Yosh! This is my very first fanfic so please review and be brutal. Im looking for all the help I can get.
'Human thoughts'
"Human Speaking"
'demon thinking'
"Demon/Devil trigger speaking"
'Jutsus'
disclaimer: I... OWN...nothing
shadows embrace
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"RASENGAN"!
"CHIDORI"!
The 2 attacks clashed in a battle of supremacy for both had a different reason behind it. Behind the sparking blue chakra was what most would find disturbing the boy, no older than 12, had dark grey hair, a navy blue shirt, white shorts, blue ninja sandals, and a navy blue hiate with the symbol for konohagakure based on it . That's not the disturbing part, the disturbing part was that the boy's hair had grown to the small of his back ,which had grown two had like wings. His eyes glowed the blood red of his sharingan. All his might was based on one thing to get revenge. Opposite him was a boy his same age wearing an orange and blue jumpsuit, with the same hiate, surrounded in an eery red fox-shaped cloak, blood red slit eyes and fangs that pushed past his lips. his reason behind it was a promise
Naruto stared into the eyes of his once brother like friend and saw... nothing , there was nothing left of the Sasuke he knew only a power-crazed maniac, a power-crazed maniac that had just drove that chidori into his stomach right above his seal.
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kyubi was still in the seal watching the battle with mild anticipation, when it felt a shudder ripple through the seal then he could plainly see purple yokai flow through naruto's chakra system .
"WHAT THE HELL IS THIS?"
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naruto's eyes flashed a glowing gray before an explosive boom threw both he and sasuke back, as sasuke looked toward the area naruto had landed once the smoke had cleared his eyes widened this wasn't the naruto he knew.
Before him stood something different it stood at 5'9 visible black musclar humanoid form , four black fox tails behind him, golden gauntlets and greaves, golden breastplate with the decal of crimson 9-tailed fox on it ,his sclera ,iris and pupil blended into a menacing blood red, his hair was long spiky and bone white . In his hand was an okatana, with a circular yellow guard, and a white cloth handle showing the black diamonds on the hilt. While sasuke was making these assessments naruto was hearing somthing coming faintly from his new sword.
'Might controls everything, and without strength you cannot protect anything. Let alone yourself.'
The voice resonated with power naruto never felt before rather than look a gift horse in the mouth he decided to use this power. "Uchiha"said naruto snapping sasuke out of his revere, "I will bring you back to konoha no matter what ,surrender now and spare yourself the pain." sasuke smirked at him before stating in a cocky manner " Dobe you won't be able to defeat me, I'm an uchiha! The best of the best! What can a no name like you do t-"sasuke was cut off as naruto's fist slammed into his gut knocking the wind out of him. "Scum, not worth staining yamato with your blood" as he said this several spectral swords appeared around him he grabed one from the air and held it to sasuke's throat "come back now or I kill you" calmly stated naruto "never!" spat the battered uchiha. Naruto had enough he put one arm on sasuke elbow and pulled hard ,CRACK! Sasuke screamed in pain as his right arm was broken naruto then repeated the proses with sasuke's left arm,and both his legs.
After hitting the black haired youth in the back of the neck with the butt of yamato he hoisted sasuke over his shoulder and walked in the direction of konoha after deactivating his devil trigger. "Promise fulfilled".
End chapter
valor: so what do you think love it? hate it? Whether I continue or not is based on the reviews so review please.
(An: also if I continue what should nartuo's next devil arm be ?
1. A scythe
2. A broadsword
/grieves
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axe.
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