Here's the first chapter of my new, My Love Story! Fanfiction, My love will capture you in 182 days. I hope you like it. Since I haven't written in a while it might not be the best and have some grammar mistakes, but bear with me, I will be back in top form. Hope you like it and please enjoy!
Speaking – Verdana
Thoughts – Times New Roman
One day close to summer at Shuei High School, in class 1-6, the usual gang was sitting in class during break.
Kurihara and his friends were talking and messing around, Takeo was sleeping as usual, and Suna was daydreaming while looking outside the classroom window.
Suna could here Kurihara and his friends chatting in the back. "I'm so glad summer is about to start, that means girls and their swimsuits!" Kurihara said excitedly. "Yeah, can you imagine meeting your dream girl at the beach!" one of Kurihara's friends said excitedly. All of them started drooling while daydreaming with sparkles in their eyes.
'My perfect girl has long blonde hair that lifts with the wind, eyes as blue as the sky, and….no I will not think about her' Suna thought. He didn't want to think about her, the reason he couldn't date other girls, because all he would do is end up comparing them to her.
Suna slowly started drifting back when he heard a phone go off, and heard Takeo's voice speaking about the beach. Suna's thoughts started drifting back to reality and away from memories of the past. As Suna heard how he had no choice but to go to the beach, and saw Takeo shouting at Kurihara about being inappropriate; all he could think about is how hard he had to concentrate to get his mind off of sky blue eyes.
As Takeo and Suna walked home with Takeo rambling, Suna was thinking about why he couldn't get her off his mind…especially since he hadn't thought about her for a while.
As Suna tried to engage in the conversation about the beach, when they got up to their floor, Takeo opened the door to his apartment to reveal Yuriko. "Takeo and Suna, come in, Suna your mom is here too. We have someone we want you to see" said Yuriko with a coy smile.
As they both walked in and toke their shoes off, they saw two other pairs along with their families' shoes. When the boys sat down, Suna turned to his right and spoke to his mother. "Mom, what are you doing here?" "Oh Suna, we have some new neighbors that moved onto the floor that I think you'll recognize. This is Takatsu Rin and her mom, you remember them right? You, Takeo, and her all used to be good childhood friends until she moved the summer before middle school."
Suna threw his head up to look at her in shock…his dream girl…his sky blue eyed girl. "Yes, I remember! Welcome back!" said Takeo in his loud voice while giving her a thumbs up.
A woman with black hair and blue eyes exactly like Rin's said, "Thank You, I'm Takatsu Mikoto. We originally left because my husband got transferred from work; but he is being transferred back her in a couple of weeks. So we came early to make sure everything is done before he comes back here to work. We just wanted to come and tell everyone we have returned, and hope you guys would be as welcoming as you were when we first met."
"No problem, nice to have you back" Said Yuriko and Suna's mom. "Neh...Takeo, Suna, let's try and pick up from where we left off as friends, okay?" said Rin. "Yes!" said Takeo as he gave a thumbs up again. Takeo then proceeded to tell Rin everything she missed and about Yamato; while the mom's talked over tea. And Suna… he just sat there with one thought in his head 'Rin…'
Suna was walking back home from the convenience store. After Takeo had left his house after calling Yamato, his mother asked him to go to the store and pick up some things. As he was walking down the street, he didn't see someone stop on the stairs he was about to walk up.
"Suna…" a female voice called out. Suna looked up only for his eyes to widen as he saw Rin a few steps above him. She was looking down at him with those sky blue eyes that looked a sapphire color as she narrowed them, the wind making her hair float in the wind. "Rin…" he said.
"Suna, why won't you speak to me?" Suna's face looks stunned, until he forced it to become a blank mask as usual. "I have nothing to say to you." Suna said in a monotone voice.
"If this is about what happened when I left, I didn't mean too!" Rin said, raising her voice a little while bringing her hand to her chest. "
Yes, but it did happen." He said in a dark voice.
