Author's note:
This is my first ever fanfic, so yeah, be nice to me, ok? I know I'm not as good as the ones who post their stories here, but I do try my best every now and then. This is also my first time to write something icky, so don't be that harsh with your comments.
In my fic Yoh won the shaman tournament and three years had already passed. Hao and his loyal companions, on the other hand, changed their ways and are now kind and friendly, or so they think… haha, just kidding, or am I?
Anyway, read and please tell me anything you want to say. Comments, insults, praises, suggestions, or whatever are always accepted and highly appreciated.
Thanks.
p.s. I do not own Shaman king, but if I did, I'll kill Iron Maiden Jeane. Haha, some wish I have, but seriously I'll kill her!
And now, I present to you chapter one of first ever story.
Cheers!
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Chapter one:
What history books forgot…
1000 years or so ago…
"Make way!" Their voices shouted out loud. "Make way! Master Asakura is coming through!" They warned again. Loyal followers pushed aside the excited crowd so that their great master could pass easily.
The crowd on the other hand didn't care what the followers were raving about. One thing mattered to them now, to see the Great Asakura. Who wouldn't? The Great Hao Asakura was known all through out the land as the greatest shaman that ever lived. Everyone wants to see him, everyone wants to touch him, and everyone wants to be like him.
Except one…
Dressed in her white kimono with pink petals as design, the youngest child and the only daughter of the Sawamura clan, Hana Sawamura, didn't care, nor was she interested.
The Sawamura clan got well with the Asakura's and so with the Kyoyama's. They, the 3 chiefs of the said clans, treated each other like family, making life during that time peaceful and happy. Each of Sawamura's sons was married to the daughters of the Kyoyama or the Asakura's. By doing so it made the tribes closer and more harmonious than ever.
Hana on the other hand, had a different perspective about the things around her. She was arranged to be married to the Great Hao Asakura even though the gap between their ages was really high. Hao was at his near 30s and Hana on the other hand just turned 17.
"Good morning, Shaman Hao." Hana's father, Kazuki, said as he opens his arms to his soon to be son-in-law. "I'm glad that you could come and visit us. Please come in, come in."
Today was Hao's first visit to the Sawamura territory and so far, he's impressed by the beauty and elegance on the Sawamura palace. Hao also hasn't seen her future bride, but from what he hears, he hopes he won't get disappointed.
Hao sat down on the cushion when Kazuki gestured him as the servants serve their newly brewed tea. Kazuki observes every gesture Hao makes, from the moment he entered, up until he bowed and thank the servant for the tea.
"Thank you for welcoming me into your home, Sawamura-san" Hao said as he finished his tea and bowed slightly.
"No need for that. You're a part of our family now." Kazuki said smiling at Hao. He's really glad that Hao agreed to marry her daughter. By doing so, this ensures the family's safety and prosperity. "I know you would like to meet your future bride, so please, do so. She's outside in the garden waiting for you."
Hao bowed once again and left the room and went out to the back garden of the Sawamura palace. He walked silently following the servant to the garden.
Hana, on the other hand, was sitting peacefully at the swing her brother made. The servant was about to announce Hao's presence when he stopped her and asked her to leave them alone. Hao walked stealthily towards Hana as he took his present out, a ring with the Asakura markings on them, a symbol to all the member of the Asakura family. But before he gave the ring, he handed Hana a flower.
"The flower's beauty is no comparison to yours, my darling Hana." He said as he placed the flower on Hana's lap.
She was of course surprised by it but she immediately concealed her reaction. She looked up to see who the giver was and smiled as she saw that it was the Great Hao Asakura. She wasn't expecting Hao to look like this, she was expecting him to be a little old, but he wasn't. Hao looked like he just turned 20. His eyes were beautifully black, his nose perfect, and his lips thin and have a sweet smile, his skin flawless and healthy.
Hana stood up and bowed as she said "Thank you for the flower, Asakura-san." Asakura smiled back as he took in her face. Her eyes blue and deep as the ocean, her nose perfect with a tip that's begging to be kiss, her lips full and pink-ish and always have this small amuse smile that suggest a nice personality, her skin flawless and pale like porcelain, and her voice, so beautiful and calm that even angels would be put to shame.
"Rumors are true." Hao said. "Your beauty really is second to none." Hearing this Hana bowed her head slightly trying to hide her now reddening face. "Arigato." Was all Hana could say to her sweet lover.
Hao got took the ring out and said. "Please, my lady, accept this ring and be forever a part of the Asakura." This was his wedding proposal, lame, but Hana wasn't expecting too much. Hana of course was still surprised, and just nodded for her reply. He smiled seeing that his future wife is as shy as she can be. He took her hand and places the ring on her ring finger, a perfect fit.
Hao hugged her bride and kissed her on her forehead. "Arigato." He whispered to her ear. They stayed like that wanting nothing but to be within one another's arm. They were happy, even the history books would say so, but no one knew what happened after that, what happened to them, why Hana and the rest of the Sawamura clan vanished 2 years later, and why Hao married again.
Present day… 3 years after the Shaman tournament…
"Here we are, miss. Are you sure this is the place." The cab driver said as they stopped in front an old house. The young lady peered out of the window and looked at the old house. "Yes, I'm sure this is the house." She said in a dreamy voice, her kindness very evident. The girl paid the fee, took her baggage out and pushed the doorbell as the taxi left.
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What will happen next? Hmmmm…let me think. Just read the next chapter to find out. Haha! If you have any ideas or thoughts on how you want the story to happen then please don't hesitate to tell me. You may never know, I might use your idea.
Anyway, it's suckish and short, I know, but please tell me what you think.
Please and thanks a bunch!
R&R!!
