People don't make rude remarks about this story since this is the first fanfiction I have ever made and please make sure to leave constructive criticism, Ideas would also be appreciated. Please read and tell me what you think of it! :) Sakura, Naruto, Sasuke and the rest of rookie nine are 16 years old, main couple is Sasusaku. I'm thinking i should make it a lemon...
"Blah, Blah, Blah" Sakura thought, Naruto was still yelling at her for revealing there true forms, yes they were not ordinary ninja. Naruto and Sakura both came from an extinct hidden village, it was called the village hidden in crystal. This village was the hardest to find since crystal mountains were very rare and only the most elite of the ninja kind lived there, that was until the village was exterminated. Naruto and Sakura had only been four years old at the time, of course Naruto was still the vessel of the nine tailed fox (Kyuubi) and of course he had no family since they had died when Naruto was almost 1 years old. Sakura remembered the day so clearly, she remembered being excited since it was her second day attending the ninja academy. Sakura smiled when she recalled punching her loudmouthed friend for screaming out the name of her crush but most of all she remembered the look of terror on the teacher's face, when he learned that their defences had been broken. They were told to evacuate immediately, as soon as their teacher climbed into the underground tunnel he was stabbed, the blade protruded from his stomach and blood gushed on the floor. Their teacher had looked towards Naruto and said a single word "Run", Naruto had whirled around and screamed at every one to RUN for their lives. Sakura saw how her classmates had died since they weren't able to outrun the enemy ninja. After all she and Naruto were the only ones who had bothered to train even before coming to the academy, they had run to Sakura's house. Her mother ran out and said they were fending of the enemies, then she turned towards me and said "Evacuate to the nearest hidden village, we will meet you there". Her mother told them the closest village was the Hidden leaf village. We ran for a day but before we reached the village I told Naruto it might be a good idea to hide our true capabilities, we also placed a transformation jutsu that made us look more childish.(Let's just say the Ninja from this village look way to handsome/pretty and the children do not look very childish.) I still remember that day and I was only four years old...(Note: This village full of "elite" ninja had a law to start training at the age of four.)
"kura, SAKURA!" Naruto shouted, Sakura snapped out of her flashback and into the present. "Seriously you don't even bother listening to me" Naruto said angrily, "Like what are we gonna grandma has already found out we're IMMORTAL ninja but what about when she finds out about our powers". Before Sakura could reply someone interrupted, "NARUTO, WHAT DID I TELL YOU!" Tsunade shouted angrily, "To never call you grandma" He squeaked, Tsunade immediately cooled down."you idiot, that was so close, your lucky she calmed down otherwise who knows how angry she could be when she finds out about our powers " Sakura whispered harshly. "Well, who's fault is it she's gonna find out in the first place" Naruto retorted, Sakura turned red in embarrassment. "yeah, i thought so"Naruto said with a smirk. "Stop trying to act smart Naruto i know your stu-" Sakura began, " BE QUIET!" Tsunade shouted. "Okay first of all, let's see what you really look like."Tsunade said, both Sakura and Naruto sighed before cancelling the transformation jutsu, when the jutsu was broken Tsunade examine the changes. Sakura no longer had a wide forehead, her facial features looked much prettier and her body was more mature, her Ninja gear consisted of a Black battle kimono with slits running up the sides, the kimono had a red strip on either edge of her sleeve. The slits revealed many weapons strapped onto her legs, she wore black boots, two swords were strapped to her back and her hair was in a bun with her bangs framing her face. Naruto also had two customary swords strapped to his back, he wore black shirt which had orange outlined on the sleeves, he wore black trousers, black sandals and a black cloak with hood which had his famous spiral printed on the back. Sakura's headband was tied around her neck(like Hinata's) while Naruto's was tied on his wrist. For the rest of the examination they had their abilities and chakra levels checked.
After the examination Naruto and Sakura were released, as soon as they stepped outside Sakura was immediately knocked to the ground by Ino, Sakura stood up and glared at Ino, "Sakura, Sakura you won't believe it." Ino said excitedly while she jumped up and down. "Spit it out Ino" Sakura said rudely, "FINE, your no fun, well anyways i just heard that SOMEONE came back to the village!" Ino said, apparently proud of the fact she had caught hold of such a exciting piece of gossip. Sakura and Naruto just raised their eyebrows at her, Ino rolled her eyes "Jeez you people are soooo slow" she said annoyed, "and now back to the topic. SASUKE'S BACK!" Ino shouted. "INO-PIG WHY THE HELL DID YOU HAVE TO SCREAM RIGHT IN MY EAR!" Sakura screamed, on the other hand Naruto looked shocked. "sasuke's back..." Naruto murmured, Sakura suddenly turned her head and looked blankly at Naruto, then she smirked "a certain UCHIHA is gonna be surprised, isn't he" Sakura said evilly. Naruto's face broke into a smirk of his own "Indeed" he replied with even more evilness...
sorry if this is too short and not up to standard cos it was rushed and it was my veryFIRSTfanfic, hope the story sounds a little good, and please review and leave some constructive criticism! and please tell me if i should continue or what!
thank you for reading this! :)