Hey peps it's me again with a new story woot woot! I don't know if I should continue it though. If you like it review cuz' I'm only putting it up to see if it actually has a shot.
No ones P.O.V
A man was running desperately trying to escape his death that was surely coming. With a few quick movements of a sword the man was finished and he knew it. But for some reason as he lay dying on the side walk he just had to ask. "Who are you killer?"
"Miyako." came the simple reply as she stepped out of the shadows. She was a young girl about 15 with curly blue hair that extended just past her chest with ice blue eyes. She wore a black strapless dress form fitting to her chest and becoming flowy as it went down and ended at her knees. Decorated in delicate white butterflies.
With a couple quick hand signs she exploded into a thousand paper butterflies. She reformed in a fortress on the outskirts of the fire country.
"Miyako" yelled a frantic man "I-It's your older brother Renji he's been poisoned!"
With out another word she dashed down the hall. Finally arriving at the infirmary she rushed in.
Miyako's P.O.V
I fell to my knees crying I was never one to cry. I hated crying it was a sign of weakness. But just seeing my brother the only family I have laying there so pale and hooked up to all those machines I couldn't stop the tears.
His silver hair was out of its usual tight pony tail and his tan skin was paling. He looked like a ghost like he was already dead.
"You know weapons aren't supposed to cry . There not even supposed to feel." said the medic who watched the whole scene unfold.
"People like you may not regard us as even human but we are. Not many people can get close to us but when some one does we become very close, and to see the closest person to me like this... I cant help myself. Please tell me he's going to be ok."
"Truthfully not with out a antidote."
"Who poisoned him?" I asked full of rage. By this time my Rinnegan was fully activated.
"They call themselves the Akatsuki the one who poisoned is named Sasori of the red sand."
I'm going to kill this Akatsuki group was the only thing going through my mind as I stormed out of there. But before I got to far I was held back by two strong arms.
"Let me go!" I screamed as I lashed out to who ever was holding me back.
"Listen to me kid! I know you want them dead but you cant kill them! They are powerful people their deaths will cause an uproar." I knew that voice well it was the voice of my best friend Leo. He was right as much as I hated to admit it.
"So what do you expect me to do? I wont just sit around and watch him die. He's my brother he's all I have left!" I was barley able to choke out the last sentence.
"We have a plan." Leo whispered out " We know where the Akatsuki lives. If we go there you can Rinnegan Sasori and find out where the antidote is. So are you in?"
"I'm in." Leo was always a man with a plan he's only 17 but very smart. With short curly red hair and emerald eyes he sticks out in a crowd. The other person with us was Yuki he had choppy white hair a wolf like grin with pail skin.
"You have to be careful because Pain also has the Rinnegan." Yuki said with a worried face.
"I will."
"Well boys" I said to them "Lets go bag us some Akatsuki."
In Ame Konan's P.O.V.
I felt a tear slip down my face but I didn't care I always let my self cry on this day. Today was the anniversary of the day my daughter was kidnapped from us it happened 14 years ago but it still hurt.
Mine and Pains daughter was taken from us we searched for months trying to find her. We didn't find her and no ransom note came. We all knew she was probably dead and the abductor was more in likely one of Pains enemies. I refuse to have another child. When my little Miyako was dead.
"Konan please come in. You'll catch a cold." I heard Pain say.
"Alright."
When we walked in even Pain was taken back. The base was a wreck and every one was on one wall or another pined with sea bone needles in their cloths.
"Pain! Konan! Watch out who ever he is he's fast and skilled!" yelled Zetsu
Pain and I immediately went back to back. My hart was pounding some one who could get the others pined all without showing his face had to be powerful this worried me deeply. Two little marbles rolled out from behind a wall. Pain and I thought nothing of them until they exploded into thick smoke. Before long we were pined to a wall as well.
"Who are you show yourself!" I yelled now highly pissed. I prefer to have this day fight free so I can mourn my daughters death. Who ever he was I would hunt him down and kill him for this!
"Well if you feel so adamantly about it I guess it wouldn't hurt. Oh and I'm a girl." spoke a female voice. As she steeped out of the shadows. She had a small smirk on her face here eyes were a pail blue accenting her dark blue hair. She looked so familiar for some reason.
"Guys I'm in." she said into a walkie-talkie
"K.K were coming in. Make sure you don't get caught in Pains Rinnegan."
"Gust what exactly do you plan to do to us you little brat?" I lashed out
"Well no need to name call. All were hear for is to get an antidote fore my brother then well leave. No harm done."
"You have the opportunity to kill us and your not going to?" questioned Pain
"Nah not what we stand for."
"So who's Sasori and where are his antidotes?"
"That would be me and door to the right. You know my name so what's yours?"
"Miyako." she said before radioing the information in.
"Got it!" Said the person over the radio and with that the needles were off of us and she exploded into paper butterflies.
So what do you think? If no one likes it I'm going to take it down cuz' it will be just an eyesore.
