My Immortal Spelling and Grammer Mistakes Fixed

by gothgirl865

This is the Google dubbed "Worst Fanfic Ever" I fixed spelling and grammar so it's actually English. Tells the story of goth Mary-Sue Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way, and how she utterly destroys canon by making it goth and emo.

1. Chapter 1

My Immortal – Grammar and Spelling Fixed. Can't Say Anything About the Awful Plot Though.

By Tara Gilesbie

Edited by Zoe aka gothgirl865

Disclaimer: I don't own Harry Potter, J.K. Rowling does, and I certainly don't own any of the characters in My Immortal that you recognize or not. Chances are, if you don't recognize something, it belongs to Tara Gilesbie. Everything from this point on is Tara Gilesbie's words, not mine.

Chapter 1

AN: Special fangz *thanks* (get it, because I'm gothic) to my girlfriend (ew, not in that way) Raven, bloodytearz666 for helping me with the story and spelling. You rock! Justin, you're the love of my depressing life. You rock too! MCR ROX!

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Hi, my name is Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way, and I have long ebony black hair (that's how I got my name) with purple streaks and red tips that reaches my mid-back. I have icy blue eyes like limpid tears, and a lot of people tll me I look like Amy Lee. (AN: If you don't know who she is, gt the hell out of here!) I'm not related to Gerard Way but I wish I was because he's a major fucking hottie. I'm a vampire, but my teeth are straight and white. I have pale white skin. I'm also a witch, and I go to a magic school called Hogwarts, which is in England, where I'm in the seventh year. (I'm seventeen.) I'm a goth (in case you couldn't tell) and I wear mostly black. I love Hot Topic and I but all my clothes from there. For example, today I was wearing a black corset with matching lace around it, a black leather miniskirt, pink fishnets and black combat boots. I was wearing black lipstick, white foundation, black eyeliner and red eyeshadow. I was walking on the Hogwarts grounds. It was snowing and raining, so there was no sun, which I was very happy about. A lot of preps were staring at me. I stuck up my middle finger at them.

"Hey Ebony!" shouted a voice. I looked up. It was ... Draco Malfoy!

"What's up Draco?" I asked.

"Nothing," he said shyly.

But then, I heard my friends call me and I had to leave.

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AN: Is it good? Please tell me, fangz.

Zoe's AN: Yup, this is the first chapter. Let me know what you think. Good bad or indifferent. Flames will be used to heat my shower as the pipes in my cheap apartment are freezing.