Hello! I'mSoniclover3 with the story Blind Brother
Sonic: You translated it? Wait a minute... You know English?!
Me: Umm... a little. Not a lot, but enough to try to translate it
Shadow: Back to the topic. You copied this from Redemerald6
Me: No I didn't. I just asked her for a piece of her story
Shadow: Hmph. Sure you did
Sonic: Now Shadow, leave her alone. She's the author, so she can make you suffer
Shadow: She wouldn't dare
Me: Yes, I would.
Shadow: Wanna bet?
Me: Bring it on!
Sonic: Now, now guys. Let's start the story ok?
Shadow & Me: Ok.
Me: Could you please?
Shadow & Sonic: She doesn't own us or any other character mentioned here (With slight exceptions)
It was a calm the sky was dark blue with lots of stars in it, a purple colored hedgehog was running through the forest edge with a little bundle covered by a green blanket in her arms.
The hedgehog left the little bundle in the entrance of a house near downtown, where Mrs. Nightfall and her son Shadow lived. Shadow's father had died several months before in a car accident, leaving all his money to his wife and his 4 year old
The hedgehog knocked the door and quickly ran to hide in a bush. When the door opened there was a little black hedgehog with red eyes and red stripes on his spikes, legs and arms, he also had a white chest fur. When he saw no one at the door, he turned to all sides he could think of, finally seeing the floor to discover a little bundle in a green blanket
Shadow stared confused at the bundle and called his mother, which at the mere sight lifted it up and carried it gently inside. When the purple hedgehog saw the door being closed, she came out of the bush. While she walked away she said "I know you'll be better here where nothing will stop you" and then she disappeared into the darkness
When they entered the house, the little bundle in Mrs. Nightfall started to cry
Mrs. Nightfall partially unwrapped the bundle allowing revealing a little blue hedgehog
"Shh, shh, everything's fine honey"- she said trying to calm the little hedgehog
Shadow approached to his mother and stared at the little hedgehog, seeing how he stopped crying
-What is that mommy? - asked Shadow without knowing what his mother was thinking on
-He's your new little brother Shadow- she answered smiling lovingly but a little sad
-My little brother? Great! And what's his name mommy?
-His name is Sonic, Sonic Nightfall Hedgehog – she answered as she ran her fingers down the baby's cheek. When the baby heard his name, he opened his eyes to show a horrible truth, his eyes were a dull lifeless green, little Sonic was blind
-Look mommy, his eyes are beautiful- said Shadow without realizing its meaning
Noticing that Mrs. Nightfall felt an incredible sadness, just thinking that the little one could never see his brother or his mother, she felt heartbroken for the little child
Shadow saw a few tears fall down his mother's face
-Mommy, why are you crying? You don't like his eyes? - He asked a little confused
-It's not that dear-she said sobbing- It's just that… your little brother…Sonic (she sighed) Sonic can't see you and never will be able to. - She said with a sad look focused on Sonic
-B-but why? - Shadow asked with sadness in his little shining ruby eyes
-Because he's blind- his mother answered with all the sadness and sorrow in her voice and eyes
Shadow POV
With this response I could only see my little brother looked at the nothingness and I imagined how bad it would not know how is our mother's face or anything, only darkness. With this thought I swore myself to take care of my little brother. To protect him so nothing bad would happen to him
3 YEARS LATER
-Shadow! Wakey wakey – Sonic shouted from his bed. When I see him I realize that he is standing, leaning against the bars of his bed (his bed has some bars to prevent him from falling off the bed in the night while he is asleep, but is not a crib) with his face turned to where my bed is, but his eyes on the wall. I'm still sad at the thought that Sonic doesn't kwon how we look, but it's going to be different now because Mom enrolled Sonic to a special kindergarten for blind children
-I'm awake now Sonic, ready to go to school? – I asked cheerfully
-Yeah! I'm gonna learn lots of things like you – he answered turning to the sound of mi voice
-Very well then, let's get you ready – I told him changing his clothes and taking him downstairs to eat breakfast
-Hello dears did you sleep well?
-I slept rea- Ok Mommy! - Sonic interrupted me – Sorry- he apologized
-He, no worries- I told him. I wasn't surprised by his apology, since he was a very respectful and polite kid for his age
-Ok, here's your breakfast, Eggs, bacon and some grape juice
-Thanks Momma- we said at the same time
I took Sonic to his chair and helped him to eat telling him where his plate, his glass, the napkin and his fork. When we finished eating mom gave us our lunch and told us to be careful when we were going to school or coming from it
We walked a few blocks until we arrived to Sonic's school, I was surprised that there were so many kids there. After leaving him I went to my school that was about two blocks from Sonic's, so there was no problem for me to go for him
END SHADOW POV
SONIC POV
When I arrived to my school, I heard lots of boys and girls around me. Shadow had taken me to my classroom and introduced me to my teacher, she guided me to a seat near two girls named Sonia and Helen and a boy called Manic (from what I heard)
-Good Morning children. I'm teacher Marine, but you can call me Miss Mary or just Miss ok? Now we are going to meet each other. I'm going to walk around and when I touch somebody's head you'll say your name, how do you want to be called your favorite activities, if you have siblings and your looks if you want to. Got it?
