Naruto gets some car faxes
My first story that took me five minutes to make, so if it sucks... who gives a shit now to the story
Naruto was looking at some cars when a car sales man comes up saying "hello sir I see your looking at this van", naruto just keeps looking at the car like a total badass and says "yea so how much for it".
"200,000 dollars", the sales men said. Naruto just looks at him while thinking "hmm bullshit"
"Show me the car fax" said someone behind naruto. "Yea show me the car fax", naruto said. "ahh it has great seats and stuff said"' the guy trying and failing to get naruto to forget about the car fax. "Show me the car fax" naruto said, a little annoyed. "Car fax can save you thousands of dollars when buying a car" explained the person behind naruto.
"Fine sir I'll show you the car fax" said the sales men finally giving in. after everything was said and done naruto went to look behind him to thank the guy that helped him" hey thanks for the hel... aaa where did he go?" he said scratching his head "down here" said something that looked like a CG fox.
Naruto just looks at it for a few minutes and then yells "HOLY SHIT WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU" "I'm a... he didn't get a chance to finish as naruto kicked him through a wall. 'w why did you do that' he said weakly as naruto started to make a rasengan in his hand "because your freaking me the fuck out!" with that said naruto slammed the rasengan into the foxes got and sent it flying through the walls of the building and getting covered in debris. Assuming it was dead, naruto left in his new van never noticing the CG hand that punched its way out of the ruble; after it pulled itself out of the ruble its eyes shown red from anger "yes drive away and never know that I am coming for you"
This is my first story I made it because I wanted to get into the writing business. Now I know there are a lot and I mean a lot of mistakes but if you would be kind enough to tell me what they are and then show me what it should be like I think we'll get along nicely. The car fox will be in other stories of mine as comic relief once I get good enough to make bigger and better stories. I'm going to start out with small stories to get the hang of it.