"Suna…I" Rin said; but Suna interrupted by shouting, "I don't want to hear it!" Even though he didn't want to, his brain started drifting back to the summer he was starting Middle school…the year him and Rin both confessed their love for each other…
~Flashback~
They were both standing on a bridge face to face, faces flushed; with the red and orange sunset in the background.
"Suna…" started Rin, her blonde hair flowing in the wind and blue eyes looking down
"Yes…" said Suna, equally as nervous but wanting to keep his eyes on the beautiful creature in front of him
"I...I…I love you Suna!" shouted Rin, looking him straight in the eyes, face flushed and hands balled to her sides
"I...I…I love you too!" shouted Suna, looking her straight in the eyes, and face and hands exactly like Rin's.
Rin, in relief, through herself into Suna's arms to hug him; and Suna stood still in shock, until he began to loosen up and hug Rin back.
Rin raised her head from his chest and looked up at him with an adorable, closed eye smile and said, "Now, we can spend the rest of the summer together and then go into Middle School as boyfriend and girlfriend, right?"
Suna looked down at her and smiled sweetly at her and nodded, "Hai, yes we can…"
~End of Flashback~
"Suna…I still love you…" Rin whispered, looking down at the steps.
"I understand you had to leave with your family, but if you did love me…how could you leave…without saying goodbye!" Suna gritted out from his teeth.
~Flashback~
"Mom!" Suna shouted, running out of his room and into the rest of the house.
"Yes, hunny?" said Suna's mom as she walked up to him, face a little nervous.
"Mom, can I go over to Rin's house to see her?" Suna said excitedly, jumping up and down in place.
"Umm, sweetheart…they won't be there anymore…they had to go far away…and she couldn't say goodbye…but she left a note" Suna's mom said slowly and sadly.
"What….no..." said Suna as his eyes began to tear up.
He hurried to open the letter, hoping its content's would say this was all a practical joke or a big mistake.
Sunna began to read the note in his mind, imagining Rin's voice reading it to him.
It said: 'Dear Suna,
By the time you read this, I will be gone, and you will not be able to get to me. My daddy got transferred to a work branch in China, so I have to go too. I tried to convince them to let me stay with Takeo or your family, but they said I was too young and that we couldn't impose on others. I'm sorry we won't be able to go to Middle School together or be boyfriend and girlfriend anymore. You should move on and find a new girlfriend/girl best friend, stay friends with Takeo, make new friends, and just enjoy Middle School to the fullest. And then rinse and repeat for high school. I couldn't do this to your face knowing I will probably never see you again; so I could only do this in the letter. So here it goes: Goodbye Suna, I hope you go on happily even if we never see each other again. I will be leaving on the 7:30pm plane; so if you see my plane wave goodbye to me because I will be.
Love,
Rin'
"No!" screamed Suna, as he ran out the house.
"Suna, come back!" screamed his mom. Realizing he was too far, she shook her head and went inside to get ready for when he came home and needed comforting.
Suna kept running, trying to find any sign of Rin; and every time he passed places he had been to before he saw memories of him, Takeo, and Rin…his precious Rin. Finally, he stopped to take a break on the bridge where they both confessed.
'It's already sunset…' Suna thought. He heard a loud sound and looked up to see a plane. He looked at his watch and saw the time, 7:30pm. "NOOOO!" Suna screamed loud into the sky, knowing he had lost Rin forever. And all he could do as the plane started to disappear was wave at it like she said. Here was the same spot, same sunset…but this time instead of two people there was one. Instead of love there was hurt, instead of them coming together they were leaving each other, and instead of a growing relationship starting there was the breaking of a relationship. This wasn't a day of love; this was a day of heartbreak…just like how Suna's heart was breaking.
~End of Flashback~
"I just couldn't stand to hurt you…but I still love you…" Rin breathed out, with tears dripping down her face. Suna couldn't stand holding in his emotions anymore and started to shout. "And you thought that was going to help?! It still left me broken hearted, even more because I didn't get to even say goodbye! If you really loved me as much as I loved you, you would have come to say goodbye, no matter how much it hurt! So now I don't love you anymore, I hate you!" Suna screamed.
