans!! This is my first fan fiction for this anime/manga so please be give me some constructive criticism! Thanks a bunch and I totally hope to receive some awesome review.
Disclaimer: No I am not the owner of Death Note although I really wish I was.
Blip: Alright so I was talking to my little sister (age 11) and was trying to describe what Death Note was about. I then showed her L and she was all like he reminds me of you. And now that I am thinking about it I am a lot like L. I sit funny, act sort of bizarre, and I think I am overly cautious and have a tendency to over analyze things. Funny and creepy at the same time.
Twists And Turns
A perfect world
The ultimate price
To seal their fate
Through "shini" eyes
A twisted game
That hangs in the balance
Of two young men
Who hate to loose
One with a book
The other a laptop
To write a name
Is to solve a crime
One black wing
The other white
On judgment day
They'll pay the price
The devil's candy
A sirens song
The fruit is forbidden
Yet we dare to taste
A creature so hideous
And murders so foul
The death god's are spectators
In a match without draw
Two young men
Testing the odds
A pencil, a teacup
Kira and L down for the count
Keep your friends close
But your enemies closer
A rule in which we should abide
A crunch of an apple
The flip of a page
Ryuk holds the last piece of existence
In his stone cold hands
"Good game, Yagami."
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