Summary: Same scenario as other fictions, girl get sucked into favorite game…Only what if she was turned into something other than an Elf. I know bad summary. This is my first fiction…So please be nice and patient…--

GoodMorningBeautiful2005: This is my very first Fanfic...So please give me any ideas about the story..or tell me if you have a problem or anything.

"Serena look out!" Jak and Daxter both warned me as an incoming attack from one of the Crab-metal heads' cannon headed my way. I believed right then I wasn't going to make it out of the palace ruins.

And I thought my life needed excitement. But I wasn't thinking this kind of excitement. Don't get me wrong; I have come really enjoy being around Jak, Daxter, and the rest of the underground/Freedom Fighter's, but a little less excitement wouldn't be such a bad idea right now.

I quickly dived under something that eventually caved in and all went dark. I began thinking about my friends and family. Would I ever get to see them again? With that last thought in my head I drifted off to unconsciousness'…

FLASHBACK

Our World

"Serena! Where is my eyeliner you borrowed last week?" said a girl obviously she was quite ticked off at me. That girl is my sister Jackie. She has a life, a great one at that. She wore a Blue denim blouse that left little to the imagination, with a sexy dark blue and sky blue skirt. She had raven hair down to her shoulder, beautiful blue diamond earrings and matching necklace. Unlike me she was beautiful. She's one of those popular girls you see at your school and me I'm more like a computer/mechanic nerd. She obviously didn't realize that I'm at the crucial part of my game, Jak2, I'm just about to kill Kor when she suddenly gets in front of me a shuts the game off. To tell you the least I'm not only ticked I'm Ped.

"Jakie what in hell do you think your doing. I almost had Kor dead!" I yelled at her. She clearly wasn't impressed at all.

"Well you disserved that if you can't even answer me." She said with annoyance. "I swear if you could you'd probably live in that game."

"Yeah I wish at least there be some excitement going on" was my first thought. " Your stupid eyeliner is most likely under your bed in you suitcase that you packed last night." She went and looked and would believe it I was right. As always. However, what really irked me was she didn't eve apologize for what she did.

Thankfully I saved when Jak opened up the metal head nest. So I went and turned the game back on, only to find that the gate wouldn't open any of my files. I started to get worried that maybe the playstation was broke, so when I went to hit the playstation, a portal suddenly opened on my TV screen, I though this was weird but then, it stated to suck me into the screen, the portal started getting bigger and bigger and soon I had no choice but to let myself be sucked into it.

Next thing I knew I was on the dirty ground in some city, with strange looking creatures walking around me. That's when I first realized I'm in JAK 2! In Haven City! "Boy this day was sure getting weird." I thought.

As I began walking around what is known as the slums, I began wondering why each person I bumped into started screaming. I thought maybe a KG was around or maybe Jak was around and was fighting some KG's. That's when I suddenly realized they weren't running from anybody, but ME! I then wondered why, that's when I fell into a puddle and got real good look at myself. I was neither Hunan, nor Elvian, but an Ottsel! Don't get me wrong I love the way Daxter looks cute and furry, but me I don't think so…And so my adventure begins.

Okay how that for a first chapter? Good or Bad? Review please!