First story, an idea I've had for a while. I'll try to post chapters as soon as I can. Please review with thoughts, positive or negative so I can improve the story for your liking.
The world was black, a pure cover of taint. I didn't know where I was, or what had happened. I felt like I was drifting in space. Pure black scene
At first I heard nothing, and then came a buzzing sound that was faintly like voices yelling. A roar sounded loudly, yells of voices familiar. Then I heard him. A voice so well-known, a voice that brought back so many memories sounded in my head.
I saw his face, oh god how I missed him. The cool grey eyes were so peaceful, I felt like I was floating. I felt at peace. His face was my safe heaven giving me the peace. I no longer felt the terror the pain, the misery of what has happened for months.
His mouth opened, "Morrianna…."
No! He's leaving! "No, do not go! Come back! Nathaniel!" The blackness and the heavenly site were pulled away from me. My eyes open and I see Wynne and Alistair. It all rushes back to me: Nathaniel, him being sent away, the betrothal, the betrayal, and becoming a Warden. All of it reality, all of it will make him hate me forever, for what I will have to do. All I hope is he is still alive… Nathaniel….