Hi! Please R&R after you read! I'm begging you people! This is my first fanfic. *that actually made it onto the internet.* Please understand if i make very random mistakes in the story!
Summary: The SK characters are now 16 and En Tao thinks his son Ren Tao is too weak. Hearing Yoh Asakura has a fiancée/trainer. En has a interesting plan. Anna/Yoh and Ren/OC.
"He What!?" An enraged Ren Tao shouted. His older sister Jun Tao sighed. "You have a fiancée," She repeated for the last time. "Her name is Sui. Come on. She's coming in an hour." Ren fumed. "You go. I'll stay here." Ren said stubbornly. "Bailong will you please grab him?" Li Bailong grabbed Ren. "You friends are coming. Asakura, Kyoyama, Oyamada, and the othe idiots."
Jun led Bailong ou of the room. "About time." Anna Kyoyama said annoyed.
"It's suppose to be here. Right?" Manta Oyamada asked. Yoh Asakura lazily nodded. "So where is she?" Yoh asked half awake. "Miss Jun!" A voice shouted. "Sui? Where are you?" Jun asked looking around. "I'm up here!" The girl replied. "I got stuck in the tree!" Ren, Anna, Manta, Ryu, Lyserg, Amidamaru, Bason, and Horo Horo sweatdropped. "That's my fiancée!? A clueless idiot who can't even get out of a tree!" Ren shouted angrily. Jun smiled. "She's a really good fighter. She's just a bit clueless and strange. Bailong get her down." Jun said with a tiny little sweatdrop. Bailong jumped up the tree and brought Sui down. Ren went to bang his head against a tree. "My life sucks. Damn that old man!" He said with each bang. Sui wore the exact same battle costume as Ren. She carried many different weapons with her. She had short brown hair and blue eyes. "Hi! Pleased to meet you all!" She said cheerfully. "Hey." They all greeted. "Meet my spirit Soujirou Seta." A spirit appeared next to her. A man around 18. He also had brown hair and blue eyes. Soujirou was wearing a light blue gi, a grey western style shirt and dark blue hakama. "Hi!" The spirit said equally cheerful. Amidamaru looked at the teen's spirit. "You were the child helping Makoto Shishio. The Tenken." Amidamaru said. Soujirou smiled. "I won't call myself a child but yes. I died shortly after." Soujirou said. "I want to challenge you. See who is stronger." Amidamaru said. "Lets go back first then see who's stronger." Anna said coldly.
"It's a very beautiful place you have here Miss Anna." Sui commented. "Lord Yoh! Can I battle the Tenken now?" Amidamaru begged. Yoh smiled. "How 'bout it Sui. Up to a challenge?" Yoh asked. "Sure!" Sui agreed cheerfully. "But which spirit?" Soujirou asked. Sui lifted her arms and a few spirits came out. "This is Hikaru a female Shinobi. Mr. Himura the Battousai. Mr. Shinomori a male Shinobi. Mr. Makoto a manslayer. Or Lao Gon Gon (Old man in chinese) that followed me here?" Sui asked. "I have a few more but I could only bring these guys." Sui added cheerfully. Amidamaru looked really interested. "I'll chose Himura. No! Makoto! No. I'll stay with the Tenken." Amidamaru said. "Integrate!" Yoh and Sui shouted. Amidamaru and Soujirou became small little soul things. Yoh had his wooden sword out and Sui had her wakizashi out. Sui lowered her sword and let her head hang. "I can't fight someone who won't hold a real weapon." Sui said still cheerful. Yoh let out a nervous laugh. "Here. Use this sword." Sui said handing a sword to Yoh. "It's a kodachi." Yoh looked at the sword in his hand. "Ok! Lets fight." Yoh said happily. Sui tapped her foot on the ground a few times and smiled happily. She charged and disappeared before reaching. "Whoa. She's fast." Horo Horo said. It amazed his simple mind. "Not really." Ren said. "Sure." Jun said rolling her eyes.
Yoh barely dodged the girls attack. "Oh. I missed. Okay! Even though that wasn't the real attack. Let's try 2 steps short of the Shukuchi Soujirou." Sui commanded cheerfully even though she missed the attack. 'Lets go. I won't miss again.' Soujirou said only to Sui. "Here I go." Sui said. Sui disappeared again. Yoh dodged again but Sui ran up the tree and cut Yoh across the chest. Sui ended up slipping and crashed into a tree. "Sui! Get up." Jun shouted. Sui jumped up and burst out laughing. "That was fun! I wanna do that again!" Yoh was laughing as well. "What's your last name?" Sui stopped laughing. "What?" "Your last name." Yoh repeated. "Ming. Sui Ming." Sui said. Ren stopped. "You're the legendary fighter! Said to be unbeatable!? Sui Ming!?" Ren shouted. "Hai! Sui Ming at your service." Sui said laughing again. "Oh my god." Ren muttered. "The same fighter who mastered most martial arts by looking at it and won over 200 tournaments?" Yoh asked. "Yep." Sui replied. "I thought Sui Ming was a 60 year old man who finally won martial art tournaments after 44 years of failures." Yoh said cluelessly. Everyone but Yoh, Sui, and Soujirou sweatdropped. "This has proven to be quite interesting." Jun said shaking her head.