-Yes teacher Marine
-Ok, let's start- she said. Her footsteps were heard through the classroom- It's your turn
-Ok- said a boy- My name is manic the Hedgehog, I like to be called Manic, I like to play the drums (Or at least try to), I have a twin sister called Sonia, I'm a green hedgehog, the quills on my head are standing to the front, giving me a "punk" style or that's how my dad says, I wear a red vest, blue pants, tennis and a medallion
-Thank you Manic – the teacher said walking around again – Your turn
-Hi! My name is Nora the Echidna I like to be called Nora, I like pop music, I have a big brother called Julian. I'm an orange echidna with long hair and I wear a pink dress and slippers
-Thanks Nora- her voice sounded really near to my table- Your turn- she said touching my head
-My name is Sonic Nightfall Hedgehog, you can call me Sonic, I like to play with my big brother and hear him play the guitar, and his name is Shadow. I'm a blue hedgehog and I wear blue pants, white gloves, an orange shirt and tennis and I also have a medallion
-Thank you Sonic- she said walking away, I sat on my place and thought "How many children there would be in my classroom?" I got distracted until a girl started talking
-Hello, my name is Fernanda the Cat, you may call me Fer. I like to smell the flowers of the field, I'm an only child. I'm a white cat and I wear a blue shirt and a skirt and shoes with buckles
-Thanks Fer, now is your turn dear –the teacher said
-My name is Paul the Fox, you can call me Paul, I like to play with my ball and talk to my friends. I have a half-brother called Kyle, I'm a red fox and I wear a short a shirt and sandals
-Thank you Paul. Now is your turn dear
-My name is Sonia the Hedgehog, please call me Sonia or Sony. I like to annoy my brother and play the piano (or at least try to play some notes). I have a twin brother called Manic, I'm a magenta colored hedgehog with long hair. I wear a shirt; some long dark blue gloves a short skirt, tights, a pair of boots and a cute medallion
-Thanks Sonia-she said passing through the classroom –Your turn
-Ok. My name is Helen the Chimpunk, you can call me Helen, Haley or Hal. I like to try food mixtures; I have a little sister named Grettel and a big sister called Andrea. I'm a brown chipmunk with short hair and I wear a long shirt, tights and black shoes
-Thanks Hal- the teacher said walking around –your turn- silence was heard- Come on don't be shy
-All right. My name is Vanessa the Rabbit. You can call me Vane or Vanny. I like to sing and make new friends. I don't have brothers but I live with my eldest cousin called Harry. I'm a white rabbit with brown spots. I wear a denies pants a pink shirt and pink shoes
-Thank you Vanny. Now is your turn.
-Umm, my name is Victor the Chameleon; you can call me Vic or Victor. I like to travel and sci-fi stories. I have a big brother called Daniel and a smaller one called Javier. I'm a gray chameleon, I wear a denies pants a shirt and tennis
-Thanks Vic, well now there's only you.
-My name is Frederick, but you can call me Freddy or Fred. I like to listen to the sound of every place. I have a big brother called Todd. I'm a boy with brown hair. I wear a denies pants and a silver shirt and tennis
-Thank Fred. Now that you know each other, I'm going to teach you the basics so anything can stop you. Because, that you can't see doesn't mean you can't do anything in your lives. First I'll help you to improve your hearing so you'll be able to see by it
-Cool! - Some of us said
And the class started
She played a recording of the forest sounds and told us to identify what made them
And that's how the class passed until break, which was inside the classroom for our safety. Inside the classroom, there was something like a little garden so we could sit and talk there, it was optional
In my table there were Manic Sonia and Hal. The girls talked about their dolls and stuff like that. Manic and I talked about music and our siblings
-What's your favorite kind of music?
-Well, I like almost every kind of music, bur I prefer pop and rock
-So do I. Me and Sonia love rock and pop. And how is your brother?
-Well, he's a bit overprotective over me, he loves me a lot. He shows his love by his own way, he's a little quiet too. He's a very good brother, he helps with everything he can
-Wow, that's a good brother, Sonia's the same, just that she is a little naughty sometimes, and she also likes to annoy me. She's really good at it
-I can tell by the way she talks to you
And so we spent the time talking about our families. Manic and Sonia live with a middle class family. Their mother stays home and their father works in a hospital
After break the teacher taught us a game where she would make a noise and we had to follow it and eventually find it. The time passed really fast, she also taught us words in braille, a writing system for blind people
It consisted in 6 packages, some of them were sunk and everyone was different making many combinations, each one was a letter
When school finished Shadow came to pick me up. He took me home by foot, in the way I told him all the things I did at school
When we arrived home we found out with a surprise mom had for us
-Hello- I heard the voice of a boy bigger than me…
END SONIC POV
And that was it!
Shadow: Are you serious?
Me: Yeah. Why?
Sonic: You made me blind!
Me: Yeah, sorry about that
Shadow:And what about me? I'm faker's brother now!
Me: Aw Shadow, Come on it couldn't be that bad
Sonic: See? She isn't mean like you (hugs me)
Silver: And when am I going to appear?
Me: Silver don't make sunch a drama
Silver: Me? Make a drama? How could you think of me like that?
Sonic, Shadow & me: -.-U
Please R&R :)
I also want to thank Redemerald6 for letting me use a little of her story
And if you don't understand something, please go easy on me. I'm from Mexico. Please help me to improve so you can enjoy my stories better
Thank you See ya!
Soniclover3