This is my first story feedback would be much appreciated. So tell me what you think.
It was a relatively cold January morning when I, Jack Frost, guardian of fun arrived at the pole. There was a guardian meeting today and I was late.
Uggg~ I grunted as I face planted in to the nearest couch. All I wanted to do was sleep for a few lousy minuets. But no, life just loved to screw with me.
"Oi frost your late!" the irate sound of bunny's voice reverberated around the sitting room where we had resigned to use for meetings.
"Uhhg- kangaroo I am not in the mood. I am really tired." I ground out and truly I was, I just flew from the Andes to the tops of MT Kilimanjaro to spread snow to ALL the mountain tops. Then I had to fly from Russia to Canada to give it a proper snow fall. Not to mention Alaska.
"Ha. What tuckered from havin' snow ball fights all day." Bunny laughed and that was it, the final straw.
I sat up and glared at him, hard internally wishing him to freeze so I could sleep "Shut up' I said in a low tone obviously startling him. I was just too tired, and a tired jack is an angry jack "My job is NOT ALL snow balls and fun times." I said unknowingly mocking myself. Bunny shook his shock and fixed me with a smug look.
"Ha I bet I could do your job in half the time you do." He said. What he said gave me an idea, I smirked. Oh this was going to be FUN!
I saw the look on frostbites face and (while it would take the best interrogator around to admit it) it made me a little uneasy.
"Fine kangaroo, if you're so sure, I dare you to do my job for an entire month. If it's so easy you should be done in no time." He said with a wicked grin. It made shivers go up my spine. But I didn't let my nerves show.
"Ha, deal but WHEN I win what will I get?" I asked already firm in my belief that I could win this with my eyes closed despite the air of foreboding rising in my gut.
Jack seemed to consider that for a moment. "The looser is the slave for the winner for an entire month. How's that?" He asked in a faux chipper tongue.
"You got yourself a deal frosty. What are the rules?" jack laughed "I will give you a calendar with things you have to do each day. I will also give you 1 day a week to sleep and relax, but you have to do everything for that day." I smirked "Deal."As we shook hands I felt myself go still. All my joints locking in pain. Faintly I recognized the others gasping behind me. Then as suddenly as it started it stopped.
Gasping for breath I kneeled on the ground and heard frost say "Welcome to winter bunny."
"Wha- what did ya do?"
"Well, why don't you look and see." I did and I was startled to find myself covered in pure snow white fur instead of the normal blue-gray. My fur was thicker and longer with the new under coat I grew.
"Frost what have ya done to me!"
"Ha, simple I gave you some of my powers. Didn't you say you could do my job? I just gave you the tools needed to do it. Or are you having second thoughts?" I could hear the condescending tone and I was not about to allow this little upstart to ridicule me.
Getting up and looking him strait in the eye I said "Well than thanks frost, this should make it easier than." There was still a look in his eyes that said this wasn't over. I was about to comment further when I felt something ram into me.
"OHHHHH bunny you look amazing. Your fur is softer and OHH you teeth are so white, almost as white as jacks." Tooth rambled as she poked and prodded my mouth.
"Hahaha. Tooth fingers out of mouth. Let him speak." North said from behind me picking me up bodily off the floor and placing me on my feet. "But tooth right old friend, you look good. Very wintry." Sandy floated in front of me sporting two thumbs up.
I waved them off "Ok frost so now what?" I asked, jack yawned "Now I am going to sleep, we'll start in the morning. Rest up bunny, you'll need it." He said smirking.
I couldn't help the shiver of nervousness that ran down my spine.
Ok so this is my first story EVER so please be nice. I will not be updating until next week at the most so please be patient with me. As I said before feedback would be greatly appreciated so please tell me what you think.