It took all his strength to say he hated her, but with so much pain came anger; and he wanted her to feel as hurt as he did when she left. She looked up at him, his face angry and him panting, with tears still running down her face. When she looked him in the eyes, his face softened a bit and she could see the love he held for her still in his eyes. "You don't hate me…" Rin whimpered as she looked back down and began to wipe her eyes.
Suna's face had softened but his voice still had a hard edge to it as he said, "How would you know?" Rin looked up with determination and red rimmed eyes, and said in a voice full of confidence, "I know you still love me because of your eyes!" Suna eyes widened in shock, was he that obvious?
Rin continued, "The love I see in your eyes when you look at me! I know you still love me but you don't trust me, so I will earn your trust!" Rin swung her arm around and pointed at Suna. "I will make you fall fully and utterly back in love with me! Starting tomorrow, let's go on a date!" she shouted determined.
Suna looked at her in shock before a small smile before saying, "Sorry, I can't busy tomorrow!" Rin jumped in surprise before saying, "No way! You're lying!" Suna looked amused before answering, "No…really, I'm going to the beach tomorrow with Takeo, Yamato, and a group of guys and girls." He then walked up the steps and passed her, while Rin was shocked stiff.
'Girls….' Rin thought. She began thinking of all those girls in bathing suits, oggoling and watching her shirtless Suna, while having their bodies on display. 'NO, I will NOT allow that!' Rin thought angrily. "Suna! I will be going with you!" screamed Rin as she glared at the back of his figure a distance away. She ran behind him, arms moving wildly back and forth; and a dust cloud behind her, until she caught up to him.
Suna caught her arm before she could run past him and said, "Okay settle down, I'll tell you the details." As Suna and she began to walk back to the complex, he told her all the details she would need for tomorrow.
After getting all the info she needed for tomorrow Rin said, "I will get there extra early to set up for us!" Suna raised his eyebrow at her before saying, "Or you could just come with us…"
Rin shock her excitedly before exclaiming "The first step of love is being helpful and punctual!" Rin ended this sentence with a closed eyed smile and a thumbs up.
Suna chuckled before saying, "Stop that, your acting like the female version of Takeo." But this only made Rin's smile wider as she said, "But everyone likes Takeo because of who he is; and if I'm like Takeo doesn't that mean you like me Suna?" Suna took the time to look at her smile, her eyes, the way her hair blew in the wind. He thought, 'Yeah…that does mean I like you.' But he responded with, "Don't be ridiculous" while blushing slightly.
When they got to the complex and reached their floor, Rin said, "Goodbye Suna… see you tomorrow..." She flushed slightly before quickly giving Suna a peck on the cheek, before running inside and closing the door behind her.
Suna stood shock still for a minute before whispering "Goodnight Rin" into the air before heading to his house. Suna walked into his house and gave his mother the things he picked up for her before hurriedly walking into his room to think.
He flopped on his bed and thought, 'She still loves me and I still love her. If I didn't, I would be able to date girls without thinking about her. But I don't think I can trust her just yet, she left before and she can do it again. So I won't tell her I'm in love with her, I won't say it.'
While Suna is thinking about this in a few apartments down, Rin is laying on her floor with her head in her arms thinking also.
'He loves me, I can see it in his eyes; but there is also sadness and mistrust in them. I never thought my actions would backfire. I wasn't able to move on with my life even when I tried, no boy could make me feel the same. He won't tell me he loves me; but I will tell him every day until he's ready. I know he doesn't trust me but I will win it back'
Then even though they were apartments away, they thought in sync:
'I will do this! I will be successful! I swear!"
How many days until Suna admits his love: 182 days
Now that's you've seen my first chapter, I hope you are hooked on it. Thank you so much to the people who have read it, I hope you liked it and it added a bit of brightness to your day. I will continue to update this and try to with my other story (also at this time I am contemplating a black butler fanfiction). When school is in session again, I will try to update every weekend; and if it becomes too much, every other weekend. Again thank you for reading, and please follow, favorite, and review. Until next time, and have a good one!
