My first Naruto story! I'm using my own character for this one, but don't worry all of the others are in here too

Please send reveiws to inform me about any grammer or spelling mistakes and to tell me how it was.

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Chapter I

"Hn...?" there was nothing. No sunlight, no noise, no nothing. Just darkness and complete and utter silence. "Where am I?"

No one answered her, the young girl just stood there confused and scared. "I want to go home!" the girl whimpered grasping her head.

"You are the key." a voice echoed. It sounded like a young man's. From the mixture of the low bass and tenorish tones in his voice he was probably somewhere around the age of eighteen and nineteen.

The girl looked up, still grasping her aching head, "Who are you?" she asked. A pair of red eyes appeared, they were examening her.

"Yes, you are, in fact, the key to what I seek."

"Who are you!?" she asked again, "Answer me now!" instead of answering the eyes disappeared.

'That figures! It never works in the movies, so why should it work here?'

Just then something grabbed her wrist and spun her around. For the first time she was able to get a look at the person who was haunting her.

All she could really see was the shadows that had enguled him, but she could still make out some physical charateristics. He farely tall, but it was hard to determine his true height due to the fact that he was wearing something long over his body, maybe a cloak of some kind. Also she could tell his hair was pretty long from what she could see over the top part of his cloak. What scared her the most was the fact that his deadly red eyes were looking right at her. Almost like they were looking deep into her soul.

The man that placed a kunai knife against her throat forcing her to back up into a tree or a wall. Groaning in pain, tears now streaming down her cheeks, the girl managed to mutter, "What do you want?"

He brung his face close to hers so they could look into each others eyes. His eyes were like oceans of blood, cold and cruel. And there was something else, something that scared the girl even more... malice. Fear strucken she could do nothing but helplessly stand there and allow the man to dig the kunai even farther into her throat for trying to break away. Bringing his mouth right next to her ear so she could feel his hot breath on her skin, he coldly whispered, "I want you Tinnara..."

Tinnara quickly sat up in her warm, comfortable bed not the dark, cold place she had just come from. Her face was drenched in sweat and her eyes were wide with fear, almost as if she had just seen a ghost. She wasn't sure if it was a ghost or not but she could tell that it was not good and that something bad was going to happen.

She got up from her bed and walked over to her curtains. Light was leaking through so it was obviously late morning, early noon. Tinnara grabbed the corse fabric and pulled it to the side letting the light in. She shaded her face with her and and took a good look outside. The people of the busiling ninja village of Konoha. People greeted one another with smiles and waves of the hand.

'I guess it's time to go meet Kakashi sensei for our private lesson today.' She smiled walking away from the window to her tall cherry wood armoire. Lately she had been having alot of trouble controlling her chakura and that's what the lesson was supposed to help with.

Upon reaching the closet sized dresser she opened the doors. Out of nowhere Naruto jumps out. Surprised by Naruto's sudden appearence Tinnara stumbled and fell backwards landing on her soft carpeted floor.

"Hey Tinnara-chan!" Naruto shouted while crouching over the shocked Tinnara. He had his usual goofy grin plastered acrossed his face.

"You knuckle head." She laughed. Tinnara got back on her feet glabbed Naruto by the neck and started to noogy him.

"Hahaha, quit Tinnara-chan!" Naruto laughed. Tinnara complide and let go still laughing a little.

"You are such a dork Naruto!" She said playfully punching the yellow haired boy in the arm.

"Hehehe." was all Konoha's number one knuckle head ninja could say in response.

"Hey Naruto do you know what time it is?" Tinnara asked curiously. Naruto had to think for a second before he replied,

"Yeah when I asked you Mom earlier she said it was about a quarter to twelve." Tinnara's eyes widened with horror.

"Are you serious!? I was supposed to meet Kakashi sensei at eleven-thrity! Oh my god I am so dead!" She ran franticly to her her and pulled out her pink tank top, black skirt and shorts. Quickly taking her pajama's off and changing into her casual wear she ran quickly ran out the door leaving a puzzled Naruto alone in her room.

"Women." Naruto shrugged.

Tinnara ran like she had never had before. Some of her friends waved at her as she passed, she had no time for hellos at the moment. All of a sudden she trips and falls face first into the ground. 'Ah crap! That is so going to leave a stain.'

Suddenly she felt a strong hand wrap aound her arm and help her up.

"A little early for rushing isn't, you loser." She reconized that cocky monotone voice immediately. She quickly turned to see herself face to face with Sasuke Uchiha. His hard, cold onix eyes peered into hers with so much intensity it was like he was looking right through her.

"Sasuke I have no time for you at the moment! I have to go meet Kakashi sensei in the forest right now!" She yelled pulling her arm out of Sasuke's grasp. She had started to run again when Sasuke tripped her. "Sasuke knock it off! If you can't tell I'm in a bit of a hurry here!"

"Hmph." Sasuke just smirked at her annoyed expression. "Your no fun Tinnara."

"Yeah whatever I got to go! I'll see ya Sasuke!" She took off as fast as she could dodging the traffic jam of people coming her way. The village was always so crowded this time of day, it didn't really help her situation all that much. She usually wasn't one to rush, actually she was kind of like Shikamaru in her belief that you should never rush but instead take your time and enjoy it. Today was different though, she had an important training session with Kakashi! And she was late! She was never late! Kakashi was going to kill her! 'Damn it!' she thought.

Once she reached the edge of the forest she was already sweating heavily from the mile run she had to do dodging and ignoring confused bystanders. Panting hard Tinnara found a tree and leaned against it and tried to relax.

"Well hello Tinnara. Nice day isn't it." the calm, cool voice echoed through the dead silent forest. She immediately opened her eyes to she her sensei couching down in front of her smiling.

Tinnara slightly blushed because it was a little embaressing letting her sensei see her in this condition. "Oh hi Kakashi sensei. I'm sorry I'm late." She stood up brushing the dirt off of her clothes.

"Heh heh, it's okay," He grinned, "I just got here too." Apon hearing this Tinnara became very irritated.

"You just got here... You just got her!" She yelled. Fist clenched and face red, she began to run towards her sensei. "I got all worried and ran my butt over here just to find out that I wasn't late at all!?"

"Tinnara calm down I have a very good reason why I was late." Kakashi said dodging Tinnara's punch.

"It better be good." She said, her eye twitching with annoance.

"Don't worry I promise." He straitened himself out. "Well first let me just show you why I was late." He turned around and said, "You may come out now."

Tinnara raised her eye brow becaused for a few seconds nothing happened than after about five more seconds a figure stepped out from behind a tree.

"Hi, un..."

To be Continued...