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Author's notes
Location
Thoughts
"Speech"
Whatever in happening
And with that out of the way I have seen fit to tell you that I don't own any of the games I may mention in this story as of now but might in the future and the character playing the role of OC has not been named as of this point but belongs to me. All other characters/monsters in this belong to whoever owns Evolve currently.
With this out of the way lets begin Chapter-1.
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My home, a town in EnterCityNameHere, England, United Kingdom
After a full day wasted (2pm-10pm) of trying to find a way of downloading Evolve onto my computer for future gameplay and finding out that the servers have shutdown along with the chance of downloading the game from a random site, I receive an email containing what looks like a code for the game on steam. I test out the code and surprisingly it works, gets added to my game list and ready for installation. I hit install and the game boots up, no download as if it was here all along, colour around me distorts without my notice and an airflow begins to pickup towards the screen where the full screened program works on drowning out all of the game sound. A rawr catches my attention as it was deafeningly loud, not coming from my cheap headphones and emanating from the other side of the vortex that had overwritten my glitchy tv (I have no computer screen and resort to using an 'old flatscreen' as the computer screen) and begins sucking me inside deceptively fast as if gravity was rotated so that I'd fall headfirst into my tv and fall I did while screaming my first swear word in seven whole years "GOD-!". I never did finish the word but it was as close to swearing as I got.
During my fall forwards I neglected to notice that I was the only thing falling and instead of breaking the cracked screen further (the screen was cracked when Oliver sat on it back when Eddie was still alive and the funny thing that Eddie is the cat in this, not the dog who you now know is Oliver), I fall into a liquid that immediately burned my eyes, nostrils and mouth along with anything else that came into contact with this (similar to muscle pain after a ten minute run (I'm not healthy at all) actually) and finally after all that drama I find myself unconscious.
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Unknown tropical/mountainous location
I begin to awaken in a state similar to that one time I tried and surprisingly succeeded to hibernate (I believe that three days sleeping counts as hibernation but please tell me if this is true). My muscles (lack there of in my usual case) on my arms, neck, throat, chest and tail are burning from overuse... Wait, wait, wait, muscles? Tail? I begin to unleash my less sane thoughts at this new situation vocally "RRRAAAWWWRRR!" is what others would have heard echoing into the distance. All that from when I shouted, and I quote "WHEN IN SEVEN HELLS DID I GROW A TAIL AND MUSCLES!" in a shout that was echoing for about a few kilometres, all in a bad move alerting all the savage fauna, scientists, military personnel and Alphas to my current location in a move where I had unknowingly placed a target on my head for all the savages in the area.
Imagine my surprise when I opened my eyes and found myself in a location that I had never been to and yet seemed eerily familiar in the body of a Goliath from the game Evolve and try to imagine the war cry I produced in the confusion of it all and suddenly... I honestly don't know how to continue writing because I was unconscious again from a head bashing that I didn't know I was doing in a dumb and poorly thought through plan to end the confusion. Before you ask, I for some reason had full access to my movements instinctually as if I had been in this body for days to the point of unknowingly smashing one's own head against a rock wall without noticing. I later realise that these are my own insane ramblings of what I was doing before my passing out. "I'm beginning to believe that I've in my already insane state have gone crazy and should seek a dentist for veterinarian checkup of my mental health. Wait, after a sentence like that I really should check my mental health" I mumble to myself before facing the insane situation before me.
1 I am in a location that I don't recognise but looks familiar for some reason, 2 My body is not the human one I'm used to and instead one from a gory game that I failed to obtain, 3 I'm trapped under the rubble of an avalanche that I think was caused by my cracked head (yes cracked, not bruised, not bleeding, not covered in hair that is in dire need of combing, cracked) in a way that should not be possible even with my new body type, 4 None of my itches have starte-oh, spoke too soon, 5 none of my muscles have made any popping noises yet. And that summarises my thoughts of my new position before I heard the rawr of, not a beast but a jetpack or two and some muffled shouting.
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