Sweet Spring
-hi guys, I'm just a newbie here, so it's my first fan fiction, please don't be harsh on me. I'm kind of afraid of the grammars, so I hope you can help improve some of it. I would like assistance on Japanese words, what websites can I go for Japanese translations?
Disclaimer: I do not own BLEACH, I'm just an avid fan of it.
Chapter 1
It was another school day in the month of December, where winter is drawing closer and closer, Hitsugaya was now a middle schooler while still continuing their mission at the human's world.
He was walking alone as he head to school. It was fall back then when dry orange leaves still scattered around the ground.
At least I'm no longer an elementary. But why do I need to be left and stuck out here while all the others went back at Soul Society!
Flashback
"Taichou! We'll be heading back now."
" Hitsugaya-taichou, we look forward for your great guidance at Karakura town while we're gone."
"Oi! Toushiro! (kurosaki threw his orange stuffed animal)… Please take a look at him while were gone."
"Hey you Ichigo! I'll never let you to get all the excitement…. Grrr… remember I'm BLEACH greatest he…" Hitsugaya stepped on him [SFX: Squishk
"Matsumoto… Abarai… Kurosaki…" he was frowning maybe a little mad or worst." Will you please explain again, why of all shinigamis I'm the one left here?!"
"Well…" the oranged-hair guy sweating a little as he scratch his cheeks." They said that Soul Society has a little problem which they need all of the shinigamis… but they said someone should be left in the real world in case of some Arrancar attack it again… and… and…"
"And?"
"And… taichou… they said someone who's smart, superior and familiar of the real world should be left here."
That's the most unbelievable excuse I heard…
"Matsumoto… If I knew that those were your made-up reasons, when you come back here, you'll be facing a real hell…" he fires up, burning with madness.
The three back-off and was ready to go inside to start their way to Seretei.
"Taichou... Don't stop attending school okay? It'll be miserable if you'll have to repeat as an E-L-E-M-E-N-T-A-R-Y again and again."
"Just shuddup and go!"
And before they enter the port. "Oh… taichou… we'll bring Hinamori along with us when we come back." She smile.
And so they leave while Toushiro was a little silent out there after hearing Hinamori's name being mentioned.
"Ichigo!!! How dare you leave the real hero of this show?! Huh?! Come back here… And…" [SFX: squishk Hitsugaya step on him again, as he walk away.
End of Flashback
And now I'm stuck here… alone…'sigh'… it can't be helped anyway…
He head to his classroom. It was as noisy as ever, there were those throwing crumpled papers at each other, there were those reading and looking at porn magazines, some were playing their PSP.The room was to burst with each others laughter. He went to a seat beside the window.
Pathetic humans
By any second, their teacher came that shut the student's noise and all of them went back to their seats and become so silent as if nothing had happened. Behind the teacher was a girl, she's at the same height as Hitsugaya , she has crimson eyes, some very purplish red eyes that matches her dark brown hair.
"Okay everyone. I'm Mr. Otaku Nuo, your new sensei… your new adviser… and I have here your new friend and classmate… so be nice to her."
"Ohayo Minna-san! I'm Haru… Shin Haru… nice meeting you all." She said merrily.
"Okay Shin-chan, you may be sitted to what seat you would like to be sitted, so if you please, we'll be starting a new lesson right away…"
'ugh..' everyone moaned, except for Toushiro.
The girl look at every corner but there were no vacant seat except for the seat beside the white hair guy at the side of the window. She sit at it and take a look at Hitsugaya.
"Umm… did you bleach your hair?"
"Hn…" his eyebrows cross but he didn't look at her and continue his view outside.
"You look serious and silent, do you have any problem?"
"Hn…" his eyebrows almost meet but he continues ignoring her.
"You're so grumpy… eh…" she smiled at him.
What does this girl knows anyway? She's just some middle schooler…
"You're just like me… aren't you?"
"Huh?" Toushiro's emotion changed and he looked at her smiling at him. He was spaced out back then. He was a little confused of what she said. Haru was called by their teacher to translate the given phrase. Toushiro was still has sight with her and was a little surprise when she answered the question correctly though she was not listening.
She's something… Is she?
Haru sit after answering then smile at Toushiro again.
'You're just like me are you', what does that suppose to mean? She became weirder than any other of my classmates. What's with her?
End of Chapter1
Whew, at least the first chapter was finish! I hope you continue staying tune to the next chappie! It's so hard to create sequences that'll match each character, it made me realize how really great Anime creators are.
