Hi, I'm Janus1 and this is my first story. If you do review this, (which would be greatly appreciated), please be nice, and let me know if there are things I can work on. E.g.- grammar, spelling etc.
So, let's start the story….
Amy's POV
I could smell the crisp summer breeze in my face, mixed with the soft scent of the flowers that I was passing.
Every Friday evening, in this same spot, I would meet my cute and adork-able boyfriend, Evan. He was my rock throughout the Vespers (of course, there was Dan…. when he wasn't being a dweeb.) He kept me together when I thought all hope was lost. He kept me going.
As I rounded the corner of a large apple tree, I caught sight of what looked like Evans bag. When I picked it up, there was a small thud as his thick framed glasses came tumbling out. He's such a nerd, a cute nerd!
"Evan?" I called. "Evan, are you there? There was still no reply, and I started to get worried. Oh no, something's happened! I thought frantically.
I couldn't take it any longer, so I got out my cell phone and dialled his number. After ten seconds of waiting, I realised that his phone had been turned off.
Why is his phone turned off? Is he ignoring me?
Just as I had started walking away, I heard something coming from behind me. I positioned myself in my defensive stance, and was ready for anyone, or anything, that came my way.
A head started to from the rose-bush a couple of metres away from me, and a body was slowly pulling itself out of the prickly bush. I saw dirty blonde hair appearing through all the leaves, it looked identical to Evan's hair.
Wait! That is Evan's hair! Oh my God, it was Evan!
"Evan!" I yelled.
"Amy?" He replied, confused.
I ran up to him and hugged him tight. But this didn't feel like it used to. Sparks didn't fly, and it didn't feel special.
I remember, after we defeated the Vespers, how Ian and I hugged. It felt like fireworks had been into the sky.
Why am I thinking about that? It was a hug of victory, no strings attached whatsoever!
I love Evan? But it came out as more of a question.
"Ames, are you alright? You seem a little dazed." My boyfriend asked.
"Oh my God!" You're mouth, it's bleeding!" I , ignoring the question.
"Oh, yeah it is." He said, not sounding very bothered.
I searched around in my bag for a tissue. I finally found one and was about to start cleaning up Evan's mouth when he interrupted me.
"Wait! I'm fine, there's no need to do that! There's hardly any blood, I think your over reacting." He said, sounding very flustered.
"Are you sure? I don't want it to become infected!" I asked.
"Yeah, I'm sure. So, want to start walking around?" Evan asked, trying to change the subject.
"Um….. Ok." I answered, still thinking why he wouldn't let me wipe off the blood.
That is, if it even was blood?
First chapter done! Sorry if this was a little short, I'm still trying to put together in my mind how the story is going to go. Let's make a deal: I'll post the next chapter if I get 5 reviews (or more!)
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Janus1