Summary: The SK characters are now 16 and En Tao thinks his son Ren Tao is too weak. Hearing Yoh Asakura has a fiancée/trainer. En has a interesting plan. Anna/Yoh and Ren/OC.
"He What!?" An enraged Ren Tao shouted. His older sister Jun Tao sighed. "You have a fiancée," She repeated for the last time. "Her name is Sui. Come on. She's coming in an hour." Ren fumed. "You go. I'll stay here." Ren said stubbornly. "Bailong will you please grab him?" Li Bailong grabbed Ren. "You friends are coming. Asakura, Kyoyama, Oyamada, and the othe idiots."
Jun led Bailong ou of the room. "About time." Anna Kyoyama said annoyed.
"It's suppose to be here. Right?" Manta Oyamada asked. Yoh Asakura lazily nodded. "So where is she?" Yoh asked half awake. "Miss Jun!" A voice shouted. "Sui? Where are you?" Jun asked looking around. "I'm up here!" The girl replied. "I got stuck in the tree!" Ren, Anna, Manta, Ryu, Lyserg, Amidamaru, Bason, and Horo Horo sweatdropped. "That's my fiancée!? A clueless idiot who can't even get out of a tree!" Ren shouted angrily. Jun smiled. "She's a really good fighter. She's just a bit clueless and strange. Bailong get her down." Jun said with a tiny little sweatdrop. Bailong jumped up the tree and brought Sui down. Ren went to bang his head against a tree. "My life sucks. Damn that old man!" He said with each bang. Sui wore the exact same battle costume as Ren. She carried many different weapons with her. She had short brown hair and blue eyes. "Hi! Pleased to meet you all!" She said cheerfully. "Hey." They all greeted. "Meet my spirit Soujirou Seta." A spirit appeared next to her. A man around 18. He also had brown hair and blue eyes. Soujirou was wearing a light blue gi, a grey western style shirt and dark blue hakama. "Hi!" The spirit said equally cheerful. Amidamaru looked at the teen's spirit. "You were the child helping Makoto Shishio. The Tenken." Amidamaru said. Soujirou smiled. "I won't call myself a child but yes. I died shortly after." Soujirou said. "I want to challenge you. See who is stronger." Amidamaru said. "Lets go back first then see who's stronger." Anna said coldly.
"It's a very beautiful place you have here Miss Anna." Sui commented. "Lord Yoh! Can I battle the Tenken now?" Amidamaru begged. Yoh smiled. "How 'bout it Sui. Up to a challenge?" Yoh asked. "Sure!" Sui agreed cheerfully. "But which spirit?" Soujirou asked. Sui lifted her arms and a few spirits came out. "This is Hikaru a female Shinobi. Mr. Himura the Battousai. Mr. Shinomori a male Shinobi. Mr. Makoto a manslayer. Or Lao Gon Gon (Old man in chinese) that followed me here?" Sui asked. "I have a few more but I could only bring these guys." Sui added cheerfully. Amidamaru looked really interested. "I'll chose Himura. No! Makoto! No. I'll stay with the Tenken." Amidamaru said. "Integrate!" Yoh and Sui shouted. Amidamaru and Soujirou became small little soul things. Yoh had his wooden sword out and Sui had her wakizashi out. Sui lowered her sword and let her head hang. "I can't fight someone who won't hold a real weapon." Sui said still cheerful. Yoh let out a nervous laugh. "Here. Use this sword." Sui said handing a sword to Yoh. "It's a kodachi." Yoh looked at the sword in his hand. "Ok! Lets fight." Yoh said happily. Sui tapped her foot on the ground a few times and smiled happily. She charged and disappeared before reaching. "Whoa. She's fast." Horo Horo said. It amazed his simple mind. "Not really." Ren said. "Sure." Jun said rolling her eyes.
Yoh barely dodged the girls attack. "Oh. I missed. Okay! Even though that wasn't the real attack. Let's try 2 steps short of the Shukuchi Soujirou." Sui commanded cheerfully even though she missed the attack. 'Lets go. I won't miss again.' Soujirou said only to Sui. "Here I go." Sui said. Sui disappeared again. Yoh dodged again but Sui ran up the tree and cut Yoh across the chest. Sui ended up slipping and crashed into a tree. "Sui! Get up." Jun shouted. Sui jumped up and burst out laughing. "That was fun! I wanna do that again!" Yoh was laughing as well. "What's your last name?" Sui stopped laughing. "What?" "Your last name." Yoh repeated. "Ming. Sui Ming." Sui said. Ren stopped. "You're the legendary fighter! Said to be unbeatable!? Sui Ming!?" Ren shouted. "Hai! Sui Ming at your service." Sui said laughing again. "Oh my god." Ren muttered. "The same fighter who mastered most martial arts by looking at it and won over 200 tournaments?" Yoh asked. "Yep." Sui replied. "I thought Sui Ming was a 60 year old man who finally won martial art tournaments after 44 years of failures." Yoh said cluelessly. Everyone but Yoh, Sui, and Soujirou sweatdropped. "This has proven to be quite interesting." Jun said shaking her head.